MG FF Jaisi karni waisi bharni Pt 6,7,8 Pg 26 12/6 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

great start dear
poor geet

Thanx sweetheart
Yup senti for Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: preethia

hey thats my fav song of rihanna........


well i am glad that geet is not going to sit like a doll when he was cheating but she wants to pay it back with her extra.......its payback time geet.....v r all with u.......

waiting for the next update.........thanks for the pm

Mine too
Thanx for being wit Geet
Ur always welcome
Update by wed nyt ull get it
Feel free to give any idea or suggestion
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: namita25

awesome part...loved it...n plz add me to your PM list.

Thanx
Surely wil pm u next tym
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Different concept,Interesting.
loved it,
plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Loved it.... Pls add me to ur PM list

Thanx
Will surely pm u next tym
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: cyum321

that was very different ....

good going.

Thanx a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: -dia-

Different concept,Interesting.
loved it,
plz add me in ur pm list.

Thanx
Thanx a lot
Will surely pm u nxt tym
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
pls add me to ur pm list.
loved ur FF part 1.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: anks_ams

pls add me to ur pm list.

loved ur FF part 1.

Will surely PM u
Thanx a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Part 2
"A Woman's will is God's will-French proverb"

Maan's pov
There she is siting on bed idiotically smiling at nothing
Im sure she finished reading the novel which was in her hand from last 12hrs and it had happy ending
I had seen her stick to that book not paying attetion to me also
Now im so dead i'll hav to here that story
The way she behaves after reading any book is crazy
She gets happy when the story have happy ending she cries if the story have senti ending
She even cries seeing emotional scenes in movies
I laugh at her and she gives me angry glare but i cant help
I laugh more seeing her eyes and nose red due to crying and getting angry both at the same time
Man she is a piece and i just love this piece
She is Mine just mine
I didnt knew when my legs started moving while thnking all this and i was sitting beside my love
M:Geet i said softly
Geet turned around wit simile in her face to have more big smile and the sparkle in her eyes seeing Maan the love of her life siting beside her
G:Maan aap kab aaye and what is this you didnt changed your clothes yet
Maan who was in romantic moment jus few moments ago thinking all sweet things about his wife came back to earth
M:Geet im in the room for last 15 mins par you were busy to evn look at your hot handsome husband
G:Hahahahahahaha handsome and hot you hahahahahahaha
Mana your office girls call you DD but that dosent mean even i think the same
Really handsome banda is Nikolaus haaye Men in black she was in her dream land about Nikolaus and Maan seeing her going ga ga over other men lost his control
He paka got a piece for himself
Girls die over his body and here his wife is telling him he isnt hot handsome at all
Arey forget that she was dreaming about other man in front of him
She is so dead for this Maan thought
G:You know the story i read was about a vampire ann witch
Geet who was busy in her stroy and Nikolaus land didnt saw Maan's angry face which was getting more red due to her non stop Nikolaus talk
G:Nikolaus haaye he was so hot, romantic and passionate
He went there to kill that witch but instead he fell in love with her
Maan was silently seeing his wife wit pure anger but more of love due to her non stop bak bak
G:Actually it was not his mistake the witch was making Love spell when Nikolaus pounced on her it dropped in her mouth and she gulped it down that mixed wit her blood now when Nikolaus sucked her blood it got in him and he fell in love wit her
So after sucking the blood he had to kill her by the fire but instead he kissed her
Listening kiss word Maan's full attention came to the stroy
He got a wicked smile on his face
M:Like this he said giving a quick peck on Geet lips
Geet who was busy in the story so said No baba it was forceful and brutul
Maan did the same he kissed her forceful and brutally Geet who was busy in the story telling didnt see that cuming she pushed Maan
G:Maan what are you doing
M:Im trying to put myself on Nikolaus place so whatever he does even il do
So he kissed witch evn ill kiss u he said wit his naughty smirk on his face
Geet after listening it was in shock
She thought better not tell the stroy as it had more passaionate and wild moments and if Maan thinking behaving like Nikolaus than she is dead
G:Maan dont you think you shuld change ill get the food heated for you
Maan had seen the change of expression on his faces and he got it what was in her mind
He knew her so well so he wuldnt let that get over so soon after all she will get the punishment for saying Nikolaus hot n hadnsome not him
M:No Geet i want to here the stroy Please continue
G:Maan you will get bored come on you freshen up ill get food ready she said tryong to move away frm the bed
Maan caught hold of her hand pulled her back kissing her forcefully he kissed her till both were out of air Geet culdnt do anythg except titling her head back and giving Maan more space
M:After this he asked breathing heavily and gulping as much air he could
Geet was trapped in him he was almost on top of her and she wasnt so powerful to push him back
G:They ar ar argued she said breathing heavily 1st due kiss 2nd due to their closeness
They are married for month they have best passionate relation but stil whenever Maan came near her she would loose herself
M:N then enjoying the effect he had on her still after a month of marriage
G:She trie explaining to him that he is under love spell she said trying to control herself
M:Hmm than slowly rubbing his nose over her cheeks making her forget wat she has to say
G:She walks in for bath while Nikolaus stands there and see
Maan with naughty smile said Shuld we do the same
Geet who was almost lost herself in his passion came back n shouted No
Maan laughed n said ok continue
G:Maan plz leve it na
M:No Geet conttinue or ull hav to bath like that witch did n ill stand n c
G:No than she cums n shows him the marks his tooth gave He says he will lick it as it will soothe her but witch dosent agree they share their histroy she was saying all thgs cutting the passion or romance that had happened between Nikolaus n Ravin
Maan got it the way she was not meeting his eyes that she is doing cheating
M:Geet your telling me full stry na
G: H...ha...haan wh wh why your asking that
Maan nuzling his face in her neck said in whisper because i feel ur lieing and eating half story n telling me half
G:N...no...o...no Maan
Maan similing as he got that Geet was for sure frm her stammering
M:Than why are u stammering sweetheart he said in husky voice biting her collor bone
Geet moaned n she knew that she will face this toture if she dosent say the truth
G:Maan she said evr so softly n he knew that he was winning in giving his punishment to her
Maan still giving her kisses yes Geet im listening
G:I told u half stry after she came out of bath she stopped n closed her eyes her lips were shivering n Maan tempted to kiss them but he wanted her to complete wat she was saying
M:Yes Geet after she came out of the bath wat they did
G:The...they made love Maan got wat he wantd
M:Geet evn we shuld do it na as Nikolaus did wit his witch n im Nikolaus so evn ill do u go on saying wat wat they did
Wit that Maan got busy in loving her or so say following Geet's instruction as she was fully blown away by his passion
Some where actual things they did in novel some were things she wanted him to do
He knew her so well he sould easily distinguish between the novel things and his wife thoughts
Still smiling he did what she asked with some of his touch also

Phone ring got him out of his past sweet memory
It was the best time he had
He loved those moments and miss them like anything
His one mistake made his life lifeless
He was body but his soul was away from him
He could see her but he couldnt touch
She would smile seeing all but the moment he steps in her smile vanish
Smiling sadly at himself he went to knock at his loves door
Here goes part 2
I really dnt knw what i wrote ull wil lik it or not
Muffin wasnt there to help me
She hav exms so i didnt got any 2nd opinion on this
Im really sorry if i bored ull
Im nt so good writer so thnking of finishing this FF soon
Do reply truthfully
N give ur ideas also plz
Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago

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