Love Related Issues (MayurFF) Ch15 Pg47

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

hey naina!! again an excellent piece of writing. You are one of those writers which give a professional flavor.

The background was very well written and incorporated and i love their relation which is sweet and sour, with a consistent depth of love..waiting for their clash!

Cont. soon and God Bless..

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Wonderful work dear, I really liked how you showed him calm and composed for the night instead of shouting and screaming ... She is really cute and even in their first meeting - you could actually see what kind of people they are - how are they heart ... She tends to take haste decisions while he is a soft mush - calm and emotional .... Hopefully their argument doesn't turn into heated fight ...

Your writing style is really nice dear - different and crisp ... Great Job :)

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

naina...........fatastic update..........loved the way you described their first meeting..........wonderful ..loved it..cant wait to read the next part...........

Edited by stuti123 - 14 years ago

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

That was a wonderful read, Naina.

Can't wait to read further. I am loving the way this is moving ahead. :)

Continue Soon. <3

Akansha :)

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Angel

@hasiniangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

very well written.. loved it 😃

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

edited my comment on page 8

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

great have no words to tell u how is it?

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

hey naina
nice update dear and please don't make their fight too big and please resolve it soon
i can't bear mayur separating
all in all loved the part
especially the way nups said i miss you

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Awesome update👏

u use the perfect emotions at the right time..........looking forward to ur next update😳

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I-heart-dreams

@I-heart-dreams

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: -Faria-
thanx Naina
thank u so much for ur update
i was waiitng for it

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hey Naina - aain an awesome update
loved this part as usual.
GOSH -mayu really loved nups a lot- he came home early just bcoz of nups
and nups also loved him uncodititonally- she was hell frustrated when maynk didnt gve her time on weekend ... and thats why she had gone to d bar
hahahaha poor Aman- he dropped nupur to home and got angry look frm mayank
Hey Naina it doesnt seem that Aman is a bad guy...

the flashback part was beautiful...
so both had some strange feeling on their first meeting... hmmm very interesting
but now i m waiitng to knw what incident changed their life????
how they becme close to each other ???
and also waiting for their cute fight...

excellent update Naina- simply rocking
keep it up
take care

Yes! Mayank loves his darling Nupur a lot and came back just for her!! They both are crazyyy about each other!! And Aman isn't really bad or anything. Mayank just doesn't like him around Nupur...;)

Their first meeting might have felt like it was a bit unrealistic but I'm sure falling in love can have magical effects on you..! Lol.. I'll be writing about their beginning interactions hopefully in the 6th chapter.. :) Thank You So Much for commenting and enjoying! Mwahh <33

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