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Posted: 14 years ago
You're amazing Naddiya👏, loved the way you make it out the truth😳, please update sooon dear🤗 can't wait for the next part, hope Maan will reach soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 44

Geet: please stop the car.
Driver: ok ma'am
Geet: you go home i have to do some work her.
Driver: looked at Geet. "Ma'am it look like it will rain i can wait here"
Geet: you go .. closed the door ...
Driver looked at her... he didnot asked again drove away.
Geet: walked to the bus station.."i can't stand Maan pain i will go away from his life"
Bus Driver: "where are you going" as he saw her getting in bus.
Geet; where ever this bus is going.
Bus Driver : please buy ticket.
Geet: oh ...she walk to the stand... buy ticket... it was rain she just let her self get wet ..she was all shivering but didnot try to hide her self under any shed..
at a sweet friend demand adding kumkum & sumit
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KUMKUM: pull Geet in bus "pagal ho kya buhot shoq ha bemaar parna ka"
Geet: looked at her ...with a blank look
KUMKUM: sit with me as bus started
Geet; seated with her.
KUMKUM: gave her shawal to cover her "take this or you will get cold"
Geet: why you are so concern for me .
KUMKUM: first you are a human being , second you are alone.. third i am elder to you.
Geet: but why?
KUMKUM : i love to do social work happy now cover your self.
Geet: did as she said
KUMKUM: strange world na karo to masla karo to masla ...
Geet: looked at her ...
KUMKUM: kya naam ha ?
Geet: MRS Geet..paused GEET.
KUMKUM : your mangalsutar says you are married .... lagta ha husband se fight hoai ha"
Geet; nai.
KUMKUM: koi baat nai hota ha hota ha ... meri bhi aaj huwi ha Sumit se she pointed at him ..a guy sitting at front seat with driver ... covering his face with news paper...Woh ha mera paati . for last 12 years we are married but he everytime fight with me on small things ...
Geet: acha:
KUMKUM: aaj he dekho it was our 11 wedding anniversary, we came her to celebrate .i just asked him lets go back as children paper will start i have to teach them ..he got annoyed .. "Mera leya koi time nai haar waqat bacha bacha ..." looked at Geet
Geet; jee
KUMKUM: if they will fail then he will say ,your kids fail... these men always blame women.
Geet:jee
KUMKUM: kuch bolo gai bhi yeh sirf jee jee aur acha acha karo gi...
Geet: smiled ...
KUMKUM: you look cute when you smile
Geet; thanks.
KUMKUM: acha now tell me what is your problem..
Geet; looked at her
KUMKUM: ok don't tell till you trust me ..
Geet; aise baat nai
KUMKUM: tou bolo.
Geet; i just want to go very far... she again gave a blank look.
KUMKUM: cup her face but your husband will be worried.
Geet: hmmm
KUMKUM: where is he?
Geet: pata nai.
KUMKUM: where are you going?
Geet: pata nai
KUMKUM: ok you come with me , stay with me till you realized what you need from life.
Geet: looked at her with you how?
KUMKUM: like my sister .
Geet: but..
KUMKUM: ok i will give you job then will you stay.
Geet; what job?
KUMKUM: my children tutor.
Geet: ok
KUMKUM: do not be scared you are save.
Geet:jee
KUMKUM: larki tum kitan kam bolti ho ..
Geet: just gave a smile
KUMKUM: when we will reach home we will call your family & tell them that you are safe.
Geet: nai
KUMKUM: your family will be worried .
Geet: please if you will do that i will not come with you.
KUMKUM.ok we will not but dear it is not right.
Geet: i paused started crying
KUMKUM:ok ok hug her i will not do any thing till you will ask me to ....fine..pat her cheek... oh you have fever"
Geet; thora se
KUMKUM : you sleep made her rest her head at her shoulder.... their journey continued.

on other end
Maan: will your boat will come or not now it had started raining.
ADI: sir see it is coming...
Maan: with hand ask it ti come fast...
Veer: you go first we will come in other.
Maan: quickly jump in the boat.. ask the guy to sail as quick as he can. self thought "if she had left me i will never forgive myself". he was again & again trying her number but it was switched off...self thought why i am feeling some thing bad is going to happen..... he reached the other side car was waiting for him .
Maan: take me home.
Driver: ok
Maan: where you the driver who drop my wife?
Driver:no he took half day off he went to his village.
Maan: ajj sab galat horaha ha ..they reached home ...the cottage was closed , watch man told him she didnot came here.
Maan: where she can go? he called Veer home
lchcha: from other side "hi"
Maan: hi i am Maan is Geet there?
lchcha: no driver came he just gave me key.
Maan: did you ask him where he had drop her?
Ichcha: sorry he gave that to my servant ...
Maan: ok thx..he cut.. "so you left me .. he just sat on stairs... i asked you myself..." he saw Adi & Veer coming.
ADI: sir kya huwa?
Maan: she is not here.
ADI: might be in mall buying her painting stuff.i will go & find her
Maan: ADI she will be not there.
Veer: how can you be so sure?
Maan: she had ask driver to give key at your home.
Veer: oh yar don't be so said we will find she must have gone back to Delhi...
Maan: Adi you call & ask how is everyone, but be careful don't let them know Geet is missing.
ADI: ok SIR...
Veer: lets go to bus stand... we will find from there.
Maan: ok.... they drive in rain maan was looking out of window "VEER wait there she is " he asked him to stop the car..
VEER: "Maan that lady is not bhabi" but he didnot listen
Maan: walked to her ..
Lady: kya ha ?
Maan: sorry..walk back to car.
Veer: we will find her .
ADI: she didnot reached home yet.
Maan: all my mistake i should have listen her..
They reached Bus stand ...
Veer: let us ask her... the went to office .
Maan: took out his cell showed the guy her pic.."have you seen her ?"
Man: laughed ..yes i saw her
Maan: when
Man: 2 hours back... she was the most craziest passenger i ever seen .
Maan: which bus ticket she bought.
Man: at that time here 4 bus were standing she bought all tickets..
Maan:what?
Maan: see here is the list...
Maan:saw by Geet name there was seat in all 4 bus .." she really don't want me to find her"
Veer: do you know in which bus she step in?
MAN:laugh in all four ..
Maan: grab his collar ... dont dare laugh
ADI and Veer pull him away.. "lets go we will find they note all bus destination."
Maan:no need she does not want me..
ADI: asked Veer to be calm...not to bother him.
Veer: ok let me drop you home
Maan: you go i will go my self
ADI:asked Veer to go ..
Maan: i am sorry Geet it is all my fault i should have listen you..he just walk slow to the cottage..
Adi: Sir you will get tired ,lets take ride.
Maan: why you are following me ?
ADI: how can i leave you alone?
Maan:why ?why? you can't leave me alone..
ADI: i promise
Maan: who you promise ?
ADI: Geet?
Maan: Adi promise are meant to be broken do you know that? i promise her papa i will take care of her but i made her cry many times, i promise to her that i will always trust her ,i will always be her best friend, i will understand her but i broke my promise see what i did... he throw the crutches . stand with open arms ...


see i am with empty hand once again..i have bank balance status but not my love ,my life . have you seen such poor person in your life. who just being so mean that with his own hand ruin his life..
ADI: just hide his tears.. "Sir lets go home " he just didnot listen Maan hold him tight ... stop a car took lift to their cottage..

to be cont.. hope you liked it do comment and dont forget to hit like button
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh it was very emotinal part so how will he found her..... Very well written part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved last few lines of maan
👏👏👏👏👏👏
geet left him
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely one didi..............ls dont make it leap make them one soon..............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey naddiya,

ur ff is really nice....can u pm me plz......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey naddiya, 😊

very nice yaar. It was quite emotional but I did not think that Geet will leave him like this.

I thought there will be rothna mnana but it blew me out. But it was depicted in best way👏

Continue soon.

i did not get the PM, (U did PMs or what)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Naddiya di superb episode its too emotional cannt express in words
😭😭😭plssssssssss unite maaneet
soon plssssssssssssssss...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was good .. liked it ...

par .. ye dooriyan kyun ...

pehle toh serial me woh log alag ho gaye ... ab yahan bhi ...

nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ............... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz .... don't do dis ........

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey naddiya, 😊

very nice yaar. It was quite emotional but I did not think that Geet will leave him like this.

I thought there will be rothna mnana but it blew me out. But it was depicted in best way👏

Continue soon.

i did not get the PM, (U did PMs or what)

thx dear
dear i didnot pm any one at that time...

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