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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for an amazingly angry update ... Continue soon
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LOVED D UPDATE...WAITING FOR DERE CONFESSION TO EACH ODER...
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Me loved it . . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
thanks...🤗
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Awesome updateAwaiting the next part
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Part 4
:D double part




Geet walks down. Her loud payel made it clear it was her... Geet walks in... Maan turns round. She barely noticed him. She intently Runs towards avantika.
Geet "ma! What are you doing?"
Avantika "chup! Abhi tak kuch khia nahi!"
Geet "I wasn't hungry." she smiles...

Maan started to get irritated with the felling of ignorance from geet. He walks out dropping on of the plate making both lady jump!
Avantika "ise ka hua?"
Geet "i don't know! His behaviour so confusing now days! I just don't understand!"
Avantika "ignore him! Hopefully he grwes up soon!"
Geet "ha ma!"

One by one other lady joined the kitchen.
Bua "I think it's time to decide maan & Tallis marriage!"... It sounded more like a taunt then suggestion.
Geet stops instantly. U understanding what exactly she meant! But that did not matter to her anymore! & anyway she was angry because geet refuges to marry dushant.
Geet "I think that's a great idea... But let them enjoy there life a bit more!" avantika wasn't happy with this! Nor she wanted to approve any of this conversation.
Bua "aue toh sadi ki bath bhi ho sakta hi! Unlike some other peoples wedding!" she looked at geet. Again taunting.
Geet completely understood to avoid the conversation she took tea for arjun papa. Escaping from the kitchen.
As she walked along the corridor she beame lost in buas word. Engulfed in the sense! She bumps in to maan. He gave her a angry glare.
Geet "Ab tujce ka hua?"
Maan "tujce mathlab?"
Geet "tu her waqt itni gussy me ku rahi ti hi! Since you have came back you barely spoke to me! What's wrong with you!" geet asks annoyingly. That's true. He barely have spoken a singe word! Instead there was always some typical anger present!
Maan "toh me ka karu? Teri arti utaru!" he retired back.
Geet "tujce ho ka gay?... You are not my maan! Everything I ask you... You always Sheri your anger! Every word... Every second!... Aker mera galti ka hi?... When you were young... Your anger used to vanish within second! Per now... Ahker hua ka?... Diquat ka hi Teri?" geet nearly shouted at his rude behavior! He wasn't expressing him self & geet wasn't understanding a single thing! What is the problem! What exactly she have done! She ignores him & walks towards dads bedroom. Leaving fuming maan. He walks in & bang shutting the door. Annoyed. Angry. Distorting everything on the floor. Not understanding the plight! The confusion within him self! He him self was worried about the exact situation! In one hand geet shows all the lie... All the care. All the happines! Her happiness in bro & in another.. She is with that dushant! He was in dilemma! What to believe! Who to believe.

Later on the e day.. Geet & talli sat there. Quit. Doing some work... Cleaning all the chille. Maan comes up. Geet completely ignores... She still haven't forgotten the morning incident. His anger was not justified or clear.
Maan "tu ka karhi hi!" the question was asked to geet but he looked at talli! He somewhere knew... His attitude was grafting geet.
Geet didn't say a word. Talli answer "why? Tujce kuch dekta nahi ka!"
Maan "I am asking! Can't you answer straight forward!"
Geet "when people aren't straight forward then what's te point of giving a straight answer. Isn't that right talli!" she separates some more chilli. "ka pata... Uski bhi oh galat mathlab nikale!" geet looks at talli. Not a single look at maan... Where his gaze just froze on her... Fuming. Understanding exactly what she meant.
Maan "agar kuch log sidha na ho! Toh usme meri ka galti!"
Geet "if no one speak in straight forward language then how you expect other to understand! No one is that psychologically cleaver yet!"
Maan "then how did you understand shoria!" talli looked at maan & geet in confusion! Where did shoria bro came in! & anyway what they were talking about!
Maan wasn't sure what & why he expressed that! & nor geet understudying the hidden meaning of those words. She ignores & answered something elas.
Geet "not everyone is special enough to read one another heart!" soon as she answers him, his anger increased with a great speed. He graves Tallis hand & walks out from the side!
Talli "what are you doing? It hurts!"
Maan did not care he made talli sit on the car & he drive off! Leaving geet.

Geet "her waqt gusa! Gusa! Aur gusa! Ufh!" avantika calls her from the balconey...
Avantika "geet bea! Teri papa bola rahi hi!"
Geet "ai ma!"
Geet quickly gets up & runs off in the house! Maan dries back in... Finding geet missing from her spot.
Maan "get off!"
Talli "are! You are the one ho took me in!"
Maan "now I am telling you to get off!"
Talli "what the hel is wrong with you!"
Maan "OFF!"

Talli gets off his car. Scared... Maan droves off again... She half hatred walks in to the house!

Geet "tu kab aye? Didn't you just go with maan!" arjun & avantika looks at geet.
Arjun "where is maan?"
Talli "pata nahi baba! His attitude is so confusing!"
Arjun "din pa din... What's his exact problem!"
Geet tries to save maan "kuch nahi papa! He came back after so long! Probably gone to see all his friend! Bit angry to that we have send him to boarding!"
Arjun "well fix him quick!"


next- geet tells maan off😳😕...

thanks for all the love & support... pls do comment😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeyyy...me first...🥳...after a long time...😆

awesome update babe...loved it...👏

ye bua ki kya problem hai...😡...apne kaam se kaam rakho...tunko itni jaldi kyun hai??

uff...ye maan n uska gussa......kisi din musibat ban jaayega...already ban gaya hai actually...

feel really bad for talli...she loves maan n the way he treats her...😡...uski kya galti hai...

maan himself is confused...n making other persons at home also confused.....n y did he bring shoria into the convo...??? he knew it wud hurt her...

hoping sab jaldi se accha ho jaaye...update soon...
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part...😳
ufff Maan ka gussa...babaji madad karein...😆
waiting for the next part 😆
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Me solooking Howard to the next part... Usually maan is the lead now geet :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
H8 that bua alwaiiz taunting geet just 4 not marrying that dushant
Maan is so angry glad dat geet is finally going 2 tell him off
Cont soon Xx...

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