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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 1

"The Raichand Mansion"

The Family of Raichand is one of the famous business families with sound financial background upgraded by Mr.Mihir Raichand with the support of his better-half Mrs. Tulsi Raichand.

They are blessed with three kids Manav the older one Priya and Abhay the youngest.

The Raichand Mansion consists of 4 floors and terrace with all luxuries including Gym,Swimming pool,Garden,Refreshment area,various Game courts,Halls,Theater and all are guarded by individual care-takers.Each floor is assigned individually to each kid.

Manav's room is on First Floor.............Manav getting ready to leave for office in front of mirror just wearing tie............Door bell
PA:Sir,may i come in
Manav:yes
PA:Sir today you have meetings at so and so time and your breakfast is ready sir
Manav: I am coming in a while
Manav's cell rings,PA picks the phone
PA: Sir,Mr. Sharma is asking for an appointment as he has to finalize the deal.
Manav: i have a very hectic schedule this week give an appointment for monday
PA: as u say sir


Priya's room is on Second floor......................Priya is having a beautiful dream.Suddenly,Door bell rang .............
Priya: who the f**k is there
Sheela: Madame me sheela ready with your coffee
Priya(Angry): shouting like hell...............tumhe samajh nahi aata yeh thandi coffee hai
Sheela:I am sorry madame ,i am on your door past 10 minutes...
Priya: Don't give excuses ha, jao make another one and
Priya went to sleep again



Dining Area:
Mihir: Where is my sweet-Heart
Tulsi: Priya???aapko pata toh hai madame ki abhi morning nahi hui
Manav: mom i will be out-of-town due to some business meeting
Tulsi: manav ,i am fed up with u beta yeh kya hai bas kam kam aur kam,Aur bhi cheeze hai is duniya mai kam ke alava,Meri maano take a leave and go for holidays
Manav; dekhta hoo Maa

Priya's room bell rang again ...
Who's der?????your Mom...............
.OH God!!!!!!!!! Maa ....God please save me .......Maa aap kyu upar aayi ,I was just getting read.......
ha ha i know u very well .....Bas priya tum na papa and ur loving brothers r spoiling u like no limit. Be serious beta,be like a grown-up thodi toh maturity lao apne Manav bhaiya jaise ...see how punctual he is .Please do value time ......this all crap of urs will not work ok...from today u will ...
(Knock-knock) who's scolding my princess??
Thank-God paa u r there .........
Ha Ha karo save apni angel(Tulsi in taunt) Jab sasural jayegi take ur paa with u for help,,,,
Maa phir wahi baat ..........
Kya wahi baat Ek na ek din toh jana hee hai......
Mihir became senti with tears in his eyes ...
please papa mai bhi ro doongi......Sorry,Aisa toh ho hee nahi sakta ki meri bacchi roye.....
The Trio ended the convo in senti mood





Edited by applegoldcoin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Awesome
me liked it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Heeey Loved it <3 !!! loved their Characters !! how Priya is a actuall spoil brat n how the Father loves her the most <3
Waitin for the Next part for ma AdiTya <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome

me liked it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



Thanka alotttttttttttttttt .Please do encourage me by your comments as well as give ideas so i can explore my FF well


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey
awesome update...
beautiful start..
continue soon
thanks for the pm..
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome character sketch!!! Can't wait to read the actual story btw saw ur earlier post please do not change Archana and Manav 😕 would love to see how their pairing would look in a vampire story😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey very nice character sketch very eager to read further will await for ur next update!!! Looks to be a interesting especially liked the "Manav Raichand" one that looks really good!!!Keep it up!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊love the charcter sketch and the first part!! cant wait to read the next part please update soon!! 😊
Edited by anushyap - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey nice character sketch!!!!
And yes I don't mind if it is a dark love- story...,, but it has 2 be good 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice👏
cont soon

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