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Avani

@avani_9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

hey it's nyc...
conti soon
add me 2 ur pm list...

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

So Seems Like Now u dnt Have to Change ArMaan :D !!!

We all Would Love Armaan thn AR :D !!

Please Update Sooon :D !!

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dhahi

@dhahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

thnx for the pm...

ooooh 😊 .. liked the first part... congrates 👏 ... nice intro... 👍🏼

so its gonna be a human story then?

no vampire part? 😔 i was actually very excited about vampire part with special powers and stuff...

never mind.. liked the first part & character sketch..

pls introduce my Archana also soon..

i cant wait for Archana-Manav's first meet... 😍

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Hey Dear loved d character sketch.. Carry on.. Add me 2 ur pm list..lol.

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dipti

@dipi.15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

its seems interesin dear 😉

pls do continue 😃

allll dddd bestttttt 👍🏼

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Ambar

@applegoldcoin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Hey Guys.....................I am unable to proceed 3 love-stories simultaneously .So can i update each part simultaneously ,And please corporate as it becomes cumbersome to join the 3 pairs.

Or i can separate 3 stories

Please do reply........

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

hey nyce charcterz

do continue plzzzzzzzzzz

n plz add abhay n piya also in the story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ambar

@applegoldcoin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Chapter 2

Aditya's House:
Aditya Jhakar is a very normal middle class guy.He is very sincere,dedicated and hard-working towards each and every act of life.He live as a PG and three friends share the same room.He is in the Final year of MBBS.And to afford his fees,he works at the call-center at night-hours and if free in day-time has a DJ group owned by his friends as he is crazyyyyy for Music.He is the self-made person and has come from very small village near Jaipur where his Family is settled.Hey,Aditya aaj tu college ke baad seedhe Anjuna beach aa jaayeu.Kyu kya hua cheenu.Hey actually our band person is absent today to u have to replace him for today and party will be for around 5-6 hours.(Aditya thinking)OH Gosh!!!!! just after that i have to leave for call-center ,Matlab aaj no time for sleep.Koi baat nahi aditya for your parents mujhe ye sab karna hoga,i cannot back-off.Not an issue cheenu,I will be der for u.Thanks dost,agar tu nahi hota toh kya hota.

Raichand Mansion:
One day Raichands planned for Goa to relax and have fun as it was a very hectic March-end work schedule for Mihir and Tulsi.
Tulsi,Kyu na hum holiday par chale and ha hamari princess is bored to of the routine she needs break.Mihir.....Aap na woh studies kitna karti hai ki she need break,Anyways apka hukum sar-aakhon par Sir,We r going!!!!! And I will had a talk with Manav and Priya and will let u know.
(Manav was unable to join Family Holiday as was very busy with meetings,Deals etc. as was the only one to handle except Mihir Raichand).Tulsi: If u r free from your work do join us .Manav:Sure Maa

Goa:
Anjuna Beach .......

"That?s cool. So you?are camping here?"
"Yeah, with our parents." Priya smiled with such unguarded friendliness it took my breath away. "Hum yaha har saal aate hai" Her lips were a soft, natural pink. "Its a family camp." Her long, Black hair shimmered as she combed her fingertips around one ear.
"What about you?" Vidya(Priya's Friend), asked, distracting him from his stare.

Aditya looked at the pretty girl again as Vidya continued to talk. When she fell silent He realized He hadn't heard a word she'd said, and now she was looking at me expectantly.
"Um, yeah," I said, non-committal-like.
Vidya smiled. "Me too."
"I'd love to live near the sea." The pretty girl looked into his eyes then glanced away, a slight blush coming to her cheeks. The skin of her throat down to her neckline was so smooth it shone with reflected sunlight. "It's beautiful here." She looked again into aditya's eyes, and this time she held his gaze. He was shocked at how pretty she was. They were just staring at each other, and He knew He had to say something, but the conversational part of his brain had stopped working. He swallowed.
"Tumhe Khelna hai?" Vidya called, looking past him.
Aditya was on an adrenaline high, it was such a rush talking to a pretty girl like that. He wonder how old she is?
He started replaying their conversation in his head, inwardly groaning that he hadn't even said one semi-intelligent or witty thing the whole time.
"Hey!"
He turned (his heart jumped like bubbles). She was right there behind him.
"Whats your name?" She asked.
"Uh . . . Aditya."
She grinned. "I am Priya." She stood there for a moment, just looking at him. "Well, it was nice meeting you, Aditya. Hope I see you around some time."
"Yeah. . ."
She whirled and danced away before he could say anything else.
(Aditya after looking the beautiful Priya just gone mad by exchanging the first glance)

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Edited by applegoldcoin - 14 years ago