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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: silkyarora

Wow superb yar....!
First meet of maaneet and both drunk ...
Hilarious part yar.....!
Mast sequence hai.....loved it...u know cudnt stop laughing while reading it....simply superb.....try continuing soon dear....wanna know what happened next......!

Simply hilarious yar...!


thank you so much dear
glad i am able to make you laugh..
keep reading hun..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.


Originally posted by: manisha03

that was really funny...........................continue soon.........................


thank you
will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83


Originally posted by: Shalve

superb update loved it....


thank you so very much....

Originally posted by: RukhluvMaan

OMG.. It was hilarious update.. Amazing. And so funny.loved it..
Slap after slap.buhahaha...


glad you liked it...thank you...

Originally posted by: namita25

awesome update....loved reading it n plz add me to your PM list.


thank you
will add you in my pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet


thank you so much dear
glad i am able to make you laugh..
keep reading hun..!!



if u dont pm me na then also i will find ur ff and read it......ur an awesome writer swthrt......!
update next part soon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85


He he he..diyan family burra nahi manegi?

Naa...they will understand my feelings...

She giggles..

Ae simran aur kitno ke saath khelegi...huh?

She suddenly feels bad...



Part 5

In order to distract him...she starts an imaginary scooter

Hey baito na...hum ghumne chalthe hai...

Hmmm...theek hai



Inside the wedding hall

Mohinder was talking to one of his relative when rano came and asked him

Aapne geet ko dekha kya?

Maine kaha tha uska mood bahut kharab hai...uska haath math chodna...ab dekho kya ho gaya...jao ab...dhundo use...

Galti meri nahi...aapki hai...aap hi ne uss anand ko damaad banana chaha na...aur ab dekho use geet nahi chahiye...hamare saare paise barbaad ho gaye...(it was geet's parents who paid for the education of anand)...ab ladki ko nahi dusra damaad dhundna padega...

Mohinder got very angry by this

Fuming...tum toh insaan kehlane ke layak hi nahi ho

Haan haan agar insaan hoti toh aapse kyon shaadi karti??

Relatives started laughing by hearing their argument...

Pointing a finger towards her..tum toh bas ab chup hi ho jao

Mujh par ungli dikhane se kuch nahi hoga...duniya wala jo hum par ungliya dikharahe hai uska kuch karo...



The imaginary scooter of maan and geet reached wedding hall...

Stop stop

Unsteadily holding eachother they made their way to 2 seats at the farthest corner from where siman and anand were clearly visible..

Yaha kya ho raha hai

Maatham

He he he

He says something in his ear and she starts to laugh like hell...

They tried to clap their hands but they never collided instead they fell over each other

Sitting properly..

(Maan and geet tries to imitate anand and simran respectively when they were in conversation with some aunty)

Haan aunty ji mein hi who ullu ka pattha hoon

Nahi kisi ne gadha kaha tha...batao anand...sharmao math

Haan who toh sahi hai...ye actually kisi aur ki lover hai aunty...patient ke saath aayi thi...par kutte ki tarah peche padd ke maine isse pata liya...mujh se bada gadha koi hoga kya auntyji? bataye?

Uss lover ko toh maine footbaal ki tarah maar diya...match interesting hai na aunty...waise mujhe toh koi sharam nahi hai...aur luckily isse bhi...

Both maan and geet together (imitating aunty here): waah mere bacchon...BP aur diabetes ki tarah sarva naash ho jao...

They both see each other and laugh like hell...

Getting bored they come out of that wedding hall...

Mujhe ride pe jana hai

Kaun si car me?

Yellow wali..

He he..chalo..

thank you so very much for reading this part...
i hope you like it if you are proceeding with the next part...
please dont forget to comment at the end...😊




Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: silkyarora



if u dont pm me na then also i will find ur ff and read it......ur an awesome writer swthrt......!
update next part soon!!!!!


updated
hope you like it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
superb yar....!
imaginary ride was tooo gud....!
mujhe bi jana hai tere sath...!

but the best part is they are going together now in yellow car.......wow...awesome yar....wul love to know what happened next...!



simply superb....!
continue soon.....!

mazza aa gya subah se forum was suna suna...but after this....my reactions are simply wow.....!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: silkyarora

superb yar....!
imaginary ride was tooo gud....!
mujhe bi jana hai tere sath...!

but the best part is they are going together now in yellow car.......wow...awesome yar....wul love to know what happened next...!



simply superb....!
continue soon.....!

mazza aa gya subah se forum was suna suna...but after this....my reactions are simply wow.....!

thank you so very much😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

thank you so very much😃



kitna thanku karti hai yar???????/
hun?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
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