A Lost Hope (ArSh OS)

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

nice OS!

too sad but loved it!

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

i wont comment...i am sad...

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awwww dat ws way sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! beautifully written <3<3..cudn't stop tears :((

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

that was a sad one..

but beautifully described n written...........

thnx for the pm...................

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Srishti

@gyp.sy

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

very nice OS! :)
though i feel bad tht they were separated...but a justified ending :)

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kshanikaa

@kshanikaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

👏👏👏 This ff showed the real situation of those people who never wanted to be criminals by choice. How armaan was struggling. It was aching to see them through windows standing facing each other but unable to feel their touch. I loved when Shilpa said that she still loved him. It was so cruel. He could not even hold her for the last time. Thank you for such a nice story!!!😊

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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

OMG awesome OS.........................

i just loved it.....................the 1st scene of ArSh with window between them was heart wrenching..................Shilpa's pain Arman's helplessness......u wrote it soooooo well....................then when Arman confess his guilt while looking at Shilpa and in the end when Shilpa said she will still love him.................it was superb..........my heart went out for them.............I think this is ur best OS..................