Love Related Issues (MayurFF) Ch15 Pg47

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

awww..naina!! so sorry for your work getting lost, but this one was amazing. I had a clue about her pregnancy and that came out true.

The most beautiful part of this update was the feelings and condition of nupur - beautiful and painful, i could actually feel! Great job!

Now anticipating the future .. cont soon!!

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

i can imagine how angry mayank wud be...just cant wait to c wat happens next...do cont soon...

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

awesome update

plzzz continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

dat was amazing update

so nupur is pregnant n want to abort the baby...and feeling guilty too, to nt tell mayank anything abt dis

now, their is going to be a big fight...its getting interesting

cont soon

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

this is getting just more interesting there willbe big fight

hope everything goes well

when i was reading i could tell she was pragnant

udpate soon n plzz pme as i add u my buddy list

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

very disappointed in nupur...granted she doesnt want to be entangled in the marriage business but running away from a responsibility like this is not acceptable...poor mayank!...waiting to see whats to happen next...naina

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Nice Concept...please add me to ur pm list...!!!

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Naina.. i see a huge fight coming up now... anyway, update soon and do PM me when u update... 😊

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Okay, hie Naina! It's kinda sick of me, do not mind if I make to-the-point replies to your scraps, sometimes I dunno what to say.

Improvement, there. Clearly, you've improved with your grip on the story, and of course with your skill of writing it all, so this was a notion I made only to tell you that you write really well. And now, the story. It is like predictable sometimes, but that is not your fault. The whole story you've punched out is like the same frame, boy and girl with different viewpoints and morals in love. And then how can we forget, this is the new-aged cheesy dimension of it! ⭐️

Nupur's pregnant and she doesn't like kids, she is trying to inconspicuously get it aborted but Mayank is going to come to oppose now, okay. You need to be immensely high on this subject of hating kids to abort your own child even though your man is ready to take the responsibility, yaiks. I told you, grow Nupur. Mayank's the star over here, fella!

Thanks for the PM!

Kankshita