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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

superb parts!
loved AR moments!
loved how Anjali is protective for Ridz! she's a gr8 sis!
eagerly waiting 4 next part!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
love
Sunita

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Mind-blowing parts as usual.
I just loved them.
The first part was amazing.
I loved AR's romance soo much...
AR are so adorable..
OMG!! Anjy can be a wild cat sometimes.
I liked the way she almost scared Armaan to death...
I hope Anjy may get convinced with Armaan's love for her soon...
Rajeev is a mysterious person.
I can't understand him sometimes...
Who is her daughter and how can Ridz bring her to him?

You are a wonderful writer dear.
Plz update the next part soonest...

love ya
Asma

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2future

@2future

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Awesome parts

thanx 4 d pm

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KSGforever08

@KSGforever08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

luved the long update😃 nd sorry 4 the late reply.my bro came after 4 yrs so was busy 4 the week...

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Amazing parts!!!!

i agree with u that anjali nd ridhima's relationship was not shown well in dmg nd the way you

portray it in this ff is simply beautiful.nd i luvd the whole interaction between AR.

waiting for AR romantic parts and ofcourse rajeev's secret.

do continue soon 😊

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yasu2810

@yasu2810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

nice dr.. thanks for sharing this awesome part dr...

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yasu2810

@yasu2810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

good nice to read this part i enjoyed welll this one dr..

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Comment for part 42:

When you've read plenty of romantic stories and novels, you can easily distinguish between the varying styles writers use to write the romantic/intimate parts. It only took that A&R locker scene for me to tag you as the subtle sweet romantic writer and it was something that i recognized easily because you wrote the romantic part so well. People write intimate scenes left and right and yup the content can be "hot" but its something different all together when its written so well, so tenderly and sweetly - you did that soo well! You know you can write romance when your readers get tingly warm feelings from just a mere kiss scene ;)

you definitely did not disappoint me with the addition of Anjali's scene. I cannot admire you more as a writer for making the Anjali fan in me come out due to you writing up Anjali's character so well. Anjali was always the protective sister and a darn good one at that i'll say! This scene was actually amusing in that someone finally had Armaan wrenched speechless and scared into a corner with Anjali jabbing her finger into his chest with every word - no correction, every threat - she spat at him. I also liked that while Armaan definitely took note of Anjali's words, he also appreciated that she felt protective of Riddhima; usually boyfriends cower away and call the girl's family a freak but a real man would never fail to appreciate that someone else also feels the need to be protective of his ladylove.

This scene of Anjali reminded me of plenty of dmg scenes where Anjali had the "don't break my sister's heart" conversations but there was one in particular that i remember but i don't know if you would remember it. it was during armaan's memory loss in dmg and he accused riddhima of lying about them being married. this had angered Anjali into tears of rage and she said to him "you think my sister's tears are fake!?" i LOVED that scene and although your Anjali-Armaan scene differs in many ways (and i hope that your FF never comes to the point where Anjali needs to consult Armaan about R's heartbreak), i just had to mention that your FF has the power to bring back good memories of dmg and Anjali Gupta. I'm glad you show Anjali in the good light.

Edited by -Aliya- - 13 years ago

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Comment for part 43

The memories of Anjali&Riddhima were sweet and well written. Great job with that part!

I think its brilliant how you managed to communicate so much in the first part of chapter 43 when the character's aren't even speaking. the gestures they shared were enough.

aah the bliss of blooming love begins..

Ms Riddhima did always have a unhealthy habit for promising things out of her reach. i hope she realises soon her mistake in promising rajeev his daughter back. she may regret it hugely by the sounds of what Rajeev has got himself into with these mysterious people who want Riddhima.