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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#431

4 being late dear..😭🤔😒...

but ur all updates r

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4 pming me dear.. keep pm me dear..😃

lots of 4 ur hard work dear.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.

again ...update asap..didn't stop writting...all of us lov ur Ffs😳

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imaastha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

Plz update...hun...missin ol ur updates...plzzz :-(...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

When are u going to update Safi...I just love ur FFs and please update SISKI also.

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shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

That was awesome..really loved 👏

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-LOVE-Arshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

missed out so many good ff

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Keya ur superb writer and i am loving this FF

it's incredible...awww maan is getting attracted to his wife

keep writing 👏👏

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#437

First of all I'm loving the concept of gulaals base story into your ff as it's something different anyways back to the update haha maan in every moment he finds wants to claim geet as his wife and ooh his feelings are now developing and awe poor geet confused at maans anger causing her to scold him all the time I hope maan does try to talk it out with and awe talli the image of maan as her husband was put in since childhood so I do feel for her anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

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plz plz pretty plz update Siski too

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

KOSH/Aagosh
part 8

sorry short one...
lol
me was busy...
hopefully siski will be a long one
xxx

Ride home was a complete silent where geets grip on maan had a great effect. He tried his best to concentrate in another object which seems to go in vain. He kept looking at her through the mirror. Geet is lost in her own world. Barely caring about maan or what type of feeling was rising within in him for her. She cared less.
Geet "itni dhiry ku chala rahi hi! Jaldi chala na! Mujce ghar pe bohot kam hi!"
Maan "to me ka karu! Agar ae jaldi nahi jate!"
Geet "tujce to bath karni bhi bekar hi!"
Maan "to tu bath ku karti hi!"
Geet "tujce ho ko gya! Her bath me narazgi!"
Maan "if you talk like that! How could I! You can see the towns terrific!"
Geet "then take the country road!"
Maan "it will take us time." which gave maan another idea. He have no intention to go home early. He decide to take the country road.

It was near stream road. & geet loved open land. Somewhere maan knew that well to. Maybe that's why, his unconscious brain always plays trick on him when eve geet is round. Like it's destine. A feeling of her having in his aggosh. He looks at geet again. She seems to be lost in the beauty of the river. Maan knew well she won't say a word but he could do something. He stops near the lake.

Geet "ahea ku ruka?"
Maan "do you have to ask question every-time! Can't you see the bike have gone very hot!" he hands her a galone! "now fetch some water." geet looks at him angrily. Snaps the gallon & walks off.
Maan "make sure it's full!"

Geet "kitni batamiz ho gya! Baro ko hukum deta hi!"
Maan "me bahera nahi hu!"
Geet "if you are not bahera! Why couldn't you do this!"

Geet did like water but she knew not how to swim. The stream is very deep along with a high tight. She left shaken. She slowly gradually moves to fill the gallon & then suddenly...

Maan who was fixing the bike, only hard a noise. He turns round. No geet. Then looks back to his bike again, he suddenly realize no geet. He quickly ran near the stream only to find geet can't swim. His heart thumped madly. It's a sudden shock. He felt like loosing someone. Without thinking he jumped in as well. Geet already drowned. He managed to get a tight grip around her waist & brought her close. Swimming back to the edge. Geet fainted. Maan panicked. He could not think what exactly to do. She have drank too much water. He pressed both of his hand on her stomach... The water came out of her mouth but yet she was unconscious. He tiled her head & breathed in her with lip to lip... & that seems to do the trick. Geet coughed as the rest of the water came. She was breathing hard now. Trying to recapture her oxygen. Maan instantly held her tight in him embrace. Hugging her. He couldn't express how worried he was.
Maan "geet!" she still was half unconscious failing to realize what type of embrace she was in. There was worry, love. Maan felt like a pixel of his heart was about to die & so was he. If something happened to her this moment! Only god knows hat he have done. Maybe kill him self as well... Because in no cost he was losing her.
Geets eyes was still contentious. She opened & closed her eyes.
Maan brushed all her hair back. Patting her cheek. "geet! Tu bath kar mujce. Geet!" there was tint of smile of assurance that she is fine, even in that situation she could acknowledge his worry.
Geet "I am f..."
Maan "nahi! Tu tile nahi hi!"
Geet "no I..." geet faints...

After few minute she Gaines her life back. Maan made her sit at the front. She relaxed her head on his chest. Trying her best to hold him tight. As he drove fast as he could home.

Everyone ran out.
Talli "geet ko ka hua?"
Maan "au nadi me gir gya!"
Avantika "she does not know how to swim!!!!"

Maan cursed him self. Everyone knew the truth. How couldn't he! How could he be so careless!!!
he observed everyone as they take geet inside. he flows. worried that he failed to realize what geet means to him. he wanted to just stay in front of her. & observe her. make sure she is safe. really safe.
Dr came in. geet was in this situation for him how could he. he felt the needle again. pricking his heart.
maan "youu will be alright. i won't let anything happen to you. you will be alright."

next- maan nursing geet..😲
thanks for all the love & support.. pls
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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#440

yayy me first🥳
lovely update
Awww maan took the longer route cuz he wanted 2 stay wiv geet longer
Loved how you describe the emotions that wer tuning through maan wen geets life was in danger
Love the precap--can't w8 for maaneet moments
Cont soon Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago

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