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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

Can I hope for an update soon?? Please? Like tonight or something??

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angelic_ridzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

This is a lovely story...

Sid needs to know the truth...

I would love to know about AR stiry...nd i liked the way you are gonna show it in flashback...

nd i totally agree with you.that wteva happens...AR are always MEANT TO BE...!!

I loved the title u have given...!

I am sorry i know i dont comment much...but thanx for sendin pms...!!

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha
i loved it :) its so interesting! i can't wait to find out how armaan and riddhima met, and how they fell in love <3 i also hope that sid is nice and that he accepts AR's love and he lets them get married because armaan and riddhima are meant to be together! i really love nikki in this FF. she's so sweet, and always really supportive of armaan. please update soon and pm me :)

Thank You So Much Radhika! <33 I'm really Glad you've liked my FF..I'll update today and sure,I'll PM you!

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hey...

i think itz flashback of AR's love story...

Hey Thanks..And Yes,It is the Flashback!

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
Maitree Sorry for the late comment :( have been really busy
OK you do know how amazing you are at writing right ? and if you dont you better do because this is amazing piece of work Maitree :|

The way you put foward each moment ,emotion and the story its amazing, well put blend together amazingly and I think theres just nothing left to say now. Each part is making me love the story even more if its possible !

I hate how much pain AR have to go through but I see them coming together really soon and the flashbacks too :|

AHH I love you Maitree , each update from you makes my day :|

I know Anku...But Its alright Really,It means a LOT to me that You Comment <33

Thank You Tons,I dun have enough words to thank You..You're So Supporting Always! Thank You So Much,I LOVE YOU <33

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: ammyridz600
maitu yr lambi judai is back🤗 for a long reply 😲🤣so no sholly 2 u for editing late since i hv stopped putting RES 🤔🤣am berry berry happy i read all pending parts in a row😆
omkajen rewinding memories was a shooo long update 😆 i was like kab khatam hoga 😳 just kidding 🤣 it was awesome maituuu👏👏👏aww i just love the note by basket for armaan sooo cute n romantc ❤️❤️❤️

hilarious part ,cockcroach🤣🤣🤣 this remind me of someone in dmg 2🤣🤣🤣 N am shooo glad in yr FF the famous cockroach bring AR close unlike someone who get scared of it in season 2🤣i knw my armaan is brave n dnt get scared of chotu things like cockroach🤣 he is not a darpok 😆par basket darpok nikli 😒🤣

aww love the J basket on beach😳😆 poor gals i can imagine how they felt since no one can resist mr mallik charm 😍

AR watching KKHH 2gather , my fav movie too😍 basket in full concention drank armaan coke 😆

omkajen just love the way how AR ended into a passionate kiss☺️ through armaan was against crossing his limit since he knw ridz is gonna be some else wife🤔😆 par my bechara armaan ka koi galti hi nehi , basket was saying sooo many touching stuff that he couldnt resist😳

now coming to the echo of breaking hearts , babes its heart wrenching 😭omg just love the way u describe basket feelings before leaving armaan again 😭 love this basket 😳

omkajen just love how basket ran n wizout hesitation hug armaan😳n telling armaan i dnt wanna 2 go again😭 i dnt wanna fo again IN that hell 😭wish this happen in the bakwas season 2😳 , this is how real basket should react when her life is going away frm herheart touching part but loved it very very much😳

omg siddy baby is back i dnt knw if i should be happy or not🤔😳🥱 oh i can understand my armaan halaaf when sid introduce his basket as her fiance riddhi 😭😭😭 all bad dmg memories coming again when armaan come 2 knw basket was married 😭 am feeling so bad for armaan , his friend loves the love of his life 😭 N normally i nver felt bad for ridz 😆but this time i can feel her pain especially when armaan says her best of luck n she was crying😭thank god nikki came at his rescue poor amaan how could he stay der even 4 a sec after knwing his basket is siddy fiance😭 maitu this one was indeed a saddu part but bootifully written especially about AR emotion 👏i didnt rolf once in this update😆

yo finally revelation part i was so curious 2 knw why my armaan n riddhima was seperated😔 N not 2 my surprise , i knw that kamina shanky would be behind der seperation😡😡😡bloody kabbab mein haddi 😡😡😡 urghhh he is sooo cruel, how can he be happy for someone death 🤢omkajen nver saw a stone dil like that inhuman shanky 🤢 kamina doing emotional blackmail 2 ridz here too😡😡but armaan mom is sooo sweet ya , he made armaan promised that he will nver seperate ridz frm her parents , this can be call a goog vow unlike that kamina who made her daughter life miserable bcoz of his so call rivalty🤢😡 loves how armaan sharing all his secrets wiz nikky rather than his best friend siddy😆but happy siddy was tensed why armaan not picking his call bcoz most of the time its armaan who is always tensed 😆omg i didnt expect ridz itni asani will tell siddy baby she is armaan basket 😲😲😲awesome maituuu u didnt drag it like saas bahu soap do 😆N i can imagine shocked siddy baby face😍🤣 zor ka jhatka mila siddy baby ko 🤣but am sure he will happy for his best friend armaan n her fiance riddhi😳 🤣

finally finished wiz all parts n it was a pleasure 2 read ,i enjoy loadsss🤗 through i gave different emotions 😆at start rofling session in the middle was quite senti n at last wanted 2 give gallis bcoz of that shanky 😡🤣but since bacha party read this too🤣 so it was not a good idea😆

Looking forward for yr next part , aww am soo happy finish wiz sad story n AR story gonna be back in action 😳

YUNI 😊

OMG Yuni :| What a HUGE Comment LOL Thanks A TON Babe! Thank You Thank You Thank You<33 I read every word and Line,Its just that I'm Too Shocked to Reply! Hayyee Thank You! I'll Cont soon!

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: angelic_ridzy
This is a lovely story...
Sid needs to know the truth...

I would love to know about AR stiry...nd i liked the way you are gonna show it in flashback...

nd i totally agree with you.that wteva happens...AR are always MEANT TO BE...!!

I loved the title u have given...!

I am sorry i know i dont comment much...but thanx for sendin pms...!!

Hey itz fine... I'm Glad that You have liked my FF ! Thank You So Much <33

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

Hey Guys! Here's the next part..I'm sorry you guys had to wait,but I was away n a trip and now,I've got Food poisining,It makes me So Weak :( I'd written this on the trip during my free time,So Read,Like and Comment. And Yes,Yes..I think this is One of the Worst parts I've ever written. OhGod,I need to have writing tutorials now.. LOL Okay,Read,Like and Comment. And Today is Jen's Birthday,So Its a Celebration..I LOVEEE Jenny! <33

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Part 7 : Truly Blessed

*Flashback*
20th April,2002

She remembered so vividly,all those moments. She was running around,he was chasing her. They laughed,cried and fought-but they were best friends. He was always her knight in shining armour.She remembered sharing chocolates,teasing him about his crushes,him pulling her cheeks whenever he thought she looked cute,him laughing on the cartoons she used to draw.Everything was there,in her bittersweet memories. He was there. Then it had been 9 years since she had seen him. She wondered often,where was he? Her best friend,her first ever crush,her favourite pair of ocean-blue eyes,his laughter echoing in her ears. She missed him,terribly.

She was finally in Mumbai.Her family had shifted from Shimla to Mumbai just a week ago.She wanted to study in the best medical college in India,and with the aid of her results,she got in very easily.A thrill had come into her,when she thought of Mumbai.He had come here 9 years ago.His whole family had shifted here because of his father's business transfer.Would she find him? She so wanted to. But a 18-year old boy won't be the same as he was when he was 9..So how would she know where he was? Who he was? What if he walked past her,and she never knew? In her randomness of thought,she sat up and got up from her bed. Slowly walking to the washroom and letting out a yawn,she rubbed her tired eyes. She was so excited for her first day of college,she even forgot to sleep..all she could do,was to think of the college,her cousin Nikki,her professors,her friends...and mostly,Him.

Freshened up,she sat on her PC. Her Facebook profile flickered across the screen,and in the search box,she typed for the umteempth time,"Armaan" ,Results :None. Ofcourse,she didn't remember his surname.What was it..She sighed again and cursed him.Why couldn't he be on any social networking site,would it hurt so much. Damn him. Her call rang and she got up,taking her own sweet time to answer the call.

"Ridzi!!!!!!!!!!",she understood at once.
"Hey Niks..",she replied,laughing.
"You're up? Hmph. I thought for the FIRST time EVER in my whole life,I'll wake up early and give my lovely cousin a sweet wake up call. Mission failed."
"Awww..So Sweet of you,Niks,But yeah..I'm up.Its like a habit.You sound excited,btw."
"Yeah,I am! Can't wait to take you to college!You know my crazzy friends..They'll be glad to FINALLY meet you.I mean like I've went on blabbering to them about you,and you know you're so cute and that you came first in your H.S. and then you have a very handsome looking boyfriend-"
"Niks,he is NOT my Boyfriend,I told you!",she interrupted,frowning,"And how will he be...I haven't seen him from 9 years! He was 9 years old when he left Shimla.And then..We lost contact! And Anyways,he was my Best Friend!"
"Huh? You only told me he was your B.F.!"
"Yup. B.F. stands for BEST FRIEND,not BOYFRIEND. Seriously,Niks."
"Here,it stands ONLY for Boyfriends.",Nikki giggled from the other side,"And you sound as if you're in Love with him!"
Riddhima's mouth dropped open,"NIKKITA MEHRA!"
"Okay,Okay..Sorry.I wish you find him.Then you'll be like huggey-huggey and kissey-kissey and then happily ever after!Muah,Muah..I missed you so much baby..",Nikki imitated.
She couldn't hold her cheeks turning red.Laughing away,she replied,"Back to your College stuff,missy.When's it starting?"
"10:30's the reporting time"
"Okies,so now is like 6:45..So I have time.Great. I'll go visit the temple nearby.I need blessings."
"Oh Dude,Ridzi,Pleaseee...You Don't. You're like the Best anyway,and Boys will be totally FIDA over you..and-"
"I meant for Studies.Professors.Career.For being a Doctor."
Nikki sighed,"See..The only thing that makes you NOT Similar to me.Go on,I'll pick you up,later.Okay? Bye."
"Bye,Cya!"
"And Your Boyfriend!",she giggled.
"Nikki!"
"Okay Bestfriend..If you find him,that is.Love You MUUUAAHHH.."
"Niks stop acting like a Lesbo."
"RIDDHIMA GUPTA!"
She giggled in answer and cut the call. She texted her,

'Hey,Sorry,Okay? I Love Ya too.Was kidding.
-RG'

'Yeah,I know.I am the only one falling prey to your PJs! Go on baby,and ask God to gift you your "B.F." LOL.
-NM'

'I wish.Wait,are you going back to sleep?
-RG'

'Snoooreee...zzz
-NM'

She laughed and stopped texting,letting her dear Cousin sleep.Getting into her pink churidaar,she desended down the stairs,quickly gulped down her tea. She was feeling oddly excited and happy that day,she didn't know why..Restless,too.As if some suprise was coming on her way and she was closing her eyes,waiting. Smiling at her own thoughts,she started walking.

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"Mom?",he raised a eyebrow at his mother.
His mother looked at him teasingly,"Dreaming of someone else?"
"Uhhmmm...Mmm..No!",he grinned back. Is she a mind reader?I was dreaming of someone..and it was,um..Good.
"Sure?",she said,raising her eyebrow.
"Yeah,ofcourse.Whats the date?"
"20th April,2002."
He frowned,"I mean,the day."
"Monday,why? Do you have a date today?"
"Yup.I do.How did you know?",he asked,leaning towards his mother to hug her.
"With whom?"
"Uhm..With a very sexy lady who's given birth to a equally sexy son Armaan Mallik."
"Chal Badmaash!",his mother shook her head,spanking his arm.
He laughed,"Okay..Serious.I have a date with God today,you know na."
"I know.I miss him too.",her voice was gentle,softer.
"Mom..",he started.
"Enjoy your date.I'll make breakfast for you,Mr.Sexy son."
"Mom?",his eyes widened in suprise when she said that. His mother grinned and left the room.

He left his bed and switched on his cell phone.'3 new messages',the screen flashed.He selected the first one.

'ARMAAN MALLIK! DARE YOU FLIRT WITH MY COUSIN!YOU KNOW I'LL K-I-L-L You if YOU DO!
-NM'

Then the next one went, ' Hey dude,Bunking Prof.Mishra's clas today?I'm gonna see DDLJ with Muskaan.Okay dun tell her,its not DDLJ. Its a HORROR film I'm taking her to.She gets scared and on to my arms! Heavennn!!! =P I wanted to say,dun bunk Mishra's class,you gonna take notes for me.I OWE you a New iPod,I know that.So Chill.
-RG'

And the last one,'Baby!Why aren't you answering my calls? I'm sad but..if you're okay and we're like OVER,I'm going out with Gaurav.Sorry.Okay? Still,you're like my Hottest Ex ever.
-Nandz'

He was surprised and shook his head at the last message.This girl was seriously something.Nandini..Whatever.He didn't even care.Good that she had broken up herself.Aaahhh,Girls would go Crazzy.Armaan Mallik's SINGLE again!Doing a little happy dance in his head,he freshned up and got down to his car,grinning crazily to himself.Something was seriously happening to him,first he dreams of a Unknown girl and now he's Terribly happy.What was So Special?

He sighed as he got out of his car.He came to this temple every week,to pray for practically everything,his life..for them who he has lost,also,for them who he has and who he wants in his life. Smiling,he leaned down to touch the first stair of the stairs leading to the temple. Touching his hand on his forehead,as if taking God's precious blessings,he walked up slowly.

"Bhagwan ji,I hope Dad's fine.You know how much Mom misses him?I wish one day she'd tell me how Dad left us like that..I remember that day so vividly,when I came back from school to find my Mom crying among all those aunts,and then that terrible news.I miss Dad,too..you know.I miss how he told me that I am the best son anyone could ever have,I miss telling him that I Love Him,I miss begging him to give me chocolates secretly,I miss playing all those pranks on Mom together..I know he's with you. Tell him,alright? I know he doesn't want me to be sad,to cry,God I try...but you know he was the best? Yes,I know you do. I still miss him. Coming back to my life,I want something special from you,that someone special.Please,grant my wish today? I want to be loved,I want to feel wanted. Yes Mom loves me..But you know that this love is always different.And lastly,bless my idiot friends,and this stupid creation of yours.Okay?Tell Dad I love him,and that I take care of Mom too!"

He opened his eyes and unfolded his hands,and then took one of his hands to ring the bell of the temple.A hand brushed along his and he stared down beside him,surprised. A girl in a pink churidaar was standing next to him,looking at their hands and then at him perplexed. Her emrald-green eyes enchanted him,he felt himself going to a different horizon altogether.Somewhere deep down his heart flip-flopped much to his amazement,and he felt he was strangely feeling happy. He knew her...But,how?

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She stared surprised into his deep-blue eyes.They were gorgeous,and worse,she felt her heart thumping hard in her chest.This was crazzy.Helping herself to not to get lost in his eyes,she tore her gaze away the same time the guy did.Realizing that they both had extended their hands simultaneously to ring the bell,she hit her head and turned to apologise to the gorgeous looking guy.Tucking a starnd of hair behind her ear to hide her nervousness,she said,"Um.."

The guy turned to face her.He was gorgeous,so handsome that for a moment she just stared.He grinned sheepishly and said,"Sorry..Really..I guess...that..",his husky voice told her. She smiled and replied.
"Yeah,I am Sorry..too.."
It was so awkward.He scratched his head,"Its ok..",they both said together after a pause.They laughed a little .

She bit her lip,in absence of any conversation skill,"So...Bye.."
"Ya..Cya..",he said asif he knew her from his birth.

They both turned their opposite ways to leave.Her heart was beating strangely.It was oddly magical. His eyes..she couldn't forget those eyes. But they were So familiar..How could it be? Where had she seen them? That voice..So familiar.Like she had wrapped her memories around it. Who was this mystery guy? Did she know him? And Oh God..Why was her heart flip-flopping at the very thought?

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He walked back to the car,his thoughts jumbled up.He remembered those magical emrald-green eyes. That magnetic attraction.That strange leaping of his heart..That familiar smile..How?Who was she..She looked so familiar. He shook his head,thinking himself to be crazzy.But to his own amazement,his heart flip-flopped again.

It was the start.Their first meeting,their magical feelings wounding itself into their hearts.The only thing that they were completely unaware of was..They were Truly Blessed. Right From Heaven.

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That was So Silly.Stupid.Nonsense.I So SUCK at writing Happy Parts! Anyways...Comments Guys! I need them!

Love You all,

Maitree.

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago