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yayee ! congrats dear :D
I loved this ff and was just thinking about the poor soul who has to actually bear it all :( but before i could reply it was closed :P but i m very very happy that it is re open ! :D update soon.


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congrats dear we are very happy to see ur ff reopened pls do cont soon now we all are waiting.
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Heyy
Awesome start
I am looking forward to learning about Maans family...they seem heartless to their daughter in laws.
I really hope this FF has a happy ending because My Dark Lovers' ending was really sad thou I did love the heaven part at the end :P
Will definitely hope for the best for the person who inspired you write this FF
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...Siski...
Part 2


JUst want to say a special thank you...
i hope i do justice to this ff...

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL
THE LOVE & SUPPORT




It was raining. Haveli! Haven seems to run way & hell was out of fire with tears. Tears of a small girl. She cried all night long. Her husband who seems to be in a panic state now. It was too much & she is too young. That's all he thought. She hugged the pillow instead of him in fear.
Maan "geet! Geet! GEET!" the girl jumps up. Still holding the pillow & spread. Her eyes twinkled with water. Pain was clearly visible! He regrets. Her small face was covered with fear!
Geet "ar...are you going to hurt me again?" she asked innocently. Her voice was shaking. She wasn't sure what they have done last night! But it feared her...
Maan "go & get changed!" he covered his head after looking at her blankly for few second. She was a child! What the hell was he thinking? Anyway! He ignored everything & walked in to the bathroom! Geet screamed. He walks out again! The thought she is a child didn't bother him until now. There was some type of disgust somewhere deep within! But that's what's been happening here. For past generation after generation! Then why he felt sick! This is normal here. Normal in this particular village! Wasn't that's why even his sister got married at the age of 12! She is 15 now! Already have kids! What's so different about them!

Geet wore a sari! She just didn't look right! She was still growing up! Not fully developed at all! & she was shaking!
Maan "why are you shaking?"
Geet "you scaring me!" she replied bluntly.
Maan "I am your husband! Why are you scared?"
Geet jerks her shoulder. Indicating she don't know. He just scared her.
Maan "let's take it this way! Think me as a...." maan thought for a while! He couldn't think of anything! Every way it just looked wrong! Lucky his wife is strong! He must admire that! "just think me as your husband!"

Maan gets changed & walks down. Flowed by geet. She was a child! This family wasn't normal. Khurana haveli! Most man lives in city in there house & there wife in this village. As they were sure this child marriage wasn't approved to the world which reason they hides it. Hides it in this village. Geet looks round. Many people came to see khuranas badi bhu! Geet gets scared & holds maan hand tight. Hiding behind him. Like a child does!
Maan "what happen?"
Geet "I am scared!"
Maan "haven't you seen this before!" geet nodes a yes. Her sister was married like this but in a small ceremony but this was big. There was big man! Big women! Geet felt there eyes. Red eyes. Fearful eyes. She was shaking again. Stammering to talk. She felt helpless. She looked for her mother & father in the crowd. She wanted to run way! What this man have done to her last night. It hurts. He said he will do it again tonight. She didn't want to. The fear covered her. Then geet spotted her parents. She screamed.
Geet "maa! Baba! Maa!" geet was about to run upwards them when maan held her hand tight. He was shocked along with everyone. He gave her one glare not to speak because this will make everything wars for them! He was planning something completely different for his wife! Or his kids... He couldn't imagine His daughter married at the age of 11! No! He couldn't let geet go either! Her parents are no good! & of course he was no different! But geet! Her fear of him just brought something! Her fear... There something different! He was born brought up in city! But his mentality was no different then his own family! Of course this was never a thing in town! They might even get the police involved but here! No one dares to talk in front of them! So! His family does what they are best at.
Maan "just be quit! We will be leaving today! If you make any hassle! It will just spoil everything!" geets fear just increased. Taking her where? She is a mere village girl! She never done study! She never took a step out of here! Where this man taking her?
Geet "w...wh...where yyou taking me?" her eyes filled up again. She shivered. It seems to be normal now! What if other man does the same thing to her what he have done! It hurts!!

It was night time. Geet stood at the corner of the bed. Hiding her self!
Maan "we have to leave now! I am sending you way!"
Geet "w...wh...where?"
Maan "Bombay! You will finish your study there!" maan looks way! "I will see you after 10 years!"
Geet who did not understand anything! Or wanted to! She was scared... A fear of this man started to grew within her!
Maan "just one thing! This life will be new! Very new to you! Just don't mention anything about us! To anyone!" geet nodes! Shaken... Of course she will listen! Other wise what of he hearts her again!

That night maan left with geet. Didn't say a word to anyone! Didn't say where was he exactly taking her! He just left! If the family knew any how this would have never bee possible!



Next- 10 years Leap with a twist....

hay you all... i am glad this ff
have been reopen.. i could't have done with out
you all...
Thank you so much for this..
&
I hope i do justice to this ff....

please do leave me comments...
thank you😳


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all the news is that i m FIRST ! Hehe
Coming to the update it was rocking,feeling bad for geet but hope that these 10 years will give her some strength and looking forward to the twist :)


Edited by guru_LoVeR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
wow...10yrs leap.
cant wait for the nxt update.
do continue plz.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE
10 years.... dnt u think a bit too long...???😕
but nyway lets see wat u got in store 4 us 😊

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