with love...maan (ss) part 32 updated pg 145 - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 23

maan: kya tumhe ab bhi lagtha hey ki yeh sab attraction hey? (with a pain in voice)

Till then the smile which was playing on geet lips suddenly disappeared...she remained silent...

maan took geet's hand and kept it near his heart...

maan: bolo geet...mere sawaal ka jawab dho...(looking into geet's eyes)

geet kept looking into maan's eyes without saying a word...tears started to flow from her eyes..

maan kissed away geet's tears...took her in his arms...came inside the house...geet was still looking into maan's eyes...without resisting...as if she was under some spell...

maan took her to his room...made her to lie on the bed...she was still lost in his eyes...not saying a word...

maan started to leave from the room...he took slowly his hand from geet...that moment geet felt as if she was dying...as if she was falling into hell...she quickly reacted...held his hand tightly...not letting him to go...maan came near geet ...sat on the bed...took geet into his embrace...geet again was lost in maan's eyes...

she was unable to voice her opinion...she herself don't know what she is feeling for maan...when she herself is not aware of her feelings...what she can say to maan...

maan looked at geet...geet fell asleep looking into maan's eyes...neither of them spoke a word ...

next morning...

geet woke up when sunrays fell on her face...she got up instantly looking at watch...it was 9 am...she turned aside...maan was not there...she got up from the bed...looked inside washroom...no sign of maan...she ran downstairs searched in kitchen and hall...no maan...she tried to call his cell phone...phone was switched off...she went back to maan's room thinking where might he had gone? she kept trying calling his phone...still switched off...geet tried to office number...but the answer from pinky was..."nahi maam sir aaj office nahi aaye"

geet: kaha gaye honge...bin bathaye...kamsekam ek phone tho karsakthe the na...

After several futile attempts of trying...to call maan...an unknown fear started to enter her heart...her hands started shivering...her eyes started crying...her heart beat increased...

She was desperate to see maan ...to be in his arms...to hug him and cry...her heart out saying...but he was not there...she searched madly all around house...almost 50 times...kept calling his phone almost continuously..

geet: maan...plz..phone utao...kaha gaye aap...ithna bhi bada saza math dijiye...ek baar mere samne aayiye...uske baad mein ek pal bar keliye bhi aapse dhur nahi rahungi...

she sat in the corner of maan's room...crying...calling maan continuously...not knowing what to do?

then she remembered what maan said..."geet jab bhi mein udaas hotha hu na...mein maa ke paas jatha hu"

geet: maa...haan..brindavan...shayad maan waha gaya hoga...mujhe waha jaana hey...maan ko dekhna hey...

she came downstairs...started shouting...nakool...nakool...ramesh...ramesh...ajay...but no one was responding...no one was there...she was alone...in that house...

geet: mujhe waha jaana hey...maan ko dekhna hey...(her tears were flowing continuously)...



she didn't bother to close the door...her brain simply stopped working...she kept running...running...nothing was bothering her...the hot sun...her bare foot burning...blood from toes...nothing...nothing is bothering her...her only desire is to see maan...she kept running like a mad person all along the roads...untill she reached brindhavan...she rushed inside...looking for maan...every where in the garden...but maan was not there...her tears got dried up...like a lifeless person she reached home...her body became numb...her heart seemed to stop any moment...her vision became blurr...she started to loose balance...at that moment she saw him...her maan standing near the door...a faint smile appeared on her face...she gathered all her energy to reach maan...she took few steps forward...she couldn't see anything...everything was black...nothing was visible to her...

she screamed...maan...maan...maan...maan...until she totally became unconscious...

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh poor geet
searching for maan...
nice part feeling sad for geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful ud
emotions well penned down
Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
but it was too short dear
so Maan played another trick on Geet to admit her ,she really loves him
well done Maan...well done
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very well drafted update, along with Geet we are also feeling the pain of realization, the untold desires...
waiting for Maan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow i like this desperateness that Geet has...plz do continue😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome
I loved the way u describe geet feelings
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet was in such a state of confusion
that she didnt voice out anything.
Maan made a correct wise decision to leave her alone
since that made her realize her feelings.
Her love dragged her to Maan
cant wait for their beautiful union.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
loved the way u describes geet's emotions
feeling sorry 4 her
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

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