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Posted: 14 years ago
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...Siski'
Part 4


pls do comment … i sit here wondering.. if you like it or not…
me wouldn't have updated all this parts at all…
i usually type them & keep it in my folder…

but bcs of you all .. i update this..
pls do comment & press the LIKE button.. to motivate to update on this IF…

other wise i have no intrest

xxx


Maan & geet along with miraz walks in to there flat. Very bright. Colorful. Everything was in place.
Geet "owlw!"
Miraz "we have done everything maama! Are you happy?" se asked proudly. Questioning!

Geet was truly mesmerized with the beauty. Everything she may have liked! After the incident her life did come a hale! She have forgotten to smile. Forgotten to laugh. Long forgotten to enjoy her childhood! How could she she was a mother at the age of 12 where children should play! Enjoy there life!
Where she should ran around enjoying every second of there are free life! She had responsibility of her child! Worried how maan would have been copping with her! Was he feeding her correctly! Was he dressing her properly. Keeping her safe. Way from the danger! Keeping her warm! Giving her all the love unlike me! The unlucky girl! She had many responsibility! It is different that maan never made her realize any of it! But he have done the main thing! He have done his bit! That night still visualize in front of her eyes. She couldn't ignore the fact! How could she. It playas a great influence on he mental stability...

Dinner...
Miraz "mama! Do you know we had a school function! I was missing you so much!" geet & maan smiles.
Geet "I will be there next year. Promise!"
Maan "we both will be there!" geet looks at maan! Shocked to here he wasn't there.
Geet "what do you mean? Wearnt you there?"
Maan "yes! I was bit late!"
Geet "I hope you are not picking her up late! Or leaving her out late somewhere." geets worry was clear & visible! The childhood abuse she have went through... She did not want miraz to be the same! Yes maan was her father... But he showed his careless with her! & she could not ignore that fact!
Maan "don't worry!"
Geet "what do you mean! Only a mother know about worries!" maan was hurt! Knowing exactly what she was indicating to. Geet looks way! Frustrated! She did not want to understand him. In no way! The effect of his deed was just too strong!
Miraz started to shake seeing her mums anger. Maan have brought her in completely different world. She was his angel. Never let a single thing touch her. It had to go through him first. She was brought in the fairy world. With no knowledge about the violent past her mom & dad went through. She was simply unaware! Maan looks at miraz... He quickly swaps seat & holds her tight. Miraz rests her head on his shoulder. Hugging him tight.
Miraz "please mama! Don't shout at papa! He was so happy that you are coming!"
Maan looks at geet. While geets face covered with guilt. Loosing her self in-front of tree daughter!
Geet "sorry beta!" she leaves the dinner table without eating.

After miraz was in bed maan calls geet back to the dinner table. They ate in silent! She felt the guilt... There first day & couldn't have there family dinner.

Maan "we have Dr appointment twomoro!"
Geet nodes...

Maan & geet both walks in to the x-ray room. For her full body scan. Her body have suffered great damage when she had miraz & something Dr still straggling to find.

Geet was in x-ray room while maan with the Dr- "any clue!"
Dr "no Mr khurana! We are trying our best! Nothing seems to come up! I don't know what exactly is her problem but we are trying our best! " maan nodes worriedly. Geet walks in. Takes her seat!

They leave... Car!

Geet "I don't know why you wasting money!"
Maan "this is no wasting money!"
Geet "I don't know! They are not finding anything! Which shows I am alright!"
Maan "that's not mean you are! Have you seen your self! You are surviving on your medicine!"
Geet "I should stop taking them!"
Maan "geet!"
Geet "only reason I am taking it because of my daughter! I don't want her faith to be like that!"
Maan "she is my daughter to! & I would never!"

Both arrives at miraz school 30 minute early! Geet looks at maan with confusion...
Maan "I always come early! Never late!" indicating it to there last night conversation. Maan knew well how his cousin & brother lurking round to ruin his family! & thats why he wants to move to banglore with geet. Safe at-least! It's not like he is working for khurana! Or the MD! There are other! He have his own business! & very happy with what he have! Maan have restrictedly told miraz to stay way from his brother or any close friend of them!
Miraz smiles seeing his dad car parked exactly at the same place. He ran in & hugged both of them & a kiss!
Miraz "oh mama! Do you know it was the best day ever! Look I have achieved 100% in my CAT test!"
Geet smiles...

Maan "that's nice! Soon as mama came in you have forgotten papa!"
Miraz "oh papa look!"
Geet "this calls for a treat!"
Maan "what do you want?"
Geet "ice cream or chocolate sundays!"
Miraz "yammm!"
All three laughs.

Maan made sure geet only have little bit! She made a baby face as maan & miraz ate there ice cream happily. Large! & her one smaller then the small!
Geet "that's unfair!"
Miraz "mama Dr have told you not to eat any! Consider your self lucky!"
Geet "ha! Per Akbar hi to khaunga!"
Miraz "shhh! Mama! Let us enjoy!"
Maan laughs'



next- Geet faints😲

the real girls disease is real' & i am researching in to it'

she had it soon as she had the baby'

i will try my best to explain every details like "My dark lover"

xxx


Thanks for all the love & support'

please do leave me comments & like button to motivate

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont keya but whenever
read this FF have tears
in my eyes
poor geet surviviring on
meds
mirza so adorable girl
love it
fabulous update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
can yu stop ur
doing super awesome job
Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you very much
⭐️it is a sad story but you describe it beautifully...⭐️
could you please tell us the real story as well?😭
i have a big request,could you please write all the lines in English?😳
i dont know Indian at all
waiting for the next part...
Edited by bahane - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing
luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for the update
It was superb.
I feel so sad for this Geet.
The trauma at such a young age did take its toll on her
She seems to completely mistrust Maan with her daughter
though he had taken care of her since young and treated her
like an angel.Looks like she is not aware of this truth about Maan.
So Geet lives in bangalore and came to mumbai for check up.
Hope Geet will grow up enough to forgive Maan for his one mistake
OMG she is surviving only on medicines.
Hope the doctors find out whats wrong with her soon
One good thing is that miraz seems to be completely healthy and brilliant.
continue super soon.



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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs a lot for taking the story so well
I was so scared...now geet faints



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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
omg geet faints
may i know the disease name
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg geet faints.
I am so worried.
This ff makes me cry.
I want more

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