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Me waiting dear 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Originally posted by: -memorable-

hey whats with the AAGHOSH😕 is it a sub title..


Aaghosh is the urdu / hindi for Cocoon 😊
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wer r u? r u gng to update?..................waitng....................
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Originally posted by: sindu555


Aaghosh is the urdu / hindi for Cocoon 😊

ya i know thats why i ask bcz title is ''KOSH'' & she updated titled adding aaghosh so i wondered if it was a new ff naming aaghosh 😉
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she is
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what happened the the ud keya!!!!
i was so looking forward to read it before night comes :(
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...... KOSH//Aaghosh......
English meaning- cocoon... trapped in his/her embrace...


PART 2





Geet closes the door! Maan knocks! It was weird! Geet thought. No one knocks on her doer! Specially this time! She opens. Only to find maan.
Geet "tu?"
Maan "tu ne khana nahi khaiya!"
Geet looks at him confusingly. "tu abhi tak soia nahi? It's 11pm! You & tali have to go to the temple twomoro!"
Maan "tune khana ku nahi khiya?"
Geet "tu ja! I will eat it twomoro!" geet was about to close the door but maan stops with one hand.
Maan "mane kha Ab!"
Geet "what's wrong with you! Tu ja na! It's late night. I have to wake up early!.... Her waqt tu bacho jasi harqut ku karti hi?"
Maan "are you coming or shall I bring the food up!"
Geet "tu ja na!" maan holds her hand tightly & pulls her out. Taking her down along the stair! His walking speed was first! Geet realized this is not her small maan anymore. His grip was digging in her arm. She had to run to keep in his pace. Her payel it echoed through out the haveli... Geet was terrified. Did it wake anyone up?

Maan "just stand there!" geet looked at him in confusion! In one moment he will be angry & another there will be care... Was this is her young maan? That small maan! Geet looked at him. Curious. He makes her sit down & tries to feed her! But geet stops him!
Geet "I will eat!"
Maan "why? Are there any refuge if I feed you!"
Geet "na! Na! It's just I can eat my self!" geet gives him a uncomfortable smile & eats the food soon as possible! He was only making her confused with each passing second!

Next morning... Talli ran to maans room only to find him sleeping like a pig. She tries to wake him up but in vain... It didn't work... She looks round. Found a jug of water! She smirks & pours all on him! Maan jumps up... With fury. He looks at talli instantly! What the hel was she thinking? Talli started to giggle. Maan looks at her angrily! Then shouts in fury "GET OUT!" talli jumps of seeing this new maan! This is not his best friend at all! This is not that maan!

Talli runs out in tears. Geet stood there. Watching. After last night she her self was having hard time to understand this maan! She was confused!

Geet "what'd wrong with you? She always used to do this! You never!"
Maan "Teri lecture Ab khatam ho gyi?" he spoke in rude maner! Geet was shocked. What was he thinking! Talking to her like that! Was this the same maan who never spoke a single word infront of her! & now! This rude..
Geet "maan! Tujce ka hua?"
Maan "just get lost!" geet jumps with his sudden rudeness! She walks off in shock.

Maan gets ready & walks off without having breakfast. Geet looks at him. Both exchange a quick glare then disappears again.

Geet walks in. Only to here the bua taunting about there marriage.
Bua "that's what happens when husband is younger then wife!" talli feels hurt again & runs way!
Everyone gives bua a angry glare...

It was 11pm. Maan haven't return all day. Geet waited patiently. She wasn't approving this but As it's his first day return maybe he wanted to see some of his friends! Geet waited at the roof top. Maan drives in. He does realise that geet was gazing upon him. Disliking his lateness at home.

Geet "time dekha!"
Maan "ha to!"
Geet "baba & ma was waiting for you."
Maan "I wasn't here for past 10 years! I am sure they did not wait for me then! Then why special care today?"
Geet "tu ae kasi faltu bath bol tihi! You know very well how much we all love & care for you! Now get freshen up. I will warm all the food!" maan completely ignores her words & walks way!

Dushant observes geet & her worrying face. It was true he still had attraction towards geet maybe that's the reason he always refuged to merry! But now... What's geets future! Maan was not him self! He barely know him self! He barely capable of understanding the world! Geet who never looked at him in a way where a wife looks up to a husband.
Geet makes a confusing face & makes her way towards kitchen. Dushant walks in.
Dushant "is everything alright?"
Geet "ha! Everything is fine! It's maan! Kuch khaia nahi abi tak! To me!" dushant smiles. Maan walks in. Shoving one of the sleeve up on his arm. He didn't like his presence. He looks at geet with a angry glare then dushant!

Dushant "kachi hi tu?" maan had no intention to answer him but seeing geet "I am ok!"
Dushant "kal subha utna! I have so much to show you about te factory!"
Maan roles his eyes and looks the other way... "kal subha dekh lange! Ap me kuch kha lu!"
Dushant smiles & nodes!
Geet serves the food. Maan dare not look at her! He was angry at the same time he did respect her! The fear as he had & the respect it was still there but the anger... It was too strong...

Geet "aj ... Where dis you go? Have you met any of your old friends?"
Maan "tujce matlab?"
Geet "nahi! I am just wondering!"
Maan "I am here to eat!"
Geet just looks at him! Shocked! Again! Every word there was ruddiness. Every words he just taunted her! Whats wrong with him?






SISKI have been reopened... :D xxx

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

his way too

rude to geet
he care about her
but the anger to
strong to be control
the precap sounds
interesting
love it
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
thank so muchhhhhhhh
when yu gonner update siski
sweety
congrats once again
me every happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
i want geet to kno y maan angry wit her
do continue
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update ur other ff
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Posted: 14 years ago

grt going sweety

msk in angry style

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