Originally posted by: -jaee-
Wonderful work dear, I really liked how you showed him calm and composed for the night instead of shouting and screaming ... She is really cute and even in their first meeting - you could actually see what kind of people they are - how are they heart ... She tends to take haste decisions while he is a soft mush - calm and emotional ... Hopefully their argument doesn't turn into heated fight ...
Your writing style is really nice dear - different and crisp ... Great Job :)
Thank You So Much for your comment! Means a lot to me! And thanks for observing the tiny things I was trying to show in the story..😉
Thank you so much again for enjoying how and what I write! 😃
Love you for that! And of course, the encouragement I get from this!
P.S. I have started reading your FF raindrops! Its great as far as I have read it... will finish with the chapters and comment there as well! Thanks for the PMs!
<3
xoxo
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