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Sorry for editing this one so so so late! Exams were on, but now I am free. So here you go, a biggy biggy comment for you. 😉 😊
Oh, before that... Congratulations on your third thread. You, your FF, your writing skills... all of this deserves this achievement. You have come a long way and may you keep continuing like this. This has to be one of the best FFs I have ever read, and I am not joking. I will not be surprised to see a 4th thread up and ready to go very very soon! This is just the sort of treatment your FF should be getting... you are amazing and keep going! 😊
Now coming to the part, FINALLY Riddhima said and... and OMG *hyperventilating* their first kiss! Yay!! 😃😃 And now I will go thoda sa detail mein. 😛
The conversation between Riddhima's heart and brain... that was just so perfectly potrayed. You described the setting so perfectly, I could see it happening right there in front of my eyes.
I sat there, staring into the afternoon sea, the sun causing the sand to burn my feet.
It was right there, Riddhima sitting there, the sun burning and the sea! Picture perfect according to me! 😃
Then make a move, my heart yelled. Don't wait too long again!
When I read this, even my brain and heart yelled, "Exactly you moron! About time you tell him! Seriously, he deserves to be put out of this misery NOW!"
Wow! You really are in love with him aren't you, I asked my lovestruck heart.
Any doubts, my heart asked my shyly.
Smiling, I sighed contently and began walking back. Things were gonna be okay now!
Hai... This was so cute! I can imagine Riddhima blushing right there. Cuteness!😳
And I felt so sad for Armaan.... poor guy! But I just think, that he might end up getting into photography! Just a wild guess! I have no idea where you are heading to! 😛 But then, all the sadness must have gone down the drain with Riddhima's way of saying "I love you!" That was the best part of your update... no no... the best part of your FF! It was so romantic how Riddhima climbed the stairs to get into his room! Awwww!!! 😳 She is so adorable!
"Riddhima Gupta what the f are you doing here! And like this! Are you freaking out of your freaking mind?"
Armaan, he can never be angry with her can he!? 😛 He loves her too much! This was just an example of how much he cares!
"I love you Armaan! And I'm not gonna take another 3 years to let you know that!" I whispered and finally saw his smile widen to the edges of his face.
So, finally after 3.5 years.. she said. FINALLY! 😛 Oh well, happy ending it seems! We finally get to read what we all had been wanting to *sigh* Finally! And then their first kiss... ah... that was awesome! I loved it!
Chalo, do continue soon!!!!!
Love
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Edited by jm2506 - 14 years ago