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Trisha

@DivineDreams.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Stupidcupid1234
Loved it
Update soon n pm me

I am glad you loved it

Will update soon and PM you :)

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Trisha

@DivineDreams.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: FULTUSI

AWESOMEEE
PLZZZ CONTINUE SOON

Thank you so much..Will continue soon

Originally posted by: CT247

Trish<333 that was amazing I loved the flash backs and i reall hope ridzi isn't dead continue soon and plz pm me!! and maitee<33 ur soo lucky!!!!!!!!

Tashuuu..I am sooo glad you liked the flash backs..Let's see if Ridzi is dead or not..Will PM you : )

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

wow... dear it waz awsome...

specially a very unique confession...

Thanks a lot..I am glad you liked the confession : )

Originally posted by: Riddss

nice part
continue soon

Thank you so much

Will continue soon

Originally posted by: HoneyLimeUsha

awesome part!

the confession and first meet and everything!

luved it all!

hope ridz isn't dead though but i think she probably is...

continue soon!

Thank you..I am glad you liked the confession and the 1^st meeting..Hmm let's see if your assumption about Ridz being dead is trie or not..Will continue soon

Originally posted by: Mrs.ArmaanMallik

that was such a beutiful part yaar

Thanks a lot : )

Originally posted by: Kash-Maneetfan

hiii

awesome update

loved it

loved armaan nd ria

they make a cute duo

loved armaan nd atul

sooo cute

loved RM cute nok jhok

cant wait 4 more

what has happened 2 ridzy

con soon

thanks 4 da scrap

Heyy..Thanks a lot..I am glad you liked it..I agree Armaan and Ria make a great duo .To know what has happened to her you'll have to read the FF..Will continue soon..

Originally posted by: Stupidcupid1234

what happened to riddhma
love the update
n update soon

To know what has happened to her you have to read the next parts of the FF..I am glad you liked it'Will update soon

Originally posted by: Aquarius17

LOVED it jaanu!!! Awww the FBs were so cute and RM were so funny I miss all our hatke couples of DMG!!

Fatttuuu : ) I am sho happy you liked the FB's'I miss them too..Love you

Originally posted by: priyanki

AWESOME PART..
LOVED IT..

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: qt4ever

Beautiful part

Thanks : )

Originally posted by: vidu87

hey superbbb part

thnx 4 d scrap

cont soon

Hey..thanks a lot ..Will continue soon

Originally posted by: frumaan

hai.nice prt.cont soon and i hav a doubdt is ridzie really dead.i dont want her to die.anyways awesome prt.and plz do pm me next time u update.plzzz

Heyy..Will continue soon..Let's see if you're doubt is right or not..Thank you..Will PM you

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER

awesome part!!!! love the old gang- AA,RM!!!! looks like we're seeing DMG again, same masti, RM fight, Sanjeevani that we love!!!!!!!!!!

omg the confession of AR, SOOO AMAZING, LOVE IT!!!!!!

but what happened to Riddhima that Armaan is thinking of her soo much n what made Anjali said they felt sorry for him n Ria????

cont soon

Tc

Hey..Thanks..I love AA , RM too..I am so glad that I made you feel that you're seeing DMG again..I loved the confession too..Hmm Armaan doesn't need a reason to think about Riddhima does he 😉 and coming to Anjali feeling sorry for Armaan and Ria you'll see that soon : ) Will continue soon

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

great part!

lovd the flashbaks n their first confession :)

i hope riddhima aint dead

continue soon x

Hey..thanks a lot..I am glad you liked the part..We'll see if Riddhima is dead or not..Will continue soon

Originally posted by: dimpledsimple

hey nice part ..

continue soon..

hopes dat ridzi is f9..

continue soon..

tc.

Hey..Thanks a lot..Will continue soon..I hope too that Ridz is fine..

Originally posted by: jiyaa

nive part trishaaa

Jiyu Di!!Thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

brilliant update!

Thank You

Originally posted by: divioct1

Great FF..

Loved it so far..

Continue soon..

Plz do PM me d nxt part..

Hey..Thanks a lot.Will continue soon and PM you too

Originally posted by: ksg_ritika

nyc part ... continue soon n thanx 4 d scrap ...

ritika

Thanks.Will continue soon

Originally posted by: bsk1

hey

very nice ff

update soon

Hey.Thanks a lot..Will continue soon

Edited by -Trish- - 14 years ago

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Trisha

@DivineDreams.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Note

Hey guys

I know i know it's been a month since I upated but I was out of town at a relative's house so couldn't update but I promise you guys I'll update soonish.I've started writing the part so you can expect an update this week..

Secondly I've started another FF with Maitree aka MaitreeluvKajen who writes the FF "Meant To Be" are writing this FF called "Lost and Found" so any one who's interested.Here's the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1689554/lost-and-found-ar-part13-complete-page91-16may2014

That's all I wanna say..Stay tuned to read the next update of Just A Dream..Love you all

Trisha <3

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Trisha

@DivineDreams.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Part 3

A fter having some food Armaan followed by Ria , were roaming around in the hospital.Armaan was telling Ria about his internship days and the memories related to every nook and corner of the hospital.Ria was laughing at her dad's pranks.She loved listening to her dad's pranks and not to mention how he flirted with every single girl but she knew her dad couldn't break any one's heart and she was right.

At one point Armaan stopped.Ria looked at her dad staring at some thing.She followed her his gaze and it stopped at some room.When she looked at it a bit more carefully she saw 'Fire Escape' written on the side.She wondered why her dad was looking at the Fire Escape so lovingly.She nudged him bringing out Armaan of his thoughts.

"Kya hua ? Ap us Fire Escape ko ghur kyu rahe ho ?" Ria asked..Armaan had a smile playing on his lips.With his eyes twinkling with mischief he said "You want to sit some where I'm tired"..Ria knew her dad was upto something so she just followed him

Armaan opened the Fire Escape door."Just as it was" he thought.He stepped down and sat on one of the steps and said "Sit na..This is one awesome place!" Armaan said.Ria made a face and said "Yaha?I mean really dad." "Ye jagah bahot interesting hai and memorable for me and your mom too" Hearing the word memorable Ria quickly sat down beside Armaan.With her hands on her chin she spoke "Kyu kyu kyu ? Ap aur mumma yaha kya karte the ?" "Karte toh bahut kuch the" remembering the uncountable times they must have made out in the Fire Escape "Lekin this was our place.If we were not in the canteen then the Fire Escape was the place we went.." Ria listened to him with full interest in each and every word he was saying "Jadga karna tha toh Fire Escape , Baat batani thi toh Fire Escape , Ek dusre ko tang karna tha toh Fire Escape aur thoda romance then toh definetly Fire Escape" she giggled at her dad's explaination

"Dad..Ye place brings alot of memories back to you na ? " Ria asked..Armaan nodded.."Alot" he said."Ye jagah Riddhima ke bina bahut adhoori hai " he said sadly..Ria poked her dad and said "heeeyy..no being sad..apne hi kaha tha mumma will be back soon..aur ap hi aisa bol rahe ho..Jaise ap unko miss kar rahe ho even she is missing you na ".

Armaan looked at his daughter in awe..She could be so mature at times.This incident made her so mature it made her forget her own childness but he didn't want that.He had been very naughty as a kid with no tentions and no responsibilties and he wanted the same for Ria.Why should she ruin her childhood when it wasn't her fault at all.She was just 10 , such a tender age.He sighed and said "Ria.As much as I am proud that you're a mature kid I don't want you to miss out the fun , the humour , the innocence kids of your age have so promise me you're gonna be full of masti..no responisiblities..no being super mature.." he held his hand out "Promise me."

Ria put her hand into her dad's big palm "Promise.I love you Papa" saying that she hugged him..Armaan hugged her back and kissed her forehead mumbling a "I love you too Ria".They stayed in the fire escape for a long time.Ria as usual was blabbering and Armaan was giving his opinions.They're conversation came to a halt when they heard the door open and saw Atul standing.."Ghar nahi jaana tum dono ko ? Yehi set hona hai ? " "Masa I have no problem.This is a very comfortable place" Ria stressed on the word 'comfortable'.Armaan glared at Ria and spoke "Yeah Champ let's go waise how's Mehul ? "

"Mehul's good..Jab oose pata chala ki Ria ane wali hai toh he was very excited..Roz puchta tha 'kab ayegi ria kab ayegi Ria'.Tum dono phele mere ghar pe aao phir I'll drop you.." Atul said.."Excited ? Huh!Plans bana raha hoga muje irritate aur neecha dikhane ka" Ria mumbled."Tumne kuch kaha?" Atul asked Ria.."Nopes.Mai kya kahungi masa..Bolne ke liye kuch baccha hi nahi.." Ria said sadly at thought of meeting Mehul.Atul got confused.Armaan smiled and said "Rehne de Champ..Thodi mysterious or riddle types hai ye".."Sahi baat hai" Atul agreed to Armaan and both of them hi-fived.

Anjali was waiting near the parking lot."Kaha the tum teeno.You know Mehul called me so many times and since he got fed up of being alone he told the driver to take to him to dad's place.Ab hume Mehul ko pick up karne dad ke ghar jaana hoga" Anjali grumbled.Armaan froze when he heard he had to Dr Shashank's house."No!This can't be.I am not going there.Not today.Never.I cannot go to that place again.Not after what happened to us." Armaan thought.Atul and Anjali looked at Armaan with questioning faces."Guys I think Ria and me will take a cab yaar.Ghar ki yaad arahi hai and I need to arrange some stuff so you guys go" Armaan said.Atul put his hand on Armaan's shoulder."I know Armaan tuje vaha bilkul nahi jaana.Lekin Mom tuje aur Ria ko milna chahti hai yaar.Just for her come please."

Armaan was stuck.He loved Padma Mom.He wished to see her too but meeting her would mean meeting Dr Shashank.His blood boiled when he thought of him.He looked at Ria who looked as confused as him.Even she was in double minds.He saw Anjali giving him pleading looks and Atul encouraging him to come."Damn!Kya karu yaar..Jau ya na jau kuch samaj mai nahi araha." Armaan thought.After thinking and thinking Armaan came to a conclusion and said "Fine!But I am going there just for Padma Mom.That's it!" Armaan said."Anjali smiled and said "Thanks Armaan.Mom misses you and Ria alot.She is so eager to meet you!".."I am eager to meet her too " Armaan said with less enthusiasm in his voice.

Edited by -Trish- - 14 years ago

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neelima

@araja1234

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Awesome part. Where is ridhima. Is she dead. Update soon

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

awesome part!

i love ria and armaan aww

i wonder why armaan doesnt wanna go to shankys place..did he break AR up?

continue soon x

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

EDITED.

Firstly,Mujhe Dance Karne De LOL Main kinni khush hu that you FINALLY Updated !! Oyye Balle Balle Party Sharty

Okay Do I really need to say this,I guess I do..So here goes,AWESOMMEE Update! LOVED LOVED LOVEEDDD It,Hayyyeee tere Talent pe main mar jawa!! 😆 I LOVED how Ms.Riya Mallik asked her Dad,"Kyun Kyun Kyun?" When Armaan said that the F.E. was Memorable..I loved the scene between these two and YES YES YESSY YESS Maine Yeh dekha,"You only said mumma will be back soon" RIDDHIMA KO KUCH NAI HUA! Dhinkkaaa Chikkaa LOL You know na main insane hu..Toh 😆 What I was saying was,Loved the last bit too,Kitna true tha yaar..Even my blood boils when I think of Shanky the Monkey (Hows the phrase?:P) What happened actually and where is Riddhima?Jaldi Jaldi Update Karoo!! <33

LOVEEE YOOUUU<33 Myyy Zooozooo ( Oi ma,Rhyme karta hai🤣 ) LOL LOVE YOU !! <33

Love,

Your Chiku <33

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago

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Priya-

@Priya-

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Seems like the sad ff's oh well would still love to read it after all its one of the couples i love

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

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*edited*

okay, i've read the whole of this FF just now, and because i have to comment on 3 parts, i'm gonna leave you a longg comment :)

In part 1, i really loved the bond between armaan and ria, and its nice that armaan has ria in his life even though he doesn't have riddhima, because he can remember riddhima through ria. Ria is also really mature for her age, and she is shooo sweet <33 you wrote this part really well, and i just felt curious and i was wondering where ridzi was, and i thought that maybe she has died, but i was hoping that she wasn't.

I found part two really funny, because of armaan and champ. i've always loved their friendship and this part was so funny 🤣 haha, everyone thought they were gay, because they were so happy to see each other and hugged so tightly like long lost lovers 😆 And i loved the scene with the car with armaan, riddhima and anji because i found that hilarious too! 😆 how riddhima was completely ignoring anji and just focusing on armaan! armaan and riddhima were so cute together, and i was wondering where riddhima went 😭 and i found the confession scene soo sweet. they are just perfect for each other <33

and now the third part...all the memories just made me really sad 😭 its just that when armaan is remembering stuff, it just reminded me that everythings changed now! but i don't think riddhima is dead, because otherwise why would armaan tell ria that she gonna come back soon? i then thought that maybe riddhima was in a coma or something, but then when you mentioned shanky, and armaan said that shanky did something then i got confused 😕 but i really really think and hope that riddhima is alive! and i can't wait to see what shankyy did!

CG...you are one amazing writer! you probably got really bored reading that bhashan, but seriously, your writing is amazingg okay. and don't say it isn't because i'm not in the mood to fight! and when you described how it feels to go to the US, it seemed really real...is that how you felt when you had to move? okay, so basically my bhashan's over know, and all i wanna say is that please update soon, or i'll diee of excitement.

From (you should already know you i am, but i'll tell you anyway) Radhikaa

Edited by kajen_hamesha - 14 years ago