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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats <3

I loveeed the update :) It was soo cutee <3 I lovee how Riddhima became Romeo lol i thought it was a really sweet thing to do! I lovee how she climbed the wall to get to Armaan's room rofl and I loveed the update alot! It was sad to read that Armaan didn't get into Yale, but I think the way the rest of the update went was really beautiful!
It indeed was a beautiful update
It was really really cute and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago
Altaira thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
congooo well deserved and awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wohooooooooooooooo another great part....finally the long wait is over now...oh it feels so good to see armaan and riddhima together aftr such a long wait😍
Loved the conversation b/w armaan and riddhima in the kitchen(heheh during the maggi thing)have always liked the way u hv included your personal favourites in ur ffs like maggi,hot chocolate,rain,beaches etc etc...this makes this ff fun to read and easy to relate it to oneself 😃
Feeling so good for Armaan that finally Riddhima has come up to the conclusion that he loves her .
The romeo and Juliet part was so damn Innovative and fresh...loved it👏
After reading the 1st installment I ws kinda irritated of Riddhima but loved her attempt when she tried making up to Armaan.

Munchkin!" He said his voice soft. I chose to ignore. "Munchkin! Oye Riddhima!" He turned me towards him and made me look at him.

loved this sentence...this shows the natural bond between AR...loved the way Armaan calls her Munchkin!Oye Riddhima!there's so much of apnapan and belongingness in it😊

"I love you Armaan! And I'm not gonna take another 3 years to let you know that!" I whispered and finally saw his smile widen to the edges of his face.

Finally she confessed...huff! This confession by Riddhima was extremely cute and u made it appear so damn real ...loved it.

And one more thing love the way you have started includin romantic parts b/w AR.I always prefer this over mushy mushy romantic scenes (as in the cute and sweet romance )between AR which i am expecting to read in the coming up parts

Well...i feel your way of depicitng stuffs and writing skills are becoming even more beautiful day by day with each next chapter...loved the update and love you too shruuuuu for giving us this update so quick👏👏👏

Waiting for the next part...take your time and take care 😊




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Posted: 14 years ago
That was amazing
Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congratulating on the 3rd thread
Lovely part
Ridz climbing the window was nice
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiee..........congrats 4 new thread....jst luv ur fic......finally aftr 3.5 yrs dey r togethr........hope they remain togethr......awsome part....totally loved it
nd ...next part anay main KITNA tym lagay ga...?
hope it dsnt take much long .....\tc
byeshy
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was a really good chapter!!
cont soon!!
love
shreya<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
sooo cute! cant wait for more~
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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all congrats on the third thread 🥳
and coming to the part... it was fabulously written... as always really loved the part
hahaha... rofl.... ridds climbing from ladder... hilarious scene😆
and armaan and ridds are finally togeter after 3.5 years. 👏... wow they moved along fast didnt they..... lol about time 😃
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
*EDITED*

Sorry for editing this one so so so late! Exams were on, but now I am free. So here you go, a biggy biggy comment for you. 😉 😊


Oh, before that... Congratulations on your third thread. You, your FF, your writing skills... all of this deserves this achievement. You have come a long way and may you keep continuing like this. This has to be one of the best FFs I have ever read, and I am not joking. I will not be surprised to see a 4th thread up and ready to go very very soon! This is just the sort of treatment your FF should be getting... you are amazing and keep going! 😊

Now coming to the part, FINALLY Riddhima said and... and OMG *hyperventilating* their first kiss! Yay!! 😃
😃 And now I will go thoda sa detail mein. 😛

The conversation between Riddhima's heart and brain... that was just so perfectly potrayed. You described the setting so perfectly, I could see it happening right there in front of my eyes.

I sat there, staring into the afternoon sea, the sun causing the sand to burn my feet.

It was right there, Riddhima sitting there, the sun burning and the sea! Picture perfect according to me! 😃

Then make a move, my heart yelled. Don't wait too long again!

When I read this, even my brain and heart yelled, "Exactly you moron! About time you
tell him! Seriously, he deserves to be put out of this misery NOW!"

Wow! You really are in love with him aren't you, I asked my lovestruck heart.

Any doubts, my heart asked my shyly.

Smiling, I sighed contently and began walking back. Things were gonna be okay now!

Hai... This was so cute! I can imagine Riddhima blushing right there. Cuteness!😳

And I felt so sad for Armaan.... poor guy! But I just think, that he might end up getting into photography! Just a wild guess! I have no idea where you are heading to! 😛 But then, all the sadness must have gone down the drain with Riddhima's way of saying "I love you!" That was the best part of your update... no no... the best part of your FF! It was so romantic how Riddhima climbed the stairs to get into his room! Awwww!!! 😳 She is so adorable!

"Riddhima Gupta what the f are you doing here! And like this! Are you freaking out of your freaking mind?"

Armaan, he can never be angry with her can he!? 😛 He loves her too much! This was just an example of how much he cares!

"I love you Armaan! And I'm not gonna take another 3 years to let you know that!" I whispered and finally saw his smile widen to the edges of his face.

So, finally after 3.5 years.. she said. FINALLY! 😛 Oh well, happy ending it seems! We finally get to read what we all had been wanting to *sigh* Finally! And then their first kiss... ah... that was awesome! I loved it!

Chalo, do continue soon!!!!!

Love

🤗

Edited by jm2506 - 14 years ago

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