MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 23

reet...
reply baad mein kar lena...

ppl are waiting to read ur update..........

kahin bahut der na hojaye😆...then they will pounce on u for ur update

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

all writers are evil.....seriously sadistic ppl......😆

they get so much hapiness in torturing readers........pachtaoge😆

reva

U HAVE A POINT . . . though i hope i am not included in that list of sadistic ppl . . . but u know what writers actually enjoy torturing readers especially while reading guesses n then when you see the reader thinking on absolutely wrong lines your like all grinning . . . but as a matter of fact the same writers hate to b put on the hot seat themselves . . . they hate not knowing what is gonna happen next BTW ur brith day coming right so any demands for OS . . . lemme know 😃

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

U HAVE A POINT . . . though i hope i am not included in that list of sadistic ppl . . . but u know what writers actually enjoy torturing readers especially while reading guesses n then when you see the reader thinking on absolutely wrong lines your like all grinning . . . but as a matter of fact the same writers hate to b put on the hot seat themselves . . . they hate not knowing what is gonna happen next BTW ur brith day coming right so any demands for OS . . . lemme know 😃

are u kidding .......i am not goin to be easily placated with an OS....
i am greedy..so an update of all four FFs and i think u have an OS/SS still pending...........

u must be regretting now for ur offer

hiiii reet.....

thanxxxxxxxxxx for the PM dear....

sometimes i feel so scared when u repose so much faith on me.....but a lot more elated when u believe me and consider my opinions and suggestions..........

i am so happy that u took the criticism in right sense and zipped my mouth by giving a perfect update...
it was simply flawless......with each and every detail and nuances minutely portrayed...........
well at times i feel am i being biased just because u r my friend...but then i feel...even if u wer a virtual stranger...still ur writing wud have managed to capture the special place in my heart.

u fire our imagination with such irresistible characters, unexpected plot twists, deadly secrets ... and so meticulously crafted updates

the update was without doubt perfectly captured........in words
wen i first told u that there is something missing in it ..i cant figure out what it is.....and when u sent me the same part the second time....i cud feel the magic and difference...it was like it looked complete in all respects.....and i was left wondering how did u manage to give that makeover to those excerpt of ur update..

the way ring mystery was revealed..............it paved way for yet another interesting twist ...and the dialogues that u have used are simply meant to kill....
u maintained the continuity of the updates and the flow of the story was described the maan and geet interaction with so much of controlled passion...there is no overdose of drama, or crying..........and i love moderation......and thats the key to success of ur writing

u kno whats the USP of ur update ...it is compelling and u are absolutely brilliant with ur sensuous writing..........

very few writers can make their readers sit at the edge of the seat with nailbiting encounters happening between the characters...
not a single update has gone where i have not been tense or wondered whats gonna happen next..........

i get goosebumps when i read ur ffs and the best thing even if i read it again..i am never gonna get bored of it........ur stories have got that repeat value.........which very few writers can manage to do in their writing

this ff moves fast and furious with its creative and imaginative storyline and i am expecting a journey of unexpected conclusion......

love u reet

....reva

updated on the first page ......3rd post

hiii reet...
sorry forgot to add that i want to kill the jerk named MAAN SINGH KHURANA for being rude and insensitive with geet....though he is not aware of the truth...............and his idiocy reflects his insecure nature...................

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

u made me blush with that comment at the end of ur update........
i simply cant stop grinning now.........

reva

havnt replied to ur last comment yet

hey reet change the tile of ur thread..let new readers kno that u have posted the new update on first page ....

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

havnt replied to ur last comment yet

and ur reply is ready ! u r phaaaaaast haan !

its me who is blessed with your frenship ...!!

ok did u notice the slight changes i brought even after the 2nd pm ?

yep dear...
i did...i skimmed the entire update and noticed the changes................

how can i miss them.........

reva