MG FF: THE CUPID WAR!!Season2~PART 37:pg 121 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
dekhne se zyaada maza aaya padne me...heheheheeelovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update was very nice
waiting for the further updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
wow love it before was shock was like poor geet & then when read the next part got to was dream interesting & different FF
both parts fabulous
pls cont soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved da 3 Muskaters
adi is sooo sweet
cant wait 4 maaneet meeting
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Maan uses his brain so much
Loved how he behaved wit Sam
Looks lik Armaan n Geet knws each other very well
Loved how Maan helped Adi
Lets c wat happens in their 1st meet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesome ... just read all d parts ...

liked dem ...

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continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

PART 4

Yash: Armaan (pulling him to the exit gate) enough. U delibrately brought us here so that u can hav fun. I wont allow this. Wats btwn u & that girl Geet?
Armaan: dont be stupid Yash. I vl xplain. Pehle room me chal.she is my friend. So behave urself. Ok?
Yash: ok. As long as she is ur 'friend' i dnt hav a problem.(to Adi) Adi bhai hats off to you! Humko ye jagah bohat bha gayi.Badi bi khub choti bi khub! Yeha to bohat kuch hone wala he...
(he was startled by a voice behind)
Rajji: Beshak bohat kuch hoga. Humko ap jo itne bha gaye he (mockin him) kyu Ji?ur gud name plz?
Yash: yash malhotra
Rajji: kasht? Ye bi koi naam he? Kitna kasht lete ho kashtji ... (laughs)🤣 i mean yash ji...
Geet calls: Rajjiii...
Rajji:ayi didi
Yash:oh,Rajji!waise ap yaha ki maid he kya? 😉

Rajji annoyed😡. Geet comes.
Geet: no she is my sister. U guys can hv lunch @ ours. After al its ur 1st day here.
Yash:our pleasure.
They go inside.
At room,
Yash: ye choti to teekhi mirchi nikli aur wo sala Armaan...
Armaan enters.

Yash:ab bata tera chakar kya he?
Armaan: i used to cal u al 4 jogging na? Tum log to nhe athe! Thats where i saw her. Every morning i used to go for jogging @ French colony. One fine morning, the roads were clouded by mist! I saw a bunch of flowers...And then.. 😍
Yash:ab jaldi bata de yar. Bore mat kar... 🥱
Armaan: jaldi nhe ye to isi mood me bataunga.. Nhe sun na to ja
Yash:ab bata bi de.
Armaan:and then among the flowers... I saw her beautiful angelic face! GEET! like a melodious song 😊. I continued jogging in the same route. Finally one day i decided to ask her.
(Yash biting his nails)😲
flashbck
Armaan: xcuse me? R these flowers for sale?
Geet:yes, i deliver them by order.
Armaan:can u giv me a bouquet everyday?
Geet:sure,leave me ur address sir.
Armaan: let us meet here nly. And cal me Armaan.
Armaan(narrating) We xchangd flowers for almost 3 months. Then one day she askd me.
Yash again tensed!!
Flashback
Geet: if u dont mind, can u tel me for whom these flowers are? U r takin it daily. Thats y i'm askin. Just out of curiosity! Its ok if u dnt want to share.
Armaan: no, no nothing like that. I buy these flowers for a 'MYSTERIOUS BEAUTY' 😉
Geet:hmm.. Interestin! Can i meet her?
Armaan: sure,but not nw. Let the mystery build up!
Geet:does she knw abt me?
Armaan:umm.. No
Geet: i thot u would hav told her. But dont!!!!!! Like that beauty i vl also remain mysterious.
Geet laughs 😃& moves aways with her cycle. Armaan runs a little more & stops in front of a house. He gives the flower to a small girl in the house! The girl runs in...
Yash: oye teri.. But who is that mysterious beauty? 😲
Armaan:nhe bata rha.
Yasha:ok deal.that means Geet is just a flower-seller. Thats fine! I just want that.😛
Armaan:oye bas.lets get ready for lunch. Aur ye Maan kaha reh gaya??
Yash: i dnt think he vl cme tonite. Ab 'kaam' jo he kitna saara.😉
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It was a beautiful full moon night. The cool breeze was flowing. The flowers were dancing to its tunes.. Geet was watering the plants. She is wearing a knee length flower printed skirt and a pink t-shirt upto her waistline.Her hair was blowing in the breeze.it was a perfect romantic nite!!

A car stops at the gate. Geet looks there.She saw Maan lip-locking with Sameera. Geet raised her eye-brow,shook her head & turned away.😳
Maan gets out of the car. Geet notices with a smirk.
Maan: luv utke care baby!
Sameera: hmm.. Bye c u 2mrw
Maan: ya c u 2mrw. He givs her a series of flyin kiss & suddenly notices Geet. He waves his hand in air! She smiles.
Maan( loud enough for geet to hear): uff.. So mch dust here.
He enters the house.
Maan:xcuse me, is this Pondicherry Inn?
Geet:yes!
Maan:umm.. Wo Armaan & Yash...rented a room i suppose here?
Geet: The third Musketeer, Maan Singh Khurana alias MSK,Mr Seducer Khurana,rite?
Maan smirks totally embarassed! 😳 😳
Maan:hmm.. Who r u? I didn't get u?
Geet: Do u want to knw everything now?
Maan: wats the point? Am i not supposd to know the person who knows me?
Geet: not necessarily. If u dnt mind, can i ask u smething? The girl who just left now,Sameera is your new hook up,rite? But she doesnt suit you in anyway.
Maan(turns pink) surprised & embarassed :😲 emm.. Wo.. 😳
Geet: ur room s upstairs. Frnz hv gne out. I vl get u the key.

She goes into the house leaving a confused Maan behind! Before he could think more a voice disturbed him.

Rajji(peeping out frm her study): shh.. Shh..
Maan luks @ her. Smiles in a friendly way.😊
Rajji: hi i'm Rajji. Her sis.met ur Frnz earlier.we vl hav a detaild intro later on. Nw i hv a lot to study (points @ the buk in her hand) & disappears.
Maan still in surprise! Which part of the world did he land just nw? Or is it sme dream?
Rajji peeps out again.
Rajji: And MSK U r really smart nd handsome. I like u.
She winks at him😉& close the window.Maan was really curious nw. It was all weird but he liked it this way.There was something special abt this place!
Mean while geet is back. She hands him the key.
Geet: The great deeds of MSK are good enough to make a biography, rite? Y dnt we name it as THE TALES OF MSK! I found this character thrilling enough.
Maan : (totally clueless.All he could manage was a stupid smile) 😕 😊
Geet (continues): nhe really,i mean jo ladkiya asani se patthi nhe unke peeche padna. Aur ek bar wo pat jaye to wo thrill khatam hona phir usse bachkar bhagna... Really interestin... This Sameera also belongs to that list,he na?
Maan: (grins) nhe emm.. Actually..😳😳😳
Geet(in a calm tone) : Maan v r jst two girls living all alone here. So dnt u cme near us with that thrill of urs. Ok, MSK?
Maan: (totally embarassed) naa... 😳
Geet: shall i show u the room?
Maan : signals with his hand he will find out.
Maan turns back nd was climbing the stairs

Geet(calls out): Now u would know me. I'm Geet Handa! 😊
Maan gives her a wicked smile😈. Girl's with attitude, he just love that.But she was really different. Geet went back to her work, watering the plants.Maan was about to reach his room. But he turned back.He stopped at the stairs checkin out Geet who was totally unaware of this.Maan lukd around & made sure. No one is watching them. He climbed down & went towards her.He pulled her by her wrist & nailed her to a nearby pillar.Geet frozed.This was unexpected.His hands slid around her waist.He moved even closer.Their bodies were totally touching each other😳. It was only their lips which were separated by a few inches. They both lukd into each other's eyes lost. But that was not love.It was lust in his eyes & fear/shock in hers.😲
Maan: ye mulaqat mujhe bohat acha laga geet. This is a new thrill. (He moves closer positioning his face in her hair restin his chin on her nape. Geet breaths heavily.He feels her fast breaths & smirks)
Maan(whispers): This is gonna b a new xperience.
He moves back & luks again at her eyes... He gives her a wicked smile & releases her.
Maan goes back but turns. He gives her his (famous) seductive look and climbs up.

Geet stood there shockd still. For some weird reason she felt his touch familiar,something which she cannot resist. She was surprised herself she didn't push him away. She had felt this before.
Geet(self-thot):y do i hav the feelin that this is the guy who was in my dream... Geet ye tu kya soch rhe he? Wo bhi is tharky 🤬 (😲) ke bare me? Chi chi babaji...
She runs inside!
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PRECAP:
Maan: Armaan! U too Brutus!!

Hope u all liked this. Plz do comment...giv long comments! I hv retained the same scene as in movie may b a few changes for maaneet! Those r my fav scenes in the original.Didn't want to change it!! I dnt hav ny idea abt my nxt update myself.m realy busy xams ahead!!
ENJOY ALL!!
AND THNX FOR THE WONDERFUL SUPPORT!!

NEXT UPDATE AFTER MAY 17 only!!!!

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
awesome update ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
dear I am really enjoying reading this FF...it's awesome...
loved Maan -Geet's meeting...
can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
loved the update...
so maan is with sameera now...
i hope the mysterious gal is ridhima...
is that a threat form maan to geet...
was he trying to frighten her...
better she stays away from him...
how does she know more abt maan...did armaan tell her or adi...

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