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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

great update!! Please update soon 👏

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Ambar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: deepa101
great update!! Please update soon 👏

Yup will update a part by evening😊

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Ambar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Chapter-4

The next day, full of nervous energy, Aditya jumped the fence and took a shortcut through the campground. He could hear the noise of the festival through the trees, and caught a whiff of popcorn and hotdogs,dhyan aaya ki maine kuch khaya nahi hai. he came out into the wide-open blue of spark Ling ocean stretching to the horizon, and joined the festivities on the beach.

Various stalls and booths were set around a stage area, where a small crowd had gathered to watch a performance.
"Hi, Priya kaha hai?"
"She went somewhere with her parents."
"When?ll she be back?"
"Donno."
He decided to stick around a while and wait for her. he leaned up against the booth.
Vidya smiled. "She likes you, ya know."
"She does?"
"Yeah, she talks about you."
i smiled. "How old is she anyway?"
"Ninteen, same as me."
Ninteen? She didn't look that young.
Vidya gave me a sideways look. "Why? Tum kitne years ke ho?"
"i am twenty-two." i watched her face for a reaction, but she just looked away.
"Hi!" A bubbly voice said behind him.
He swung around to see Priya with a smile, obviously pleased to see him. She was wearing a dress with string straps, showing off her smooth, tanned shoulders.
"Hi," he said, suddenly self-conscious.
"we were just talking about you." Vidya smirked.
"What were you saying?" Priya looked from her friend, to me, and back again.
"Oh, nothing," Vidya teased, and Aditya laughed.
Priya tried to frown at us, but couldn't hold her expression long before breaking into a big grin. "Hey, you wanna go to the games room with me?"

Priya looked right at aditya, waiting so expectantly for my answer that for a moment everything seemed frozen in time.
"Okay," i said, breaking the spell, and she smiled happily.
We walked through the campground, the girls leading the way. Priya danced around me as she talked, spinning in front of me and walking backwards, then spinning around again. She was so excited . . . and so exciting.

Man, what am i doing? This girl's way too young for me. But we can still hang out and have some fun, right? We'll just be friends.

We came to a building, and Priya grabbed my arm, pulling me through the side door. Arcade games lined the walls. There was a lounge area where some teenagers were playing cards, and in the middle of the room was a ping-pong table. A group of kids of various ages stood in line beside it.
Priya followed my gaze. "ins and outs. You wanna play?"
"Sure." i was pretty good at table tennis.
The three of us got in line, and it wasn't long until it was my turn, as an older boy was getting all the little kids out. He?d met his match with me though, and i quickly dispatched him to the back of the line. The little kids cheered, glad the boy was finally out. i looked at Priya, who was next in line. She gave me a big smile then pushed Vidya ahead of her. i laughed.
"Be nice. i'm not too good at this," Vidya pleaded.
i gave her a gentle, loping serve, and she managed to hit it back a couple of times before she got out.
Priya took the paddle from her. "Be nice to me too."
i served her a nice, easy one, which she smashed back at me, low and fast. i tried to get to it but the ball flew past me. i looked at her in amazement, and she gave me a big, cheeky grin. i laughed, shaking my head as i went to the back of the line.
i watched her while i waited for my turn. She was nice to the little kids, giving them easy shots they could hit, but not so generous with the older ones, especially the boys.

She was still in when it was my turn again, and i soon got my revenge, smashing her loopy serve. She made a face at me, poking out her tongue as she went to the back of the line.
A real camaraderie soon developed among our little group of players. We teased each other with silly banter, and i sometimes lost to the younger kids just to make things interesting for them. i was enjoying hanging out,

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Edited by applegoldcoin - 14 years ago

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Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Awesomeeeee!!

Lovee it!

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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dhahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

it's really nice.. congo 👏 !!!

please write more abt Manav & Archana...

i know i'm greedy.. still ye dil maange more.... 😉

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

A cute and nice lil chapter......Aditya is so smitten with Priya....i like this chirpy and bubbly Priya......and her dressing is modern too....cool.....waiting eagerly for nxt update