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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: simi91

fabulous update
wow savita already
like geet with her smile
poor anie acting like a5 yrs old
what sad to khurana family
love it each part
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
thank yuuuuuuuuuuuu



ur most welcome...
infact its gud feeling dat u liking it...thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
It was wonderful !!!! I am sure the busiest in business will be the Geet's Maan and the no whch she gave will be Maan's no .... deof m too excited for their first met . Please do Pm me you updates
waiting anxiously for the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
i like ur ff...
quite nice...n diff.
good to c geet as doc.
it's been lovely ud's so far.
please continue soon.
n ys, do add to 2 ur pm list.
have sent buddy request

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
lovely ff
plz add me inur pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
hi
interesting update
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

part 4

When a morning sun hit his eye, he tightly shut them to avoid the direct light and turn to other side, but the sound of alarm again disturb his sleep... switching the alarm he wake up to welcome another day full of burden' making his way to washroom he take a bath and get ready for his office wearing his usual office cloths. Before leaving the room he check on his file for the last time to make sure everything is perfect. Checking everything he make his way to the dining table where his mom his waiting for him.

"Morning mama".

Savita: "morning beta... how was yesterday meeting Maan"

Maan: "it was good mama' and I finalize the deal" he takes the juice and start drinking fastly. "slow down beta, no need to rush, yesterday also you came late at night' please take rest today" she is always worried for the amount of work he does. "No mama I really need to go, have an important meeting today."

Savita: "Maan did the doctor call you?" she asked worriedly." Oh mama please calm down' No she didn't. But don't worry she will call. She needs time. It's been four days and you almost asked me this question thousand times." He was annoyed by the same question again and again. "Yea I know. But what should I do? I'm worried about Annie Maan". Maan stood up to leave "mama I'm leaving for office, getting late." Avoiding her worries he makes his way out but was stopped at the door by the phone call. "Hello"

Caller: "hello' is this MR KHURANA speaking?"

Maan: "yes"

Caller: "morning Mr. Khurana... I am Dr of anvesha". Maan turn to see his mom whose is eating her breakfast quietly. "Hmm yea my mom talked about you'. so did you finish your research?"

Geet:"yes... I have completed everything. Now I am ready to meet anvesha."

Maan: "fine then.. when I will be free I will call you and come to pick you up' Right now I have a meeting, so see you later" saying this he disconnected the call.

Geet: "Arey. Hang up on me... who does he think of himself Han?? Stupid' idiot'"😡

Maan make his way to his car and sat in back seat. He starts to think about Annie and her mom. He was always guilty, that he don't have time for his family but he doesn't have any other choice, he have promised his father to make his business a top class business in the world. Now when his company has reached to the peak he barely have time for his family, emotions, friends and even for himself. The driver stopped the car in front of his office. He got out of his car and walk toward his office.

As he entre the office the entire office was in pin drop silence. He walk toward his cabin avoiding everyone. But was stopped in middle by Sasha with her usual mini cloths.

Sasha: "mk these are the file you told me to give you". Maan become furious. "Sasha... I think you know I have a cabin and work are discussed there... and don't you know very well that I hate when anyone speak without seeking my permission?"😡 He was fed up of these stupid mistake of his staff.Sasha was so embarrassed. "Sorry mk ... I'm really sorry."😭 Maan was already getting late "and now this stupid drama" he thought. He avoids her and walks to his cabin but stops at the door "now come to my cabin and also call adi'.. And yes knock before you come."

It was evening when he gets rid of his meeting, "hmm let me call that doctor, will just drop her home and come here again." He entre his cabin and call adi. Adi was his very much trusted employee to whom he can share his professional and personal life issue. They are best friend but they have never shown their friendship to others. Adi never hesitate to give him advice and Maan always listen to him which is very strange for Adi himself. Adi entre his cabin, without knock. He was the only person who can entre and speak to him without his permission.

Adi: "yes sir. Did you call me?"

Maan:" yes Adi' I am going to pick up the doctor of Annie... but after two hours you have to call me again and again... so that I can leave from there soon"

Adi: "oh that's good news' finally that doctor got some time'.. Fine sir I will call you. You don't worry." He never asks him any question because he never finds it important. For him Maan always do things for good.

Maan leaves the office and call geet in his way to ask the address.

Precap: first meeting 😉😳

NEXT: PART 5

Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
wow loved it yaar ....i wonder how their first meet gonna be
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
nice way u rite updates waiting for the next ff first meeting sounds good...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
nice update...thnx fo d pm n do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awesome ff
nice beginning
add me to ur pm list
and continue soon

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