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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry guys for not update for sometime. I have been really busy with school and right now i am sick also so. But i thought give you guys a update




In India:



Daadi ma, Adi, Dev, Yash and Vicky came to HM.


Daadi came to talk to Mohinder and Rano. And they boys came there bcs they where "bored" at home so they thought go with daadi.


As daadi,Mohinder and Rano didn't know why they where so bored at home. All of them sat in the living room and they boys was looking every where.


MO:- Boys is it any problem?, Mohinder said trying hard to not to laugh.


Y:- No dad no problem.


MO:- Oh ok, i thought you wanted to meet to Meera. But she wanted to go out, so i will say it to her to go.



Yash got up suddenly and yelled:


Y: NO!.


And all the three elders brust of of launghing. And Yash looked around embaressed.


MO:- Go up she is her room with they other girls. I think you three also want to go.


It didn't take they boys a sconed to run upstairs in the girls room. And Daadima, Mohinder and Rano. Brust of launghing again.



After some time they heard they door bell ringing. Rano got up and opend the door and looked shocked.



And yelled Daadi and Mohinders name. Both of them came running to the door. And there stood daarji with Brij and few goons.



Upsairs all was having a eyelock scene. But broke when they heard Rano yell. All of the came outside saw Daarji, Brij with there men.



MO:- What do you want. Mohinder asked daarji.


DA:- Is it this way to talk to your elders?



MO:- I know how to talk to my elders, but not the persons how don't

know anything abt respect his children how can i respect him?




D:- How dare you say so to me? Anywasys i am here to get Geet.




Meanwhile upstairs:


DE:-We have too something fast, guys think.



All of them was walking from a coner to an other coner. And back.


Suddenly Rajji yelled:


RA:- Idea!!!!!


And all look at her.


V:- OK say.



RA:- Look, we can do like this...



And told them her plan



Down stairs:

MO:- Sorry she is not at home.


DAR:- Mohinder Hnada how are you kidding. I know she is at home.



MO:- No she is not at home.


DAR:- Move away, i will go up and see.



Daarji go up to Geet room and open the door and got in he saw a girl in a wedding outfit and got to her.


And yelled


DAR:- Mohinder!!!!


Mohinder and all came up saw someone in a wedding outfit got shocked.


DAR:- You said tht se wasn't at home?


Then all the couple came in and said.


ALL: OH shit.



DE: Sorry uncle we ot late we was just taking Geet to the temple so she could get married to Maan bro.And then very fast winked at him.


And Mothinder uderstood the plan and winked at Rano and Daadi. Rano and Daadi understood. Rano got out and called the police.




Daarji started to laugh and thought he has destroyed there plan.


He didn't know that he was the biggest dumb persomn in the world. He got up to to "Geet" toke her hand.



And gave her too Brij and got out. Vicky on other hand felt like mudring him for touching her.


But Yash, Dev and Adi stopt him.


They toke her downstairs and was going to got out wehnpolice came in and stopt them.



P:- Daarji and Brij Handa you are underarest.


DAR: But what have we done. First trying to forcully marry a girl to someone and someone how is not even authority.


Daarji adn Brij got shocked and lift the gungat and saw Rajji under it and got more shocked.



Daarji got really angry and Brji hit Rajji how almost fell on the ground but before she could fall down Vicky saved her.



He lifted her up and placed her on the sofa.


He got to Brij and stared punch him badly. The police tried to stop him but he was nowhere to stop.



And after many attempt it didn't go. Then Rajji came running to him hugged him from the back then he stopt. With little help from Adi, Yash and Dev.


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Ok here wa the update. I tried to do something new. So i thought not bring Maaneet in this update hope you like it. I thought abt including Maaneet then i couldn't write more. Sorry next par will shurely bring Maaneet in it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...brij and dadaji arrested👏...nice plan by raji...now geet is safe...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago



Nice update...and the plan made by Rajji worked..
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME
yes finally they're in jail!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago


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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar
but i wanted maneet :(
but this too was awesome loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...brij and dadaji arrested👏...nice plan by raji...now geet is safe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey guys i am back with a update, Here is the part. And it has Maaneet in it.

After police toke Daarji, Brij and the goons away. All tried to calm Vicky down. But the new only one person could do that and that was Rajji herself. So all leaved them alone.



After like two hours she succseded.





In Sweden:


Maan was still running behind Geet. And tried to talk to her. And Geet was nowhere to listen.


All the studens was looking at them. And All girls looked at Geet in jealousy.



A frustaded Maan. Grabbed Geet and toke her in a empty place. And pressed her against a wall. And sealed his lisp with hers. Geet tried to push her away with her hands. But Maaan was stronger her. She had no other than give in. The kiss began more and more passionate. Then suddnly Geet came back in to sense, and though they where. So she tried to push Maan and got succed this time. She was about to walk out, when Maan puled her back.



M:- Geet do you wanna know why I havn't talked to you all this time. Then listen. He said in a very harsh tune.



G:- Maan, you are hurting please. Let me go.


M:- No you have to listen to me now.


G:- Maan we are still here and our class starts in sometime. Can we talk after that.


But Maan was nowhere to listen. He was about to open his mouth again.



But Geet said something before



G:- Please.


Maan nodded. And both went to there class.



Geet and Maan. Sat together. On same bench. Maan was not taking any risk, He new Geet will try to run away. He didn't want to give her any chance.


After The lecture was finish, And so was the day of school. Maan toke Geet's arm and pulled her.



G:- Maan where are we going. Please stop.


Geet sighed. And yelled.


G:- MR. MANN SHINGH KHURANA.


And Maan stopt. Geet pulled her arm away.


G:- Maan you are such a MSK.


M:- I know I am MAAN SHINGH KHURANA.


G:- NO, MSK means, MR. Kaddoos, sardoo.


M:- WHAT?, Geet what have you done with me first you made me half mad. And now you have changed my whole name. You have destroyed my whole name,and reputation. The people how was afraid of me. Laugh at me these day. Geet you are really mad. And you make people around you also mad.


Hearing this, giggled really hard.

God, if this like this now what will happen with me after marriage.


Hearing about marriage made Geet's face red as a tomato.


Maan looking at Geet blushing. Made him feel to pull her cheeks. But controlling it. He asked her


M:- Why did you stop me.


Geet cleared her throat and showed her the books she had in her hand. Maan still didn't understand anything.


Geet shacked her head and said


G:- Maan I have to go to my locker to leave this books and get my bag. And same do you have to do to.


Do you remember?



M.- Oh yeah, meet me here after.


G:- hmm, and got away. Walking away my heard something. And looked at Geet feet and saw the payal he had gift her. She had on them her feet he was so happy and went to his looker.


He came there and toke his things, and was about to go out when a girl from his class came up to him ad said.


GI:- hi I am, Anna.


Anna was one of Geet's friends. Geet and Anna lived in same street and was best friends. Then Geet joined her class she was very happy. She talked to Geet and after some days she found Geet boring. Then ignored her. Then Maan joined she stared liking him. When she saw him with Geet her blood boiled in anger. She was not letting him go away from her so easily so she made a plan to seduce Maan.




M:- humm, hi Anna. Did you need something.


A:- Yes you.


M:- WHAT?


A:- Yeah, you are so hot,cool smart, handsome, good looking ou should be with me not someone like that Geet.


M:- What the hell are you thinking are you out of your mind. I love her.



A:- And I love you, she said coming more near him. You know, you should be with someone like me. Tried to kiss him and Maan tried to back away.


Just in time Geet came


G:- Maan, where, where you I was wating for you so long. She came and kissed him on his lips.




So here is the update, please leave comments. i want long and many comments, you faster and longer comments, you faster update.



Hope you like it



Amina

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