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Posted: 14 years ago


THANKS FOR all the love & support...
me updating :D
loved reading all the comments...
Updating this also😆
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keya baby u updating !!!!! thank u i lub u...🤗
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Awesome updates
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... KOSH//Aaghosh...
English meaning- cocoon... trapped in his/her embrace...


PART 6



As they arrived after 4 hours... They were greeted by all anis mika. The house looked like a palse. Very rich. Geet was happy with this proposal. It was a aranged marriage. All Amis needs should be satisfied here. Few guards came in to take the shagun. The elder came out to great them in. Maan smiles along with dushant!

Anis father in law- vikeam.
Anis mother in law- tanu.
Anis husband - mohes.
Anis sister in law- mina.

Vikram "I hope your journey was alright."
Geet "it was very good. Thank you."
Dushant "very good!"

Maan & talli sat at the back like a kid! Not exactly sure how to behave & what to say! Mina who already seems to be impressed with maans look. Handsome dashing. He did not were typical cloths like any other... He wore towns cloths. Looked modern.
Everybody from anis mika thought geet & dushant husband & wife. They have never seen talli or maan. Vikeram waits for them to be introduced.
Dushant "oh... This is my cousine. My younger brother. Everyone favorite maan." that was enough for mina. She runs way instantly... "& this is talli."
Geet smiles. Trying to keep a happy atmosphere.

Tanu "Aur ap!" she points at geet. They knew she was the badi bhu!... But ani wad maans sister! They were from the elder house! Then how is geet the badi bhu if she is married to dushant!
Geet was about to speak when maan speaks out.
Maan "she is my wife!" whole rooms atmosphere changed. A sudden tension took over. Geet felt ashamed! Who have told him to speak! Geet gives maan a glare to shut up!
Geet "yes! I am mrs maan khurana! After my husband passed way we had to do this! In order to protect our house mariada!" dushant looked way..."but it's nothing like that! We just husband & wife in front of the society!"
Anis mika smile. They knew well how prestigious khurana khansan are. They were lucky to have there daughter as there bhue.

After there lunch & the had a good look around the Havely while mina just couldn't remove her eyes from maan. Talli darters to get frustrated & kept pulling geet like a child for help. While maan was lost in his wife...

Geet "tu Aur talli... Go & see the garden! You might get bored with our talk!"
Maan "isn't that wife & husbands duty... Not with devar!" he taunt dushant with his word. Dushant could feel the disgust! Killing his own brothers guilt was there & now maan! He did not want to Intafier in any of his decision.
Dushant "actually... Talli tu ah meri sath! I want to see the garden." geet could see dushants awkwardness. She smiles at everyone els... & then looks at maan!
Geet "tu ah meri sath! I will see everyone els later on!"

Geet just couldn't belive how rude & childish maan is! Now she started to understand why exactly he came at the first place. Just to humiliate her! Nothing els.

Geet "now ask question! The man of the house should ask everything! Now ask! You just made dushant go way! Papa is not here! Now ask!" geet gives him a glare! Of course maan was not ready for any of this! His stupid childish behavior was only making each situation wars! She did not know what hatred he possess about her! But this time he went over the board!

Geet ignores him & looks at everyone els. Asking necessary question. Maan indeed became board! He was now dreading to go home! Geet could feel his movement of uncomfortableness.
Geet "kha tha na me! Always you do what you are pleased! Sometime listen to the elders!"

Maan just got more annoyed! Wife! & talks about responsibility! Ka time aye gya mera!
Geet "now go! & send dushant in!"
Maan again lost his cool , & frowned. No way he was about to do that!
Maan "I am going to talk!" he gave a filthy look at the same time confidence like he can do everything. Geet roles her eyes... Indicating him to talk...
Maan "umm... So... Will my sister be able to come home after marriage when ever she wants to?" geet looks at him in surprised.
Geet "maan! What type of question is that? After marriage this will be her home. Of course she can come back to her mika... Only in special occasion."
Maan "well I disagree!"
Anis sasural just looked at maan in shock. They found this answering back rather rude. They were very happy with geet & her way of talking. Her manage. It satisfied & won there heart... But maan. All they could hope for the best from ani!
Vikram "nothing to worry beta! Sure she will" he answered seeing maans behavior. Rather rude he suggest. Geet smiled at them to ease the conversation .
Whole family went to the kitchen to bring foods...

Geet "what type of behavior is this maan? Tujce pata hi na ae ani ka sasural hi! Why you acting like this?"
Maan " me uski bardi bhi hu! I know better!"
Geet "I am her bhavi & older then you... I think I have more understanding. So please try to show this attitude of yours somewhere els! Not here!... Do what ever you want at home.. But not here!" geet gives maan another angry glare. His behavior was just going beyond her imagination. She couldn't understand what exactly his proble... She looks way, trying to calm her anger down then looks back what him. "tera Problem ka hi? T her waqt ku aisy behave karti hi!"
Maan "tu mera problem hi!"

Geet "agar me teri problem hu.. Tu ja ahesy.. And send dushant!"
Maan " what to see the natuanki between you two!"
Geet looks at him in disbelieve... "enough! If you think you can handel this thing! Do..." geet was about to walk way when maan holds her dupatta. It slides off her hair instantly. Showing her back. Maan couldn't remove his eyes. He was lost. He sat there like a statue... Lost in his wife beauty... Geet felt other people was walking in.. She quickly puts the dupata back on her head... & smiled at anis sasurals... Taking her old position again. Maan still was lost. His eyes wasn't moving & they forgot to blink...



next- opps.. maan😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

i will comment once i read 😛

hey i jst read ur update
loved it
geet is kinda doin ma heading
i want maan to tell geet y he so angry
Edited by sweet cherry - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome

if i was in geet place aik thapar toh banta hai to maan😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update...luvd it...
Just luvin maans character...possesive...hmmm...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the wonderful update.
I really like the way the story is going.
Tanu is smitten by Maan OMG
Tanu and Talli behind Maan and he behind Geet 😉
Geet is excellently shouldering her responsibilities
But Maan had to ruin it no 😲
He himself was going through so much confusion
No wonder he didnt know what to talk to the sasural people
Good that they understood him though.
But poor Geet problems everywhere for her
Maan instead of helping her is hurting with his confused behavior.
He needs to talk to somebody.
Hope he gets out of his confusion soon.

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