Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

hey lakshmi sorry ya i didnt manage to folo ur updates. I had some works to complete. Else my boss will eat my head. Thx god i manage to complete all my work on time. I got lot updates to folo now. Replying to all now... Too much of work 😉

part 17-18
OOh sasha... Cant she hav a better life rather den going afta geet.
She is more interested in work's work.
Loved d part maan lost in geet's speech n d way he tried to cover up.
maan is loosing his sense. Interesting Fact.
But geet doesnt seems to show any sign.
Like she is not even bothered bout maan being around her.
Poor adi guy. thx god he didnt split sth else. Else gone geet's work!!!
Loved d way Geet retort sasha. bravo gal!!!
I like d SMW. A new nickname for dadiman.
yah why not? when grandson can hav one. den surely granny should hav one as well.
fair fair square square.

thx for d pM... wonderful...

😊...Hey...its ok...thanks for your comments.
When maneet met for the first time 2 years back...Geet did had her feelings towards Maan. But she covered it up thinking she will never get to meet this person again in her life...later on her life went thro a tough phase which is indeed not making her think in those terms again. Infact, if you see the part when she meets Maan again in the interview room...even she was fighting with herself. She is a bit too shy to even express it to her own self. A strong realisation will hit Maneet soon...wait and watch.😉
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
loved the convo between daadi n geet...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liked all the three updates
Dadi n Geet's relation is fab
Loved how Geet shared all thgs wit Dadi
Her nickname for her is awesum
Maan is really chnaging
Sasha an ewww iska kuch zarur karna padega
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely!!!!!! can u please add me to ur pm list?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
smw n geet were beautiful loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
are we getting an update noww

plzzz tell me
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update that was 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swathi9889

are we getting an update noww


plzzz tell me

Hie...Updating now 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hie Everyone...

A long update after long break. Busy weekend As usual

I have added a new photo to Part 15 and 17
Will do the editing of spelling, grammer and missing elements later...Wish you all enjoyed this part.

PART 19:

Its Sunday morning. Geet's first week in Delhi. She just landed here last Sunday and so many changes happened between two Sundays...she joined her college, she got a job agreeing on a decent salary to live and save...what else she can ask for. Delhi proved to be a lucky place for her in deed. Even though she has got too busy in her life...She is happy for everything what she was desiring to have in her life.

Hey Pinky...Good Morning!

Good Morning Geet...What's up? You look so happy today.

Hmm...just like that...Just remembered my journey from last Sunday to this Sunday.😊

Arre haan...you have completed one successful week in Delhi...Must celebrate.🥳

Chal...Aaj poore Delhi ghoomthe hain...Its my treat😉

Kya? What about your university schedules? You have planned your smaller schedules during weekdays and longer schedules on Sunday. What happened? 😲

I want to relax this Sunday yaar...Anyways, I will be visiting university in a day or two...Will start my longer university schedules from next Sunday. I have also informed my professor about this. He is really understanding.

Phir dheri kis baat ki? Chall...lets go...Pinky is busy preparing list of all eat-outs😆

Pinky...remember...I dont want to just dwell between one restaurant and another okay.😡

Pinky makes a baby face.

Hey Pinky...I was kidding yaar...Will give enough time for your munching exercises...but remember, I want to explore Delhi and not only Delhi ke restaurants.

Her mobile rings...

Hello

Oye Geet Madam...

Hey Meera...How are you?

I'm fine dear and you?

I was out of Bangalore for few days and you escaped to Delhi? Atleast you should have waited till I came back to Bangalore na...This is not done yaar! And no phone calls...no emails.😡

What no phone calls? I was trying to reach you by all means. Finally I met your mom and I was told that you have got a job in Mumbai and you are on a one month training. So, what's up.

Haan yaar...immediately after getting my BBM results, I had an interview with Indian Paints company. Their Head office is in Mumbai with offices in Bangalore, Delhi and Chennai. Its a challenging role as I will be all in all support to the Boss...Mr. Yash Malhotra. The day I got the offer letter in hand, the next day I was suppose to report in Mumbai...Didnt have time to even inform my friends and relatives...Socha tha email kardoongi sab ko...But didn't find time at all...Now, I have got a break for a week...I will be relocating to Mumbai in few days. Also, thinking of continuing with my MBA on Part time mode. Sorry Yaar...Couldnt call anyone...it all happened in a hurry-burry.

Its ok dear...Anyways, Congratulations and wish you a successful career life. Even I didn't have enough time to spend with my friends. I got the admission letter from Delhi University and then had to leave within short time frame. Also, I got a job within 2-3 days after I landed in Delhi.😊

Congratulations to you too darl👏

Acha phir yeh bataao...How is your mummy-Pappa?

Mummy Pappa are fine...they were behind me to get me married soon...but I am no way interested. That's why I decided to take this job offer... escaping from Bangalore for year or two.

Haan Haan...I know what's your problem...you are not able do decide who is the best among the crushes you have.😆

Choo chweet...you are the only person who understands my plight.😆

Yeh lo...Get serious in life yaar...Atleast now, choose one good guy for yourself😲

Kya yaar...itne saare ladke hain...par ek tho is layak ho jise main apne parents se introduce karwa sakoon.😕

Dont worry yaar...I doubt if you have left any more decent guys to be drolled over in Bangalore...try your luck in Mumbai.

Good Idea...I will do full time job with this Indian Paints and Part time job with my headhunting task to sourse ideal life partner. Aur agar time mila tho MBA Karoongi😆

I just met your Appa-Amma yesterday... They told me you are continuing your MBA and you also got a job with Khurana Construction as a PA to MD...i.e Maan Singh Khurana! WOW...You are a lucky girl.😉

What? You know My Boss?😲

Haaye...unhen koun nahin jaantha...The Rich & Famous, Handsome and the most eligible bachelor ...woh tho hum Punjabi kudiyon ke dil ke dhadkan hain...he is sooo HOT yaar.😍

Meera...you have not changed even a bit...you used to have crush on so many guys at a time...Nothing worked out with those guys...and now you are eyeing on my boss? Bhagawane...Enna indha loosu kittendu kaapathu (Oh god please save me from this stupid girl)

Kya boli? Tu hamesha mujhe Tamil main gaali deti rahthi hain. Seriously yaar...I am jealous of you. 😡

Acha...yeh tho batao how is it working with THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA?

Hmmm...Have you seen a devil in real life? He is the one...huh...Too much demanding. He expects his tasks to complete in short time frame...Overall a challenging personality to work with.

Hey common...He is your boss not your husband...😆

Geet's eyes pops out when she hears the word "Husband"

What else do you expect out of him...He will only boss around...will not cutchicoo with you...🤣

Geet imagines...Maan cutchicooing with her

Chi chi bhagawane...indha meeravuda senda, naanum kettu poiduven(Chi Chi Babaji...If I mingle with Meera, even I will be spoiled and follow her track)

HELLO...Are you there?

Hmm...

Kya yaar...Mujhe pata hain...on one side you are pretending not to be interested and on the otherside, you are having all colourful imagination.

Chi ...eisi koi baat nahin.

Oye Geet...I really wish I was in your place...always close to MSK...HAAYE.

Try your luck...If you want, I can quit my job giving a strong recommendation about your candidature for replacing my post...Main apni friend ke liye itna to kar hi sakthi hoon na.😉

How is it possible yaar? I have signed 2 year contract with this paint company. Cannot change from here. Abhi ke liye...Yash Malhotra se kaam chalalethi hoon.

Oh poor guy...please Yash ko Baksh do...Better luck after 2 years.😆

Aur kya kar sakthe hain hum? One good thing is I will be travelling a lot and I will visit Delhi office sometime in near future. Will get to meet.

Hurray......what else can I ask for...And You remember Pinky, our school friend?

Haan...Kaisi hai woh? Your Amma was mentioning that you are staying with Pinky.

Its true...She is fine. Its a big home out here. You can stay with us. You know something...Pinky is working with KC as a receptionist and she is the one who informed me about the position I am currently working on.

Hey cool...Pinky is an All-Time sweet heart and Angel. So, my stay is taken care when I visit Delhi...Sure will have lots of fun...See you soon... Phone karthe rehna OK. Give my regards to Pinky

Sure...Take care...Bye

Bye

Indha Meeravuda phonela pesa aaramicha...Avalavudaan...Neram ponadhe teriyallai (I start chatting with Meera over phone...That's it...I never have track on time)

She opens her cupboard and Maan's hanky falls down. She just dumped it after showing it to Pinky on the other day...Makku...idhai ippadiya vetkaradhu? 😡Azhaga madichu badhirama veyyi (Stupid...is this the way to keep it? Fold it neatly and keep it back in a safer place). She looks at "MSK" written on the hanky...and suddenly few incidents flashes in her mind...the day she met Maan for the first time in Chennai...her interview with KC and meeting Maan after 2 long years...Maan challenging her to slap once again...Maan scholding her for silly things...Maan offering her to drop till university...Maan visiting her home and saying SORRY...and all silly incidents here and there...Unmayale...Maan Bootham nalla peyar than 😆(Truely...Deer Devil seems to be a nice name for him)...She is smiling beyond her own realisation...definetly Meera has added her share of Magic by mentioning MSK's name during their hot discussions.

Geet's mind commands...Geetika...Please dont imagine anything beyond this level of mind...you will be the one who will suffer. On that day 2 years back...you did develop some feelings for him but now things have changed drastically. You didn't know this person on that day...but you know him today...he is THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA...YOUR BOSS...He has a very rich background...There is no match between you both what so ever. Better keep yourself away from these kind of thoughts...Dont forget that your priorities towards your own life has also changed.

Chi Chi...Bhagawane...naanum enna enna yosikaren...yen manasulla appadi edhuvum illai (Chi Chi Babaji...What all I am imagining...there is nothing like that going on in my mind)

Geet...what happened? You are not ready yet? Kin khayalon main khoyi huvi ho?

Geet first keeps the hanky back to a safer place.

Sorry yaar...Meera had called. We couldn't meet when I left from Bangalore.😊

MEERA? Kaisi hain woh? Muj se baat kyon nahin karwayi?😕

She is fine...will give you more details about her and will also call her once more when we are out...tik hain? Give me five minutes to get ready.

Geet is all ready wearing a casual denim trouser with a nice Indian top with all embroidery works on it...Even simplest of the dress makes her look gorgeous. Also, pinky in her jeans and lovely T-Shirt. Both have a great time exploring places in Delhi.

At KM...

Daadi is waiting for Maan at the Breakfast table. Pata tho karwana hi hoga ki chal kya raha hain? Kaise pata karoon? Kya poochen?

Maan joins Daadi

Good Morning Dadima

Good Morning Maan Bete.

He just begin to have his juice.

Maan Bete..aap do dhin pehle Jhanakpuri gaye the?

Maan spits out the juice he just gulped in.

Hmm...this reaction shows some indication of being cought.😊

Daadima...How did you know?😲

Thro one of my Kitty friends😳

So, your kitty friends are so despirate to match me with their daughters/grand-daughters that they are now spying on me? 😡He is reacting in a way how a teenager reacts if his guardian asks an explanation about his girlfriend. Daadi is indeed enjoying his anger which is in a different form today.😆

No Beta...This Kitty friend of mine live in Jhanakpuri...she told me that she happen to see you visiting someone's home.😳

Aur koi kaam nahin rahtha hain is kitti friend ko? She keeps peeping out her window/Balcony to see who is visiting her neighbourhood...dont they have anything else to do?😡

Arre Arre...kya hua? Itna gussa kyon ho rahe ho?

Maan tries to relax himself. Daadima, I was there only for some business purpose...that's it. Couldnt meet the client at office...so, he gave me an appointment to meet him at his home...That's all.

Anything else you would like to ask?

Kuch nahin beta...I was just curios to know that's it. So what's your plan for today?

I have some office related work to be completed...will spend some time on it.

Beta aaj Sunday hain...Aaj ek dhin to aaram karlijiye.

No Dadima...I have to finish with my office tasks...I wish Dev takes up some office related responsibilities...he is not doing so. Let him come back from Canada. Need to have some serious talks with him.

Jaisi aap ki marzi

DADIMA...BHAI...

Both turn around to see Anvesha. Anvesha runs towards them to give a tight hug to both of them.🤗

Annie bete...kaise hain aap? You were scheduled to return tomorrow.

Ji Daadima...Our camp instructor got this idea to leave on Saturday night so that we can reach Delhi on Sunday Morning...take enough rest and start fresh from Monday morning.

Annie...you should have called me..I would have come to pick you from the school.

Bhai...I wanted to surprise you all that's why. One of my school camp friends agreed to drop me home. So, no problem.

Kaisa raha Aap ka Camp?

Daadima Bohuth maza aaya. There were whole lot of activities...got to meet so many people.

Naye friends banaye?

Nahin Daadima...You know me na..I dont make new friends that easily. I take time. But yes, I did have good time with new people around.

Challo...Aap jaake nahalo hum breakfast lagathe hain.

Daadima...I just finished with my breakfast.

Go to your room and take rest...will have lunch together then. Your room is clean as Nakul has been Maintaining and cleaning it daily.

Sure dadima...see you at lunch. See you Bhai...Annie Leaves from there

Daadima, Main bhi nikaltha hoon. Maan leaves from there.

Tho Maan bete...It was obvious that you were lying to me...could clearly make out from your face expression and the kind of anger you showed after you are cought...you were not talking to me looking straight into my eyes.

Need more inputs. Whom shall I trust in this regard? "AADI" she screams his name with the idea.

She calls Aadi on his mobile...Aadi on the other hand is nervous to get a call from his boss's residence number

Gggood Mmmorning Sssiirr

Aadi..hum bol rahe hain...Maan ki Daadi

Daadi...I mean Madam...Aap

Are Aadi bete...You can call me Daadima

Ji Dddaadima..Aadi is still nervous why she is calling him

Aadi...I wanted to ask you something.Is there someone by name Geetika working in our KC office?

Aadi is shocked...why is daadima asking about Geetika😕

Ji Daadima...She joined few days back. She reports to Maan Sir as his PA cum Business Analyst.

So, how good is this girl? Is she able to cope up with her day to day job responsibilities?

Daadima...Geet is a wonderful girl...Interlligent and well organised. Its been just few days and she is handling her job so well. Aadi tells her about Geet's 2 rounds of interview...her first day at her workand her points raised during the project meeting...her first client meeting, Maan mistaking her...and then what all followed.

Hmm...sounds interesting. She seems to be an intelligent girl.

Yes Daadima...But Sorry to ask this...I am a bit confused why are you enquiring about Geet? Are you upset with her by any chance?

No dear...Nothing in particular. I got to know that this girl has joined KC and that too assisting my grandson. Knowing my Grandson's anger level, I was curious to know if this girl is able to cope up with.

Yah...Maan sir still gets angry. But I have noticed, Maan Sir is quite understanding towards Geet. There are times when he was angry with her but again he acknowledges her good work. Also, Geet works as per her boss's requirements...so, no worries what so ever.

Daadi cuts the call and keeps thinking. Maan smiling the other day...assuming the day he met Geet at his office. Maan acknowledging her work..Saying sorry to her by going all the way to her home...eisse tho pehle kabhi nahin huwa...Something is happening for sure...need to find out more.😉

Geet and Pinky are having fun roaming around the Historical places in Delhi, clicking snaps, Shopping and tasting the best of the best available in Delhi Streets.

Geet...chal na Gol-Gappe khathe hain...pointing out to a Chat-Stall close to the traffic signal.😛

Bas kar yaar...Jahan Gol-Gappe dekhthi hain, shuru ho jaathi hain😕

Please Yaar...hum kahan eise roz aathe hain is taraf?😕

Oh Baby...I was just kidding...dont get upset...😊

Lo...Main bhi khaoongi😛

Sach? Chal na😛

Geet and Pinky are relishing every gol-gappa...Sach yaar...road side Chat-Shops have real amazing taste to the chat verieties.

The traffic signal shows red sign.

Maan's car is also waiting in this signal. He just left from his office finishing few important tasks. It was Sunday and the whole office was empty. Finds it strange as Geet was not there to help him with daily tasks. Its less than a week since she joined but looks as if its been ages. He was missing her to the core. He does the maximum work possible and leaves from his office due to his restlessness.

This signal was a lengthy wait if you get stuck. He just happens to look around and surprised to see Geet at the Chat-Shop near by. Is it her? He rolls down the window...and scanning her from top to bottom...she is wearing a different outfit which he has never seen her wearing before...noticing her wiping her lips that are filled with the gol-gappa paani.the way she was relishing every poori set in her plate by closing her eyes and feeling the taste...Maan is lost in her and smiles without his own knowledge. Why is that I get to see her wherever I go...Is it her or my imagination?😕 He was forced to divert his attention from the chat-shop and to concentrate on the signal.

Geet seems to have lost in some other world and suddenly she happen to see Maan sitting in a car and waiting for the traffic signal to get cleared. She is just shaking her head to make sure if it was him...How can that be? The otherday, he dropped me in a different car. 😲

I dont know why am I thinking so much about this Deer Devil...Also, I am seeing him every where. Why this Deer Devil is following me even on Sunday? Wonder what's happening to me since morning. Geet snaps out of her thoughts when Pinky calls her...Chal Geet...Will take you to a nice park nearby. Geet and Pinky finish the Gol-gappas in one go and leave from there.

Maan happen to see the Chat shop once before the traffic signal clears. He's surprised not to find Geet. Huh...yeh ladki mujhe sachmuch paagal kar degi. Sunday ko bhi mera peecha nahin chodthi

By the end of the day, Geet and Pinky reach home fully drained and exhausted...with hands full of shopping bags...Really wish if the next day was also a Sunday and they could take rest for the whole day😆

Precap: Again not able to give one...please wait till I post part 20.

Sharing one of my fav tamil song.

Movie: Vaaranam Aayiram Song: Nenjukkul Peidhidum

Singer: Hariharan Music: Harris Jayaraj
Star Cast: Surya, Sameera Reddy

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QqI2woQjWK4[/YOUTUBE]

To download this song in mp3 format: http://www.isaithenral.info/index.php?p=2008/Vaaranam%20Aayiram

Meaning of the song:
I feel the rain in my heart
Lotus is sinking in the water
Sudden change in climate
Girl, fault is on your side

huge Waves never stop
You swim in my heart girl
You shine like a golden beauty
girl, you are as beautiful as a princess

oh shaanti shaanti oh shaanti...you carried my life
why did you go after me
you are my chapter hereafter

Something attracted me
you add mystery in nose tip
Your natural smile is like boganvilla

The place you stood can fetch more price
The path you take can become ice bars
come with me to visit my home
you see my home and will start liking me too !

I dont know who she is
my heart, dont follow this girl
cant make it whether this is true or false
my heart, dont follow this girl

You took my sleep away
You made to long for you
When i cross you
I can feel the air is different

If you say stop, my time doesnt move
the flower which you put on your hair never falls down
love never asked me before entering me
if one doesnt propose, that is not love

You are my life
i felt that at this very moment
if you refuse
i cant bear it at all

I feel the rain in my heart
Lotus is sinking in the water
Sudden change in climate
Girl, fault is on your side

huge Waves never stop
You swim in my heart girl
You shine like a golden beauty
girl, you are as beautiful as a princess

oh shaanti shaanti oh shaanti...you carried my life
why did you go after me
you are my chapter hereafter
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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