AR FF:Just A Dream Part 3 - Page 12(2/6/11)

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Just A Dream
Before I start this FF I would like to thank two special people firstly Fattu.Thank you so much for all the encouragement and all love seriously it means alot to me.I know you're not that fond of the concept of this FF but I do know you will still comment for your Ridzy..Muah and secondly Maitru you do not know how much your comment in my OS's mean to me it feels so good to see you commenting nice nice stuff in my OS's.Thank You and I love you both alot.Enough of my baak baak here I present my FF "Just A Dream"and oh thanks alot Fattu for suggesting the title :D
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Part One

Life was nothing but a dream for him.He stepped in to same piece of land which he left 5 years ago.Today was 14th April 2020.Exactly 12 years back he had his roka ceremony.He met her in 2007 got married in 2008 and in 2010 his angel was born.Correction their angel named Ria but 5 five years back.."PAPA..Ap kiske bare mai soch rahe ho mom bahut gussa hogi if you're thinking about some one else" he looked at Ria.."Ria papa apni life ke bare mai soch rahe hai..I'm sure you're mum wouldn't that for sure" Ria looked satisfied with her papa's explanation."Okay that's fine but let's go na..Is boring se airport pe hum kya karenge ?Jaldi Jaldi we'll pick up our luggage and then oh oh papa who's coming to receive us ?? " He laughed..Ria was such a curious kid..He would have to answer all her questions or else he would have to listen to her long lecture about how THE Armaan Mallik doesn't pay attention to his own daughter Ria Mallik.."Baby hum dono ko massi receive karegi okay happy?" Ria smiled "Veerrryyy happy..Papa look Pizza Hut muje pizza chahiye.." "What ? Ria , baby you just pasta in the flight na.We'll have pizza in the night okay" Ria let her hand out and said "Promise ?" "Typical Riddhima" Armaan thought and kissed Ria's cheeks and said "Pakka wala promise"..Ria smiled she loved how her dad used to fulfill all her desires at the right time.She loved her papa and mumma.."Chalo baby let's go" Acting like a mature kid Ria asked "You took all the luggage na papa" This girl failed to shock him.He was double her age and she was asking him whether he took all the luggage ?? "Ria..meri 10 year old bacchi I'm your dad and also quite responsible.Does that answer your questions ?" Ria shook her head in a no and replied "No..I asked you if you took all the bags and all you answered was you're responsible..Who was asking if you are responsible or not ?"..Calming himself he replied "Of course Ria" "Good..Mumma will be so proud of you!" saying that she went ahead leaving a shocked Armaan behind."Was this girl for real ?Was she a 10 year old ??" "PAPA stop thinking see I can see massi waving to me can you see her " Pushing the trolley of luggage Armaan said "Of course I can" The door opened "Armaan!" Anjali exclaimed "It is so nice to see you after 5 long years" Armaan engulfed her in a hug "Same here Anjie I am so glad to come back to Mumbai"..Ria hugged her massi too "How's my little star ?" Ria proudly said "You little star is all fit and due to her papa is also fit.." Armaan's mouth was wide open.."Ria..you're just a 10 year old" "Toh ?? Jaane se pehle mamma told me that I should take care of you cause you will no" Armaan had no words..He was just tongue tied..It was as if his vocal chords had stopped working.He wanted to say but no words came out of his mouth finally he managed to say "Hmm fine you win I loose" Ria shook her head in a no again "No papa if I win then you win too cause I'm a part of you..right" He hugged Ria tight..He never felt lonely cause Ria always reminded him of his Basket..his Riddhima.

Index Part 1 - Page 1 Part 2 - Page 8
Note - Page 12
Part 3 - Page 13
Edited by -Trish- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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grt start..but plz dont tell me this is a sad fanfic??..is ridz okay?
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interesting concept but r u giving out character sketch or at less tell if its ARSH or AR FF.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey,
this seems interesting!
luv it already!
but what happened to ridz? is this a sad fic? better get my box of tissues ready then!
continue soon!
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hey yaar hope so ridz is fine....

bt pls dont make it arsh or otherwise... pls pls.......

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Originally posted by: arshluver_15

interesting concept but r u giving out character sketch or at less tell if its ARSH or AR FF.....

it says Armaan and Riddhima clearly right? then how can there be a confusion between AR and Arsh?😔
@trish: wow!! fantastic and good luck with your FF...you write so well...but I am kinda assuming that Riddhima is dead, which is very very sad...still I am excited to read further...do continue soon and definitely add me to the PM list.
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Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju

it says Armaan and Riddhima clearly right? then how can there be a confusion between AR and Arsh?😔
@trish: wow!! fantastic and good luck with your FF...you write so well...but I am kinda assuming that Riddhima is dead, which is very very sad...still I am excited to read further...do continue soon and definitely add me to the PM list.


i felt like ridhima is not there.....like she is dead or something read the part again.....so i thought that maybe they are showing armaan and ridhima got married had a daughter and ridhima died some how and there will be another entry aka shilpa........

take a look at this sentence:
He hugged Ria tight..He never felt lonely cause Ria always reminded him of his Basket..his Riddhima.
this is only my thoughts after reading the part..........

Edited by arshluver_15 - 14 years ago
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@arshluver_15 Hey hun sorry to dissappoint you but it's gonna be a complete AR FF..no shilpa here sorry :(
@Sanju I love the way you sprang up in defense for the AR FF thingy and if you look at arshluver_15 views it seems right..love you and thanks for commenting i'll get back to you soon

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