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Posted: 14 years ago



Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Happy Friendship day
awesome part.
loved it.


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hey loved it simply

u r brilliant writer
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Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Awww come on a cliffhanger?
LOLOL thanks for the awesome part!
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welcome, yeha i was in mood to be mean😆😈



Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Oooh fab update
Can't wait for next
Cont soon Xx...
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

wow sooo lovely at last maaneet r together!!!!!!!!!!


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updat esoon...nyc part...



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Originally posted by: arushi_05

hi amina

really nice update
ohh finally hasa to
ab maaneet r going to meet
yipeee
& dadi was really funny
thanx for pm& plz update asap
love u arushi


Thanks for liking, i am also happy Maan hasa. I know our drama queen😆


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Lovely update dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys, i have replyed on everyones comment pl ceck them. And yeha i have the update ready should i update?😛



Amina


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Posted: 14 years ago
aaahh.. so u did bring them together.. i wonder how they both will react now.. kya yaar u just had to stop there.. lol.. cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

aaahh.. so u did bring them together.. i wonder how they both will react now.. kya yaar u just had to stop there.. lol.. cont sooon



Kya haina i was mood in being mean so you know...
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Posted: 14 years ago
di isme puchne ni kya baat ha jaaldi jaldi update kijea na
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Posted: 14 years ago

His words died in his throat, the girl turned. The girl got up and said


Gi:- Sorry Maan, I forgot that it was your seat.


M:- Its ok.


Maan sat down on his seat, for a moment he tought that it was Geet, but he was wrong.


Maan to himself:


Maan control how can Geet be here,if she was here then i had seen her at home but she was not there.


But Maan didn't know someone was late for school and came running in to the class, she was five min late. But they hadn't saterd yet so it didn't do much.


Ma:- Its OK Geet, we havn't stared yet. Maria said.


Maan how busy looking out from the window didn't notice what she was saying.


Geet saw someone sit on her place, she try to see how it was but couldn't. So she toke the sit right back of the guy.


Maan and Geet didn't notice each other under the whole lesson. They had 2 hours of history, so they did get five min break but Geet sat there and toke out her phone and headphones and stared listning to her fav songs. And closed her eyes and dreamt abt Maan. How would feel if he was here.


On the other hand Maan got out from the class room, and sat outsied the bench toke out his phone and also stared listening to music and satred dream abt Geet.


There five min break got over, and still Maaneet hadn't seen each other.


Then it was time for a little dicusstion which they should do in small groups like two three. Maria, diveded them in groups of three. All girls was wating for that they have go in Maan's group, Maan and they guy how was sitting next to him got a gruop. And then Maria told Maan and the other guy hows name was Robin, to them to trun the stools to Geet's table which was right behind them. Bcs Geet was going to be in there group. (Guys just as you know she never said Geet's name, i just wrote it bcs you don't get confuesd).


All the girls sighed that tehre chance was gone to be with Maan.


Under the whole time. Maria had seen Maan Geet, and she saw that they haven't still notice each other, she rolled her eyes, and then come up with the discusstion thing. She had plan a discusstion thing, but she just changed the groups, so Maan and Geet can finally notice each other.


Maan like always rolled his eyes when he heard all girls sight. He understood that a girl had got " lucky " to be in his group.


(hmm, i think he is the one how is lucky to have this girl in his group), he turned his stool amd got his shock of his life.



On the other hand:


Geet didn't understand why all girls was sighting like that, she heard all girls sighting like this, she rembered how this would happen in India in the class when Maan came in.


She always hated it, but was used too it.


When she looked up and saw the person they where sighting for she also got shock of her life.


Maaneet at the same time:


GM:-TUM!!!!


M:- Geet what are you doing here? He souned more angry than happy.


G:- I could ask you the same MK, she said twisting her lips.


M:- MK? Geet yeh MK ka kiya chakkar hain?


G:- MR. Kadoos. She said with attitude.


Maria tought:


Oh god, they have just met and now they are starting to fight. She thinked while rolloing her eyes.


All the other in the class got confused.


Geet couldn't hold her brave face anymore and broke down.


Maan fast came and hugged her, tryed to cal her donw, and all the other girls in the class got jealous seeing Geet so close to Maan.


After sometime Geet clam down.


G:- Maan, couldn't you have called me, not even a messege i hate i hate i hate i hate.


M:- But i love you Geet.


All the girls looked at Geet with clare jealousy, on girl broke her pencil which she had in here hand. A other fainted



G:- But i hate you.


Maan got down on hi knees and hold his ears and apolgieed.


But Geet was Geet she wouldn't let this go so fast. So she said



G:- Maan we still are have our lectuer lets continue that then we can takl abt this.


She said and got and sat on her place again. Maan got up sighted thinked:


Maan, this will not be so easy, pl Geet ke babaji help me pl. He siad and got to his place again.


After th lecuere was over Geet got from there, Maan followed here, but Geet didn't talk to him.


He sighed and got from there and try to come up with a plan, and after ometime he came up with one.


This must work, Priyanka Chopra got impressed by Salman Khan when he sang this song for her. He tought.


On other hand


Geet sat outside her class room, and listen to th boring Swedish music ( My and Geet's toughts are so same) she was going to put her headphones on when she heard music from they radio


Guys listen to this song:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JDt14ayKhA&feature=related


Balika tuhmare sapno ka rajkumaar ara hain, warma baraat, dholi sajakar dhula cahara hain.



Geet stared checking her phone if the music came from there, like accidentally stared one this song on her phone, bcs she has same song on her phone.


Magalam sapada.

When she was completly sure it didn't come from her from, she ran to schools entre hall, and got her shock of her life, Maan was standing there in a SHEERWANI, and has some dancers at his back


heya,heya. Heya, heer ye main sera band ke aya rey


Maan stared dance around her. And toke her hand and circkeld it,

Geet wasn't read abt that, so she almost fell


heya, dholi baraat bhi saatme laya reh, heya, heer ye sera band ke aya rey, dholi baraat bhi saat main tho liya re, ab tho na hota hain ek din bhi interzzar



Maan toke step forwad and Geet toke a step back



soni aaj nahi tho kaal hai, thuj ko meri honi rey.


Maan sang in Geet's ear by mistake, which Maan after wards looked with a inoccent face, which Geet gave him a smile and walked of from there


Tenu leke main jaunga dil dekhe main jaunga, tenu main jaounga dil dekhe ke main jaunga

Maan follwood her, and danced. And try to beg her of fogivnees on whole way.

.

Heya, heya, heya, heya.

Geet got in the libary and tought, sight of realif from Maan.

Aa khe dhe zamane se tu meri ishq ki hain daastan, heya.

Then Maan came, lifted her of the stool, Geet got schoked face and same time angry face.

Oh janniya khede baha ne se. Main tera jism hoon. Tu meri jaan, kuch na chupa.

Geet said whi her eyes to let her down and he just released her and bang she fell on the floor, she had a open mouth and look at Maan in anger. She got from there and went outside

Muskilo se milta hain itna sona pyaar, soni jis tere jesi, na mujh ko, na mujh ko. Khoni rey.

Maan came also there she opened the door, and Maan followed her, when she truned around and saw Maan she toke a step backward when he toke a back wards, it was stairs behined her she was abt to fall when Maan caughed her.


The song stopped for a moment, and both got lost in each other eyes. When Geet realized what she was going and freed her self and ran.

Tenu leke main jaunga dil deke main jaounga, tenu leke main jaunga dil deke main jaunga.

Maan ones again followed her.

And suddnly Geet stopped and gave him a sign check this out. And she stared dancing. Maan stared at her a dreamy way. When she was finesh she looked here and there, that everyone was looking at her. She blushed and ran from there.


ja asie na tarpa ke dekh le mastbhare andaaz se kuch na chupa,

Maan sang again, and danced also.

haya, heya. Oh jana tu awaz ko apni. Aa mila ab meri awaaz se, are haan khe de haan.

Now Geet was irrated Maan following her like this and came up with something.


Suddnly Geet came from nowhwere in a red lengha, and stared sing:

kar diya hain tune mujh ku jun bekara mahi ke diya dunya se, main teri. main teri hogay reh, tere naal main aungi. Sasural main jaungi.

She got to Maan. And Maan had a big big winner smile on his face thinked :


Finally maan gaiye.


Ayyy, tenu leke main jaunga dil deke main jaunga, heya, heya, heya, heya, heyya

both stared dance togther. After the song was over, Geet looked with a big smile at Maan stamped on Maan's foot and twisted her lips and got from there.


Maan tought:


Oh, god how did i forgot that she is a Shah Rukh Khan fan not Salam Khan.


...


So here is the part, what do you think. I am damn nervous abt the song thing pl tell how it was.

Amina

Edited by Kriyanshlover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

it is awesome yaar

loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
haha!! damn funny!!
everyone around them play cupid!!
god they are lucky!! lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update yaar loved the full form of MK...Mr. Khadoos😆😆😆
hai kya song gaaya maan ne😳😳😳
continue soon dear
love-Piya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan manofy geet-I like it


thnx 4 pm

update soon

gr8 part

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