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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...lovely...
cant wait for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesummm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

is the fainting part her acting so that maan can come inside the temple...ya she s really faint 😕😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the pm... and if the update is in English... IT COULD BE MORE EASIER....😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...aww poor maan...!
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
had geet really fainted
or is it a trick
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 19

maan: geet toh nahi...?

maan without a second thought rushed into the temple looking for geet...

The temple was crowded heavily...maan after entering the temple started searching geet...but as the whole place was crowded he could not found geet...suddenly he heard someone calling his name...due to heavy rush he couldn't identify the voice...he turned back to see where the voice came from...it was from geet...geet was waiting in a long queue for darshan...she stood there for almost 2 hrs...maan came near geet...

geet : maan...aap yaha?

maan: kya karu...2 ghante hogaya...but still u were not coming out...isliye mein khudh agaya...bahar kuch log keh rahey the...ki ek 18 saal ladki behosh hogaya...mujhe dar laga...tumhare baare mein soch ke...isliye yaha tak baag aya...😡

geet: ab aagaya tho...darshan saath mein karlenge...😳

maan: nahi...mein ab aur intazaar nahi karsaktha...pehle tum uss que se bahar aao...

geet: no ...jab tak mein darshan nahi karthi tab tak mein bahar nahi aaonga...

maan: teek hey...i will make arrangements for special darshan😎...ab kush...

geet got angry at maan words...😡

geet: maan hum bhagawan ke paas aaye hey...koi politician ke paas nahin...bhagwan ko dekhne keliye hum intezaar karna hey...aisa special darshan karna..in my view is a worst thing...as normal people we will go for darshan...agar aapko pasand hey...tho mere saath aayiye...nahi pasand tho chup chap waha ped ke neeche baitiye...

maan: teek hey...i will under that tree...jaldi aana...

Said thses words maan sat under the tree...

at it was summer...maan felt very uncomfortable sitting there...after completing darshan geet came out finally...

maan: uff...finally tum aagayi...ab tho chalo...

geet came near maan kept teeka on forehead...

maan: teeka tho laga dhiya...prasad kaha hey?

geet looked surprisngly at maan...

geet: aap prasad khayenge? aap yeh sab nahi manthe hey na...

maan taking prasad from hands of geet said...

maan: arey geet...mujhe bhagawaan se problem hey...prasad se nahi...infact i love to eat it..

geet smiled at maan's childishness...

maan: geet...waise ithni dher kya maanga bhagwaan se...

geet: mein nahi bathaongi...

maan: kyu?

geet: kyunki agar bathaya tho...woh kabhi bhi poora nahi hothey...

maan looked at watch...it was 1pm...

maan: geet...aaj subha breakfast bhi nahi liya...bahuth bhook lagraha hey...kamsekam aaj mujhe bukha math rakho...

geet: chaliye...ghar chaltein...

maan: no ghar...nothing...we will have lunch outside...

geet: maan...aaj aapko mere baath sunna hey na...

maan: haan...

geet: then...chalo ghar chalte hey...

maan: geet!!!!!!!!!!!

geet gave an angry glare to maan...maan silently followed...after 30 minutes maan and geet reached home...

maan was in slightly angry mode as geet refused for lunch...😡

geet: maan...😳

maan didn't say a word...he got down from jeep silently😡

geet(monologue): lagtha hey...naraaz hey mujhpe...😊

maan rushed into his room ...geet ran after him and caught hold of his hand...

geet: kya yeh sab naarazgi hey?

maan gave an angry look to geet...he snapped her hand...geet smiled...

geet again took maan's hand and pushed him to the side of wall...kept her hands on both sides of him on the wall...blocking him...

maan got shocked with sudden closeness of geet...he was not expecting this from geet...

geet: hmm...ab boliye...kyu naaraz hey aap?

maan could n't utter a single word...he was feeling like he was in heaven...

geet noticed maan's restlessness...she moved still closer making him more restless...

geet: boliye...kyu naaraz hey aap...mein lunch keliye inkaar kiya...isliye hey na...

maan was just lost in her beauty and fragrance...

geet removed her hands and turned back...maan suddenly caught hold her waist and pulled her closer...to him

maan: yeh kya hey geet...u ignited this paasion and leaving me in middle of it...

geet couldn't handle such intense words from maan...

geet: maan ...plz chodiye na...

maan: nahi geet...aaj nahi...aaj tho kuch karke hi tumhe chodunga...

geet cheeks turned pink ☺️with those words...she was enjoying each and every word..at the same time getting scared of her feeling towards maan...😲

maan with a force turned geet towards him...brought her more closer to him...

maan: bolo geet...aage badun?😳

geet stood their silent ..not at all resisting his touch...☺️

maan smirked looking at geet...his grip tightened on her...kept moving his lips close to hers until they final met...they stood their enjoying their first kiss...stopping in between for breathing...geet acceptance made maan more and more wild...

after sometime they broke from the kiss...

maan hugged geet ...

maan: thank u geet for giving me the best birthday gift in my life...

geet blushed...but still in a confusion whether she is right/wrong in agreeing for that...but for that day she forgot everything...and did what her heart said...

geet was unable to meet maan's gaze after that kiss...she was feeling very vulnerable before maan...so she tried to change the situation...

geet: maan ab lunch ka kya?

maan: geet...u r the one who denied for lunch...

geet: haan..patha hey...yelijiye aapka phone...brindhavan ko call karke unlogon se bathayiye ki ham waha arahey hey...

maan: again? but why?

geet: because we will be having our lunch there with the kids...

maan looked at geet slightly confused...😕

geet: maan..today is special day for both of us...hum tho bahar kabhi bhi jaake kha sakthe hey...lekin...bachchon se khana khane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hey...above all that...today we will have lunch in presence of maa,...

maan was touched with geet words...

maan: geet...mein tumhe patane keliye tareeka doond raha hu...lekin tum mujhko hi apne baathon se pata rahi ho...😆

geet: ab bahuth hogaya...chaliye...phone kejiye...aur delhi mein saaare oldage homes aaj lunch aap hi sponsor kejiye...

maan felt proud of his geet...as per geet suggestion he made necessary arrangements for special lunch in all oldage homes and orphanages in delhi...

after that maan and geet left for brindhavan to have their lunch there with children...

After having lunch and spending time with children...maan and geet reached home in evening...

maan: geet...bathao ab kya karna hey?😈

geet: aap fresh hoke aayiye...baad mein bathattha hu...

maan: yeah...i need to take a shower...waise geet tum bhi...tired lag rahe ho...why don't u join me.

said these words maan closed his eyes...😲

maan(monologue): oye maan...what u said...thna jaldibaazi bhi kyaa hey...ab woh kya sochegi...

geet got shocked with maan words and gave an angry glare...maan rushed to his room...

geet smiled...

geet: oh...ghar ko call karna hey...patha nahi kaise hey sab...

geet dialled brij number...her dearest brother...

brij: oye...yeh new number hey...kaun ho saktha hey...kahi meri geet to nahi...

with a lot of excitement he picked the call...

brij: hello

geet: hello veerji

brij: oye geet...meri pyaari geet(with tears in eyes)...maa...papa...daarji...dekho geet phone kiya hey...jaldi aao sab log...

geet kept her phone at a distance as brij was screaming in phone with joy...

brij: geet...kaise hey tu...teen din se yeh veerji ka yaad nahi aayi..ab bhi humpe naraaz hey...maaf karde geet apne veerji ko...tumhara phone tho kharab tha...maan ji ka number hume patha nahi tha...daadiji ka phone..bhi nahi lagraha tha...tumse baath karne keliye hume bahuth koshish ki..phir bhi nahi karpaya
ab tho humpe naaraz nahi hey na...bolo geet...

maan came down and saw geet wiping her tears while talking in phone...😲

maan: kya meri uss baath ki wajah se geet hurt hua?

maan stood there sad seeing the tears of geet...😒.

to be continued...


Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
so touched ,impressive update...
lunch with kids n arranged for all old age homes n
orphanges very nice ,brilliant birthday party with kids
loved it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is simply superb!!! she knows how to keep everyone happy (especially her Maan😆) and that was the best Bday gift she could have given😉 they are too lovely... aur jaldi likhona aage kya karne wale hai yeh love birds😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
hhhmmm NICE!!!!! 😳 CAN'T W8 TO SEE WHAT U HAVE IN STORE FOR US CRAZIES!!! KEEP ME POSTED😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww.. that was such a lovely update..
maan n geet finally kissed..
amazing update.. plz do continue!!

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