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Posted: 14 years ago
that was one easy going wedding
hey is Geet ok??
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Posted: 14 years ago
all the 3 parts are fantastic
cont soon
KreyaArshiLover thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really loved it finally they are mr and mrs maan Singh kurana
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it but chest me pain what the hell is this yaar?
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭Very Short Update,Sorry😭 Pls Forgive this Bechari Writer and leave some Inspiring Comments to help me improve!!😳

In Every update,I play a song while i write.I thought i'd share it with you.Today,I used 'Tere Liye'From Prince As Inspiration!!

Part 52

I was disrupted from my peaceful slumber by someone shaking me.

Maan:Geet!!Geet,Wake Up!!!!

Geet:Huh?

Maan:Are You Ok? You've been sleeping for a long time.

Geet: I Think So...

I was unsure,Nothing hurt but...Still,i didn't feel normal,right,There was something missing.But i didn't know what.

Maan:We need to go down,Everyones worried.

Geet:Ok

I got up but my legs shaked and i stumbled.Maan caught me and gave me a questioning look.

Maan:Should i carry you?

Geet:No

Maan:I didn't think so,You wouldn't want to hear Meeras taunts Right?

Geet:Right.Can i ask you something?

Maan:Why would you need to ask?

Geet:Are you angry with me?

She really confused at me times.She came out with the weirdest things.

Maan:No.Why would i be angry with you?

Geet: Well...I Slept in mine and Meeras room,Not yours.So...

Maan:And you thought I'd be angry with you? So What if you slept there.I don't mind.You could sleep there tonight and i wouldn't mind.I don't want to take your freedom from you,You can still do what you want.Although,Meera would tease you alot if you slept there tonight.

Geet:Yep,Im so silly sometimes.You'll get tired of me one day and leave me,I know.It'll become too much for even you.

Maan:Never,I'll put up with you no matter how stupid you are or what you do.I'll Always love you.Always.

I interlocked my fingers with his and smiled.

Uncle:Geet,Are You Ok?

Geet:Hmmm....Im Fine now.

Meera:Good Because theres a surprise for you both.

Geet:A Surprise?

Maan:What kind of surprise?

Meera:That'll Just ruin the whole feeling of it.

Geet:Meera,I hate surprises.

Maan:So do i.

Meera:Well,Get used to them. Cause youre having a surprise today.

Maan and Geet:But..?

Meera:Shut Up!!!

END

Precap:Whats The Surprise?

Pls Comment And LIKE!!

In Every update,I play a song while i write.I thought i'd share it with you.Today,I used 'Tere Liye'From Prince As Inspiration!!😳😳😳
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update .... but a very very short one.....


my waiting for the surprise ... and wait .. wats wrong with Geet .. why isnt she feeling well....😡
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing....is it their honeymoon.......or there is another entry..............continue soon....me dying to know n looking frwrd fr nxt prt.......

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

nice update .... but a very very short one.....



my waiting for the surprise ... and wait .. wats wrong with Geet .. why isnt she feeling well....😡

She has a cold 4m dancing in the rain!!!😳
but doesnt know yet😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one!!!! cant wait for the surprise.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovly update, i think i know what the suprise is but i Will not tell i want see if i am right or not lets see in next part

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