with love...maan (ss) part 32 updated pg 145

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just superb...👏
love them a lot...🤗 continue soon...

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Oops Maan's anger costed him a lot

Geet didnt knew anythg he culd hav said her that aaramse also na

Lest c wat happens aage

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Part 18

geet: mujhe ghar jaana hey (tears rolling down )...

maan stood there frozen not knowing what to do...

maan: geet..mere taraf dekho...

geet slowly turned her face towards maan...

maan: geet...mere gussa se tumhe bura laga...i know that...lekin kya karu geet...jab bhi uss insaan kho yaad kartha hu na...apne aap ko control nahi karsaktha...bahuth gussa atha hey uss par...tumhe andaaz bhi nahi hey geet usne kya kiya...

geet kept listening without a blink

maan: patha hey geet...maa papa se bahuth pyaar kartha tha...jab unke gharwalon ne shaadi keliye inkaar kiya...maa sab ko chodke...papa ke saath aagaya...maa ne uss pe ithna umeedh raka ki jo woh kehtha tha usko aise hi aankh bandh kar maanthi thi...ussne maa ka faydha utaya...maa ko cheat karna shuru kiya...jab maa ko cancer diagnose hua...tab ussne concern dikhane ki bagair...divorce manga...sathaya...akhir divorce lekar hum se door chalagaya...daadi bhi bahuth koshish ki usko samjane keliye...lekin woh yek jaanwar tha...isliye daadi ko bhi apmaan karke...chalagaya...maa bhimari se nahi...uske pyaar ki dhoke se mara hey geet...apne aakhri saans thak...usko yaad kartha raha...jab maa ka condition critical hua tha...daadi ne usko aane keliye pair bhi pakda...lekin usne mana kiya...

aaj bhi mujhe yaad hey geet woh din...jab maa papa keliye darwaaza ki taraf dekthi rahi...aise hi apna aakhri saans chod dhi...jab dadina ne yeh baath usko bathaya tab bhi woh nahi aaya...tum batao geet...aise aadhmi ko mein kaise pitha maanlu...joh aadmi jisne mere sab kuch cheena...kaise gussa na karu uspe...isliye unke naam tere zubaan pe aathe hey...mein bardash nahi karpaya...iam sorry geet...(with tears in eyes)

maan said these words and turned to other side of geet...to hide his tears...

geet slowly came near maan...hugged him from behind...

geet: iam sorry maan...really sorry

maan wiped his tears and turned around...

geet: mein bhi na maan...aise hi bachchon jaise harkathe karthi hu...aapko apne birthday pe rula dhiya...aur...

maan interrupted geet words by his finger on her lips...

maan: ab sorry bolke...uss bath ko phir yaad math dilao geet...usse aise hi jaane dho...aur mein tumhe waadha kartha hu ki kabhi bhi tum per gussa nahi dikhaonga...

geet smiled...hugging him again...

maan: ab chale...

geet: ek minute...apne kaha saza dhene keliye?

maan: tho memsaab ab mujhe saza dhegi?

geet: yes...

maan: ji...aapki marzi...waise kripa karke thoda kam sazaa dho na...kyunki..biirthday baby hu na...(with a wink)

geet: aapke iss meeti meeti baathon se saza kam nahi hone wala...

maan sighed...

geet: aur aapka sazaa yeh hey ki..aap ab se kal subah tak wahi karenge jo mein kahungi...

maan surprised...

maan: geet...yeh saza hey ya tofa...

geet got confused...

geet: saza hey...aur aap ithne kush kyu hey

maan: kush kyu na hu...isko saza kehthey hey?

geet smiled at maan words...

geet: bakwaas bandh kijiye...aapka time ab se shuru...

maan: ji boliye madam kya karna hey...

geet: ok...pehle...shopping

maan: shopping...subah 10 baje?

geet: chup...jo mein keh raha hu..aap waisa kijiye...bas

maan: teek hey...chale...

maan and geet went to shopping mall...geet entered mens showroom and forcibly took maan with her...

maan: geet...ek minute...yeh mens showroom hey...

geet: mein aapko baath karne ka izzazath nahi dhiya...bas chup chap...aayiye

maan smiled and silently followed her...geet started looking at different shirts...she was not knowing maans favourite colour...

geet:(monologue) ab kya karu...mujhe nahi patha unki fav. colour kya hey...hmmm..white...white unpe bahuth achcha lagtha hey...agar unko pasand nahi aaya tho...ek baar dikha dethi hu..aise hi pakad ke...unka facial expressions dekhthi hu...usse patha chalega na..

geet showed to maan the white shirt which she selected for him...she carefully watched maan' s face...but to her bad luck maan was not showing any expressions...she got disappointed...

geet: lagtha hey...unko yeh shirt pasand nahi aaya...ab unse hi puchna padega...

She was about to ask maan...then

maan: geet..tujhe kaise patha ki mujhe white colour pasand hey...

geet felt very happy...and thanked god for helping her...

geet: sawaal puchna bandh kijiye...aur yeh shirt pehnke aayiye...

maan with a smile took the shirt from geet and went to changing room...

maan came out...in white shirt looking like agreek god...geet stood there speechless...looking at maan without uttering a word...maan waved his hand before geet...

maan: geet...kya hua? kaisa yeh shirt mujh pe...

geet came back to senses...

geet: ek dum super...ab chaliye...

maan: ab kaha?

geet gave an angry glare to maan...maan understood and remained silent...geet paid from maans wallet and both left the shop

geet: ab chaliye...mandir...

maan: mandir?

geet: haan mandir...

maan: mein nahi aatha...mujhe vishwaas nahi hey...

geet: oh god...yeh kaise baath kar rahe hey maan...bhagwaan key baare mein aise nahi bolthe...aur waise bhi aaj apne promise kiya ki aap wahi karenge jho mein kahungi...toh chup chap chaliye...

maan knew that it is very hard to change the decision of geet...so with no option left...he took her to mandir...

maan: lo geet...hum pahunch gaye...

geet felt happy...she got down from the jeep...

geet: chaliye...

maan: geet...sirf tumhare liye mein yaha tak aaya...tum jao...mein andher nahi aasaktha...

geet: maan mein ne aapse kya kaha?

maan: jaantha hu...lekin iss bhagawan ne mujhse mere maa cheenlee...isliye mein iss pe vishwas nahi kartha...tum ko yakeen hey na...tum jao...iss keliye...double punishment loonga...teek hey na...

geet sighed...and went inside the temple giving angry glares to maan...

maan got down from jeep and was waiting for geet...

1 hour passed...still geet was in temple...maan became restless

another hour passed...

maan: 2 ghante ho chuka hey... geet ab tak nahi aayi...

then maan heard a women talking to her daughter...

women: patha nahi kaun hey woh ladki shayad 18 saal honge...behosh hogaya...koi bhi nahi hey unke saath...

after hearing these words...

maan: geet toh nahi...?

maan without a second thought rushed into the temple looking for geet...

to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago