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Part11:-

Maan goes near to her and said chup bilkul chup.

Geet open her eyes and pull his shirt and giggles and said u r so cute when u r angry. Cute like kid.

Maan:- god help me.

Geet:- baba jee ko pareshan maat karo , mujhse pucho .

Maan turns and said just shut ur mouth women before I loose control, all this happen cause of u.

Geet giggled and said hmmm; I want some ice creams now.

Maan:- geet, sleep now, it's late.

Geet get up and pull maan by his shirt and said no u'll bring ice creams now. I want it now.

Maan who almost loose control and fall in geet said geet, last time I told u sleep now.

Geet nodded her heads negatively and hold his shirt said no I want, ice creams now.

Maan freed him self and said look geet, stop being stubborn.

Geet start crying and said U don't love me, u love sameera.

Maan shockingly look at geet and said r u out of ur mind.

Geet twist her nose and said if u doesn't love sameera then bring ice creams for me.

Maan: - first what is relation between this bring ice creams for u and don't love that woman.

Geet:- well, I don't know but I want ice creams now.

Maan laughed at geet's cute antics, he said in his mind so Mrs. Khurana u feels jealous of that woman. Hmmm. Maan smiles and just softly peck on her nose and geet just blushed and turn her face when maan bend more and nuzzle his nose on her neck and said ok I'll bring ice creams for u but What I'll get in return .

Geet who feels shivering and here maan now said look at me geet and tell me what I'll get?

Geet closed her eyes and put her hands on maan's neck and said me.

Maan's eyes gets bigger and just smiles at her open surrender, but maan said geet, darling I'm very happy to heard ur open confession dear but We take our relationship in new level after we confessed it in full sense .he kissed her forehead and cheeks and said just stay here, I'll come after bring ur ice creams .

Geet in semi conscious state said hmmm.

Maan just tucked her in the spread and turn to left when he thinks it'll be not good if I left her , oh god this woman make me crazy .

He called the receptionist and said bring some ice creams, when receptionist said there is nothing and maan get angry and said I don't know from any where just bring it.

Receptionist: - but sir in late night no shop is opening.

Maan:-it's ur problem, u can get it from any where.

Here geet is continuously saying I want ice creams, u don't love me, u love sameera,

Maan :- geet, just stop ur jaap and sleep for sometime, ek toh mein isse aise chor ke kaha nehi ja sakta upar se oh stupid receptionist , just hopeless people .

Geet gets up and said u promised to give ice creams but u don't, u break ur promise, aapse aacha toh aapka car hain at least oh suntan hain meri baat.

Maan just turns and said what, car ne baat suni.

Geet get up and sit and said oh oh car ne nehi.

Maan goes close to her and said abhi tumne kaha.

Geet slapped his arms and said aapna bilkul buddhu ho,

Maan gritted his teeth and said geeet.

Geet:-I know my name ok listen, I said I loved ur car not only car.

Maan just stay there silently and then murmur something under his breath and when geet poked him on his shoulder and said I want ice creams.

Maan give her glare when again she try to say maan just smack his lips with her and both falls in bed maan on top of geet and geet at first shocked and then try to response him.

After few mins maan left her and said well I guess it's better taste then ice creams and geet just blushed and hide her face in between her palms and maan smiles to see her like this.

He bends to kiss him again when some one knock the door.

Maan just murmur again, and open the door and found a hotel boy standing with a tray fill with ice creams.

Maan smirked and said too fast.

Hotel boy gulped the saliva and said sorry sir then maan close the door and turns and smiled said thanks God finally now geet's jaap will be stop and then he placed the tray in the center table and said geet, darling get up but no response.

Maan turns and said geet but he shocked to see the bed is empty.

He panicked now what is this and where is geet now?

Then suddenly He heard

Girl:
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai

Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr
Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai

Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr

Maan looks at every where then found a shadow coming from the balcony and then see geet sitting in the swing and laughing like cute baby. Maan shook his head and called

Maan goes near to geet and poked her shoulder and said what is this geet,

Geet who is engrossed in something suddenly shouts ahhh, bachao bachao.

Maan pull her forced fully and cover her mouth by his one hand and said chup bilkul chup .

Geet who flatter her eye lashes and look at maan innocently.

Here maan just see her like this feel to take her in his arms forever.

Maan removed his hands when geet just said ice cream.

Maan murmur iye nehi bhulegi, aao, and take her to the sofa and give her but geet said this is not ice creams..

Maan almost shouts and said whattt?

Geet:-ha dekhiye na aap ice cream ke place mein chocolate leke aaye hain.

Maan just sat in the couch and said aab meine sach mein pagal ho jaunga.

Geet:- hmmm, for the first time I want something from u and u'' and start crying u don't love me.I hate u. I love ur car.u break ur promise. I ''

Maan; - geet, stop being crazy and see this is ice creams, I brought every flavor. Taste it at least jaan.

Geet who is almost feeling drowsy said nehi.

Maan:-geet, sona ek baar .

Geet nodded in her head negatively when maan pull her in lap and said r u feeling sleepy.

Geet who just want to sleep now said hmmm.but I want chocolate now.

Maan :-but u want ice cream na .

Geet:- No .

Maan sighed and said see there is chocolate

Geet look at the tray and then said sacchi, iye sab mere liye hain.

Maan :-hmmm.and think to his mind chalo kuch nehi kehegi aab ice cream ko chocolate samajh liye.

Geet smiles happily and placed a kiss on his cheek and said feed me.

Maan;- but then said ok, and feed few spoon of ice creams then see geet almost falls in sleep and take her to place in the bed . He tucked her in the blanket and turns and feels relief when he heard again

Girl:
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na

Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na Na
Na Na Na
Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai

Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr
Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai

Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr

He just turns to see geet but saw her sleeping peacefully.

Maan:-lo then who r signing and he look at the room but no one is there he search washroom, balcony every where .

Geet murmured maan'..

Maan:- aab isse kya chaiye, iye kya musibat mein phash gaya hoon .

Boy:

Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai
Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr
Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai

Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr
Girl:

Hai, Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai
Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Boy:

Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr...
Dil Mein Kya Hoti Hai

Girl:

Hulchul
Boy:

Beetabi Chaayi Hai
Girl:

Pal Pal
Boy:

Gaalon Ki Rangat Loon

Maan turned another side and searching whole room then he decides to call hotel what is this going on?

Here geet keep murmuring maan, I want ice creams now, I love ur car.I love ur chair,

U don't love me.

Maan :- lo inka bhi suru ho gaya , grt day for me today,.

Boy:

Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai
Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr
Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai

Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr
Girl:

Hai, Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai
Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Boy:

Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr...
Dil Mein Kya Hoti Hai

Girl:

Hulchul
Boy:

Beetabi Chaayi Hai
Girl:

Pal Pal
Boy:

Gaalon Ki Rangat Loon
Girl:

Ley Ley
O, Main To Yehi Chaahati Hoon
Boy:

Tanhai Ka Aalam
Taare Bhi Soyee Hain
Hum Bhi Ek Duje Ki
Chaahat Mein Khoye Hain
Tanhai Ka Aalam

Taare Bhi Soyee Hain
Hum Bhi Ek Duje Ki
Chaahat Mein Khoye Hain

Maan called reception but no response .

Maan:-hope less people and keep cursing .when he feel some one hold him from the neck and said maan I love ur car, ur car is so sweet, cute, but not u. u '..u


Girl:

Bahar Mausam Sardi Ka
Kyoon Garmi Hai Andar
Hai, Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai
Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr
Boy:

Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai
Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr...
Girl:

Tujhe Pagal Main Kar Doon
Boy:

Kar De
Girl:

Aagosh Mein Bhar Loon
Boy:

Bhar Le
Girl:

Hai, Seeney Se Lag Jaaon
Boy:

Lag Jaa
Girl:

Ho, Ye Lo Sanam, Aa Gayi
Boy:

O, Aankh To Khuli Hai
Lekin Tum Sou Gayee Ho
Jaanta Hoon Main
Tum Deewani Ho Gayee Ho
Aankh To Khuli Hai

Lekin Tum Sou Gayee Ho
Jaanta Hoon Main
Tum Deewani Ho Gayee Ho
Girl:

Hum Dono Aaj Akele
Koi Bhi Na Ghar Par
Hai, Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai
Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr

Maan :-I know u love my car now sona go to sleep.

Geet:- no.I miss ur car.

Maan :- itne raat ko .

Geet shouts kisi ko miss karne ke liye subha iya shaam dekhna chaiye ka.if u don't miss ur car who is so cute, sweet.

Maan:-hmm thik hain u continues and now leaves my neck.

Geet start crying see, u don't love me, if I hang on ur car's neck he loved it but u'.. u r not.


Boy:

Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai
Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr

Maan: - how does u hang on my car's neck, it's not human,

Geet pull maan by his shirt and sit on his stomach and said how does u say that? That car, he feels every emotion, look u behaved badly today and he feels sad so he stops to respond u today and see we r here and geet giggled.

Maan just see her and lost in her innocent beauty.

Suddenly geet hit his chest and said aap sun rehe ho na,

Maan:-hmmm.

Geet:-I want hot chocolates.


Girl:

Hai, Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai
Lagne Laga Hai Darr
Duniya Ko Bhool Jaon
Kuch Aisi Baat Karr

Maan smiles and said now she wants hot chocolates grt going mrs khurana.

He smirked and said so as per u, my car loves u more than me,

Geet nodded and said yes and and he is cute and sweet, but u r not.

Maan pull her and she crashed on his chest when she shouts what r u doing

Maan :- nothing now tell me and as per u how I'm

Geet placed her head on his chest and said u r bad, sadu, dusht danav every time u just shouts at me. U don't love me, u love sa but maan just pull her by her waist and crashed her lips by his and kissed her passionately.

Geet wriggle beneath him then slowly respond him.

Maan look at her and said so mein tumhe sirf danta hoon ha.

Geet nodded in yes, maan just rubbed his nose in her nose, cheeks, and throat and said mein sadu hoon.

Geet giggled as his stubble tickling her,

Geet :-maan, pls.

Maan :-hmm maan, pls, aur kya dusht danav hoon.

Geet:-hmmm and now maan tickle her more by his hand. Geet laughed and then said aap bahut acche ho.

Maan :- accha pehele toh kaha mein bura hoon, I don't love u. hmmm.

Geet again giggle and asked do u love me?

Maan rubbed his nose and said koi shak.

Geet :-hmmm.

Maan raised his eyebrows and said accha.

Boy:

Darne Waali Kya Baat Hai
Jab Saath Mein Hai Dilbar
Aaja Meri Baahon Mein
Sojaa Rakh Ke Sarr
Girl:

Jungle Hai Aadhi Raat Hai...

Suddenly some loud sounds went there and geet just scared to hear it and hugged maan and said maan oh.

Maan :-nothing dear, some sound from Tv.

Maan patted her head when Geet look at maan then said maan, I want chocolates.

Maan:- jaanu, I'll bring hot chocolate, ice creams, chocolate tomorrow , right now very shop close and u know what is the time.

Geet:- who is jaanu?

Maan look at geet and think this woman is gone and now he will also.

Maan:- u honey.

Geet:- now who is honey? And my name is Geet Maan Singh khurana not jaanu. ,

Maan rest his forehead on her forehead and said shhh, now sleep, darling .

Geet:- aap tab se mujhe so jao so jao kyuon bol rehe hain , aapko mein kid lagti hoon,

Maan :- nehi geet, tum bahut bari ho , u r mother of one daughter, then .

Geet suddenly remember about Anjali and start crying and said she is alone, mujhe anajli ke paas le chaliye.

Maan:- jaan, she is not alone ,yea we not there but I called Mrs. berry and she is sleeping now, we will be back tomorrow morning.

Geet:- no,I want to go back now.

Maan :- geet, itni raat ko kaise ja sakte hain,.

Geet:-I don't know u r msk, owner of Khurana Empire and u don't know, I want to go back to my home, I want to see my daughter now, she is alone there and start crying.

Maan shouts geeet stop it. How Can I take u in this hour when no car, u know how dangerous it might be.

Geet now push maan and runs to open the door and said u stay here, u don't love me and u don't love our daughter, I'll take care of her., and try to open the door but it's locked and maan who is laying in the bed just smiles at his wify.

Maan :- geet, come back.

Geet:- no , how could u cool like this, there my daughter is alone.

Maan :- geet, she is not alone,

Geet:- chup bilkul chup kya not alone not alone, I know Anjali, she is scare to stay alone, and u just left her there and baba jee kaise pati hain patni kuch mangti hain dete nehi, beti ko akele chor ke chale aaye now .

Maan :- geet, stop complaing to ur baba jee and now come here and sleep and if u want then I'm calling to Km and now talk to Mrs. berry.

Geet look at maan when maan again said come here geet.

Geet still stand there when ,Maan get up and just goes close to geet and said now y r u standing here like statue? Geet:- r u going to call really?

Maan just look at her and again asked same there when she said aap sach mein phone kar rehe ho ?

Maan murmur, nasha jada ho gaya hain lagta hain and then take her in his arms and said shhh and placed her on the bed and called in Km after some time robin picked it up and maan asked about Anjali and robin informed Mrs. berry make her sleep early , she is sleeping well,. Everything is fine.

Maan:-ok, take care and then try to cut the call when geet snatched the phone and said Anjali.

Robin is taken aback and said madam m robin.

Geet shouts give the phone to anajli now.

Robin: but ma'm

Geet: - robin, if u not obey my order, I'll fire u.

Robin:-aaj madam ko kya ho gaya.

Maan shook his head and try to snatch the phone when geet runs from there and said if u try to come close to me then I'll break ur head.

Robin in other hand whattt?

Maan :-iye lerki pagal ho gayi.

He get up and goes close to geet when she runs from there and then just throw the phone on maan'

Maan smirked and catch it.

Maan:- robin, we will call later . Take care of everything.

Maan then look at geet who is looking at maan cutely and said aapko lagi toh nehi.

Maan:- nehi, now come here.

Geet:- no . U didn't give me chance to speak with my daughter, u r bad, sadu, kharush, dusht danav.

Maan:- geet, enough of this.itni raat ko tum chahte ho we will break our daughter's sleep.

Geet nodded her innocently.

Maan:-kya

Geet:- nehi par

Maan:- aab par kya ,

Geet:- y r u shouting m not far away from u ,

Maan look at geet and goes near to her when geet runs from there.

Maan to himself what, this girl is really gone today

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon
To Main Zara Ladki Hai Ya Hai
Jaadu Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha Ruk
Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon To Main
Zara Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu Khushboo Hai Ya
Nasha Paas Vo Aaye To Chhoo Ke Main Dekhoon Zara

Maan:- stop this at 2.30 a.m. in the morning u running like this .

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Dekhe Vo Idhar Hanske
Bekhabar Thaamke Dil Hum Khade Hain
Gumsum Si Nazar Uski Hai Magar
Honthon Pe Shikve Bade Hain Baat Ban
Jaaye To Main Baat Chhedoon Zara

Geet:- so, I'm playing with u now, we r playing now, if u want me then hold me ,.

Maan:- what, this girl is really gone today

Maan runs and after few mins he holds her and pull her forcefully and said so Mrs. Khurana, now I hold u and now

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha


Geet looks at maan with her big brown eyes and said now Maan bends his head and slowly blow her lips and then lick her lips.Geet clutched his shirt tightly where maan slowly pressed his lips on her lips and gently pressed it, he nibble her lips then use his tongue to parted her lips and then enter in her mouth, he kissed like there is no tomorrow and at last geet gave in and she respond him well then when they broke for lack of air. Geet's lips r swollen and geet's blushed like and she just hugged him tightly.

Sharma Vo Gayi Ghabra Vo Gayi
Maine Jo Usko Pukaara
Ye Dil Le Liya Usne Kar Diya
Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Ishaara
Jaan Bhi Jaaye To
Gam Na Karoon Main Zara
Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon
To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai
Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha


Maan take her is his arms when she just hold her neck and hide her face in his neck.But suddenly maan feels something wet on his neck and then heard sobbing of geet.Maan said geet,

Mehfil Mein Haseen Tu Hi To Nahin
Roothe Tu Kis Liye Akeli
Jis Pe Yoon Fida Ye Dil Ho Gaya
Vo To Hai Teri Ek Saheli
Maan Vo Jaaye To Baahon
Mein Le Loon Zara


Geet sobbing and said u doesn't love me.
Maan: - not again geet.
Geet: - Then y r u chatting and flirting with those girls .
Maan raised his eye brows and placed her in the bed and sliding besides her.
Geet:-aap kuch when maan give her a romantic glare, she just slip in the bed and maan pull her closely by her waist and said geet, I never flirt with those girls, I just want to make u jealous , if u, but jaan really sorry for hurt u.
Geet placed her head on his chest and said yes u hurt me. Sobbing.
Maan :-shhh jaan, and cups her face, aapne maan ko maaf nehi karoge .Geet hugged him and said hmmm , I never be angry on u and don't say sorry, then said maan,
Maan:-hmmm.
Geet:-Ice cream.
Maan:- geet, not any more.
Geet:-oh phigal gaya.
Maan turns his head and see ice creams melted already.He smiles and kissed her nose and said now sleep.

Geet:- maan, Maan:-
hmmmGeet:- I want to play.
Maan :- It's very late night u looks tired jaan, now sleep we will play tomorrow.Geet look at maan and try to get up when maan said aapne maan ki baat nehi sunoge geet.

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon
To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha Paas
Vo Aaye To
Chhoo Ke Main Dekhoon Zara

Geet close her eyes and hugged maan by his waist and then maan just closed his eyes with a sigh relief and think what a day went today. He smiles to see geet and her act. He know tomorrow she will feel embarrass more.

Precap:-next day morning

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Back story of maaneet:-

it's past of maaneet and how and when they come close to each other.

Part three:-

Geet is busy with some files when sasha came and said geet,

Geet who is busy with some files said kya hua didi?

Sasha:- mk select a new assistant for him.

Geet look at her and then said but I'm his assistant na.

Sasha:-I know and I asked adi about it but he also support mk.I don't know I feared may be he will fire u.

Geet get up from her chair and said no, he can't.

Sasha:-I feard this and I told adi don't take u here, ek kaam karo ask mk.

Geet:- how could I, jitni baar bhi meine unse baat karni chahi mere ….

Suddenly her phone rang and it's maan who called her in his cabin.

Geet to sasha :- didi m going , will talk later.

Sasha:-ok dear

After geet left sasha pray to God for geet's job.

Geet knock the door and maan said come in.

Geet entered the cabin and find some one sitting also there.

Maan: - geet, come here and meet my new secretary Miss Nayatara Sharma.

Geet look at pari who is wearing mini skirt and short sleeve and tight top who front and back very much deep and her cleavage very much visible.

Geet looks uncomfortable and maan noticed it.

Maan :- geet , give her file and show her ur cabin and give her required information for future 2months of our works and miss Sharma if u need any help then ask geet, now or later u can ask Mrs. Reetu Agarwal.

Nt nodded in yes and said ok sir and turns to look at geet who looks at maan with lots of question in her eyes.

Geet just follow every instruction of maan then and just leave the cabin but before going she entered maan's cabin and but maan is no where.

Pinky informs her that maan is left for some urgent meeting and told her to wait in his cabin.

Geet nodded and sit in his cabin where nt entered the cabin and said u r still here.

Geet look at her and said maan, I mean sir ne kaha hain wait karne ke liye and I think u forgot one imp rule that don't enter sir's cabin when he is not here.

Nt:- but what about u.

Geet smirked and said har rule har kisi ke liye nehi hota now, follow the rule either .

Nt just left the cabin .

After 2 hrs maan came and see geet is writing something in her note book.

He smiles and just said geet.

Geet who is busy with her working said ha kahiye.

Maan:- I think u r forgetting that u r in office still.

Geet get up from her sit and said sorry. Aapne bulaya tha .

Maan :- ha. Baitho.waise kya kar rehi thi inte der se, lunch kya,

Geet :- nehi,

Maan called reception and order two lunch then said so , how is ur preparation for exam?

Geet:- accha chal rehe hain,

Maan:- good, tumne pucha nehi, kyun meine miss sharma ko hire kya.

Geet smiles and said first time I want to ask u and fight with u y r u snatching my job with out any fault then suddenly something I remember and now u proved it.

Maan: - so what I prove now.

Geet:- oh , u asked me na about my exam and u hired miss sharma for 2month so I make 2+2=4.

Maan laughed first time and said I'm impressed miss handa.

Geet now twisted her lips and said I'm going sir.

Maan :- are ruko, haar baar gussa, sab kehete hain , m angry young man but in real u r ,

Geet:- hmmm.

Lunch come and then done their lunch together when maan said so today I'll check ur preparation, last 2 days I didn't give u time and u must be take this as ur freedom.

Geet:- aap ko aise lagta hain toh thik hain .

Maan :- well geet this two months I gave u all time and u r now free from office work just study and give ur exam after this u'll again join this office.baas 2months then u'll again here as my assistant .

Geet play with duppatta when maan asked what happen geet?

Geet:-I'll miss office.

Maan :- baas 2months then .

Geet nodded and said so can I go to home now.

Maan nodded .

Here at the evening, Adi called geet and said today after she left the office , nt give some ntoe regarding next meeting and some project and from that time maan is furious mood and get's angry one every one.

Geet:- oh new secretary kaise hain?

Adi:- don't know but today she is crying after maan scolded her in front of every one.

Geet:-par maan sir toh without any reason kuch nehi kehenge kisi se.kuch toh jarur hua hoga.

At night nakul inform geet about maan that he is very angry and doing is tai chi in his work out room. He skipped the dinner.

Geet wonder what happen?dopeher tak toh acche the aise kya hua? Miss sharma ko danta dia , jarur kuch galati kya hoga isliye.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all
how r u all?
Note:-

pls read it and comment it
hope u all like it.
sorry for any mistake .
all my silent readers pls press the liked button.
all who wants pm from me for this ff pls add me or send me buddy request.
pls press the liked button also.
pm list will be update soon.
posted a long update😳😆.
pls comments friends , ur comments inspired me lots.
If I get more comments then I'll update soon.
pm list will be updated later.



love u all.🤗
rakhi.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
take care dear everything can wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
@all updated next part in page 18
part 11 and back story of maaneet part 3 also there pls read and do comment.
ur comments inspired me lots.
next part is ready but I needs lots of comments and liked .
pls pls do comments and pressed liked button

love
rakhi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Bechara Maan...

It was too good,loved it!!!

Beautiful part!!!!


Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago

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