FF Pyaar Ka Woh Pehla EhsasTHRD2-NOTE/90 - Page 29

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

it reminds me of mujhse dosti karoge...
same dads death... kareena coming in scene bet hritik.rani...etc
but atleast there hrithik n kareena has some screenspace... but here maan n annie never shared any thing except talking abt geet..

actually i loved ur story tooo much except this annie bit which is like cut piece not merging with storyline

sorry if u feel offened but i didnt mean to...
i just hate this annie part


but i trust u with ur story bcoz u r too gud till now...
so plzcont soon cant wait to know how will u justify annie bet maaneet

nice part...but didnt want geet and maan to separate...update soon

Note: Sorry For the delay but i've had exams which hav now finished.And now,I hav holidays so im going 2 update everyday!!! Thanks for all your support.And after the last update,alot iof ppl weren't happy with the separation so i would just like to say Pls hang in there,It is only very short.pls keep all your comments coming.They inspire me and i do read all of them,i like them to show i hav read them.😳😛

She was so true.Even thinking about separating from him brought tears to my eyes.Maan looked at me in pain,his eyes showing me exactly what mine were showing him;Pain.He squeezed my hand and wrapped his around mine.Could i cope?

Maan:Geet,Dont Worry.Everything will be ok.

Geet:But How? How will i stay without you? How will i survive Maan?

Maan:Geet,Its only for a few days.Then i'll tell Annie the truth.

Geet:But Maan...Ok.Fine.

Mum:Geet,You'll have us all.It wont be that hard.Dont worry.

I tried to smile but i failed miserably.Maan pulled me towards him and hugged me.I wrapped my arms around him with as much force as i could,Who knew when we could hug each other again? I even forgot for a moment that my mum was standing there.She cleared her throat and i pulled away.Maan leaned forward and kissed me on my forehead. I looked at him in Happy shock.I was shocked that he'd kissed me infront of my mum but happy that he loved me so much that he would.I smiled.Suddenly,We heard footsteps coming up the stairs and Annies voice.Me and Maan stepped away from each other instantly.

Annie:Geet!! Geet,Where are you?

Geet:In here Annie.Come Inside.

Annie:Oh,Maan youre Here?

Maan:Err...Yeah,Im Just going.

Annie:Noo,Stay,I want to talk to you.

Maan:Ermmm...

Annie:Please?

Maan:Ok.Fine.shall we go down?

Annie:No lets stay here,Geet doesn't mind do you?

I did mind but how could i say that?

Geet:No,Im going anyway,I need to do some stuff downstairs.Bye.

I ran downstairs and sat down.I felt so lonely without him,Like there was a part of me missing.I turned the TV on but all that was on was sloppy,romantic couples everywhere.Seriously!!But wait,What was the date? I looked and i just felt more miserable.13^th February,1 day before Valentines day.Great!!!Just what i wanted!!!! I burst out crying,I hated feeling this way,Weak.Sometime later,I heard Annie and Maan Coming downstairs.They came in the room and i looked at them.Annie smiled and Maan looked at me intensely.I looked down,He would find out i had been crying if i looked at him.

Annie:Geet,Whats wrong?

Geet:Huh? Nothing,Im Just tired.Im thinking of going to sleep early.Jetlag you know.

Annie:Oh Ok.Maan was just going aswell so i'll stay down for a bit and come up later.

Geet:Ok,Well Bye.

Maan:Im going aswell.Bye Annie,Geet.

Annie:I'll take you to the door.

Maan:No its Ok.I'll find the way.Bye.

I walked out of the door and Maan followed me.I was about to turn the stairs when he pulled me back and backed me against the wall.

Geet:(looking around worried)Maan,Let me go.Annie will come.😳

Maan:(fiercely)No,I wont let you go.Im very angry with you.😲

The fierceness in his eyes made me gulp and i stopped trying to move away from him.His eyes showed Sheer Attitude and Passion. 😲😲😲

Geet:Why?What have i done now?

Maan:You don't know?

Geet:No idea.

Maan:You made me break my promise to Meera.And don't try and hide your face,I'll still know.I promised Meera I wouldn't let any tears come in your eyes.

Geet:Oh...That...I...

Maan:When you know what to say then speak.Geet,Dont lie.We both don't know how to,thats why were perfect for each other.Now Tell me Why were you crying?

Geet:Nothing,It was just a silly reason.

Maan:Geet,It wasn't nothing.

Geet(Crying):Fine,I was missing you.Happy? I don't like having to make you feel as if i need you all the time and im helpless without you.I don't like knowing how much i need you and how lonely i feel without you.I love you so much but i dont like telling you this all the time because when i do tell you,it wont be special.But fine,If you want to know then there.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

From here,Start listening to this song Pls.It adds more effect.And From now,Its Maan nd Geets Thoughts,Geet Pink,Maan blue.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UZVOayJxdrQ[/YOUTUBE]

But my answer was in my question.He didn't leave me alone because he loved me,He wanted to be with me all the time.Geet,Why are you so stupid?What did you say to him? Oh God,I need to ring him!!! I grabbed my phone and dialled his number.It went straight through to voicemail.He probably didn't even want to talk to me now.I'll wait until tomorrow.I got in bed and closed my eyes.All i saw was his face in pain.

A few hours later...

I woke up,sweating.I felt scared.I looked around and Annie was sleeping.I got up and went over to the window,Smelling the fresh air.It was only 11:59.I had the whole night left.It felt likeages,every second took longer to pass.I missed Maan so much.I had to speak to him.I reached for my phone and it beeped,I had a text.My heart beat faster and i quickly pressed show.It was from Maan.

Tumhe kaise main bataun, kya main paa gaya hoon
Tum jo mere saath ho
Mujhko duniya mil gayi hai, zindagi badal gayi hai
Tum jo mere saath ho

PS.Look Outside.

I smiled and looked out of my window.Maan was stood there gazing at me.

END

Precap:Maan-Geet Romance and The Truth is Out.

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Originally posted by: -dia-

loved it ...great one!!!