Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 86

Originally posted by: Hannah.

I am finally commenting after eons!! I chip in my 2 cents on MSN to you from time-to-time, but I haven't been online in so long (HOLIDAY yay yayy) hehe, but randomly today I had a quiet afternoon to myself and I wanted to read something and your FF popped to mind so I jumped online to have a read and was happy because I was able to read 2 updates in one go :D

Anku first and foremost may I say, you really are growing as a writer, I mean if you compare your writing style from part 1 to the currently form it has bloomed to, you are definitely growing which you should be super proud of girly <3 I hope to see it's continual growth in further parts :D <3 Moreover, I like the pace the FF has taken, it's not too slow, and it's not jumpy, each part transitions nicely.

Okay enough of my technical jabber, lets get to the part. I assume you had planned the storyline beforehand, because I remember reading the preview (Armaan being upset) for the previous chapter AAAGES ago and eagerly waited for it to be posted and now it is finally here, I was happy hehe! I can see where Riddhima's insecurities lie, I mean feeling alienated has huge hand in that is her fathers fault hence she is practically clinging to Armaan (for both love, support, family, and the lack of extra support) her love, but if there is one thing that fails Riddhima at time to time is her stubborness, she her self acknowledges that Armaan is right, but her adamant behaviour and love-filled thought process is clouding her true judgement. Armaan on the otherhand, knows that one out of the two is going to have to act out of behaviour for Riddhima to enrol in the clinic hence his attitude as much as it pains him is justified. I have a slight inkling of a feeling that Riddhima will come to terms with the decision and they will both plan together for her to go... I mean at the end of the day he loves her too much to ruin the opportunity of her completely healing and she too I think will understand that it is the right thing to do <3

I await both their cathartic voicing of opinions in their scream-fest-outburst in the next part as each explains their POV... Okay minus the screaming hehe, but I look forward to reading how they explain to one another their opinions and the outcome...

Lots of Love

Hannah xo

Originally posted by: herms_angel

*Under invisibility cloak*
*Peeps through it*
Is Anku around? Nope! Safe to comment!😆

Erm, Main bhool gayi Anku from which part do I have to start commenting *Sorry!* though I remember reading every part.So I thought I'll start from the marriage part for I felt that's a turning point of the story.

Part 11 :

This part was so beautiful Anku.
You have described all that happens in a marriage scenario so well!
Right from the preparations, to the a bride's nerverousness, to the friends lending out support, to the grooms excitement and every little thing is so subtly described.You know what was the best part? They way you made the wedding seem so complete even with the absence of Riddhima's parents.I loved how you made 'friends' play dual roles - both playing friends and family.

There's so much of DMG gang flavour in the whole gang-AR interactions which makes me feel as if I'm not reading an FF but actually watching one of DMG episodes.The way you understand AR and make us understand them is one of your biggest assets.You're surely one of those writers who make the characters especially AR come alive.This AR wedding, I'm sure is what all AR fans would have asked for had DMG been on air.Everything in this part was just BEAUTIFUL.

PREVIEW

OH OH! Yeh kya hogaya? I wont comment on this, lemme rush to next part please, cant wait!

Part 12 :

Another very well written part Anku.
Must say I love all the gang-AR interactions you show us, they are so so DMG! (Read Muski's reeti-riwaaz, AR-Gang Cake moments, Armaan shutting Muski with his 'one-plate' ritual) Gosh! Muskaan will always be the typical Muskaan! She's one of those characters who always spreads happiness and laughter around even though she's broken into a thousand pieces inside.Loved the way you showed her conflict between her mind and heart.She's a winner all the way, and hope she gets her due.

Good to know Anjali values Atul, atleast in your FF! Poor fellow had to slog a lot after her and yet bechara didnt get anything in theshow.The Nikki-Abhi story was good to read too, and its nice to know Armaan-Abhi are at peace now.Again like I have always said, the way you read AR and make us know them is commendable.Their bond, understanding, respect and love for each other just grows with each moment they spend together.Lovely update!

Part 13 :

I love the way you started the part.AR moments are always cute and in this one the whole "Mrs.Mallik" was adorable! Armaan and Muski make a hilarious combination! I love how "besharm-ly" they went about arguing.

These lines sure cracked me up 🤣 -

Arey wah ye acha hai, tujhe aise khulam khulla BALCONY mai romance karte hue sharam nahi aati, toh mai kya hawa mai knock karun," Muskaan said shamelessly.🤣

For your kind information Dr Chadda , the balcony has a door," "Which wasn't shut" she argued back immediately, and Armaan didn't have an answer for it.🤣

^^That was so DMG-ish! 🤣

The next set was a sad one.Sure Armaan and Riddhima must have felt real horrible for the only family they have as of now was leaving.But yeah like you said, work always comes first.
I'm glad Muski will be there for more time, that'll do good to both AR and Muski for AR will atleast have someone from the family and Muski will get much needed break from work (Or rather say Rahul).

The whole AR convo post the phone call and the rest of the part was sad but it bought realistic feel to the story yet again because life isnt fair always, good and bad things happen and life is all about how we deal and overcome them.

Divorce is one of the painful realities of life and its sad to see people part ways, but sometimes that is the only way left.Armaan has had a tormented childhood and even now the ghosts of his past doesnt let him stay peaceful, and its real sad to see him like that, but since we dont know what made his parents take that decision we cant really take a stand.But they are to be held responsible for the kind of childhood he had, for the time they had been with him, they could have surely given him a much better chilhood that any child would deserve and for that they have told him about something as important as this since he is their son.

Armaan & Riddhima are in such state now where both are abandoned by their families for reasons known best to them.May be these testing times will allow them to prove that they are indeed the pillar of strengths for each other and that they both will always be ONE no matter what happens.

Precap : Its sad to see people with such mindsets who pass comments without even knowing what is what.Love the way AR always stand for each other when ever required.Hmm I sense storms coming up.But as usual beautiful update Anku!

That's it for now, I'll read the rest of the parts as soon as I get more time.
Before leaving, Words fail me Anku to tell you ke tum kiss calibre ki writer ho.
You are just A.M.⭐️.Z.I.N.G!

EDITED :

Part 14 :

The majority of the part was so adorable Anku.Lovey-Dovey moments of AR, Armaan-Riddhima supporting each other through thick and thins, Armaan-Riddhima-Muski bonding and everything was so touching! The ending was sad ofcourse knowing the times of separation are close.I love the way you write Anku, giving attention even to the minutest details of the story, the way you describe everything little thing makes reading so enjoyable.

Part 15 & Part 16 :

Anku, what do I say? Seriously, you have improved so much since your first part.
There's a gradual growth in your writing, the pace and the transistion from part to part is so good.

These have to be one of THE best parts of your FF Anku.
Writing romance stuff can be easy but it is in such situations that a writer's work is tested.And I can say you have done full justice to your story, the way you have written this part just blew me away.

The way you have showed us the trails and tribulations of your characters without it all seeming dragged is commendable.Love the stand your FF takes on Armaan-Muskaan's friendship.It shows true friends make life worthwhile.The message you get across this part is so true that life is beyond the "I love you's" and sometimes one has got to take the decisions which might break their hearts into a thousand pieces but ultimately its for their own good.

I like the whole concept of Armaan-Riddhima-Muskaan staying together and dealing with their own problems, but still being with each other whenever needed.You showed us AR's plights, their fears, their insecurities and all that they are going through so very well.Riddhima's stand is also quite understandable as its actually very tough to give up on someone who is your sole reason for existence.

Good to know (Part 16) that Riddhima's finally realizing what's good for both of them and is making an attempt put behind her fears and insecurities and trying to move on.Going back to India : Why I'm not shocked? I know this is sure one of Armaan's way of getting Riddhima ready for the treatment.Like they say, "Jab ghee seedhi ungli se nahi nikalta, toh ungli tedhi karni padti hain". LOL! I know We'll get to know Armaan's stand on his idea of going back to India in coming parts.

But that's what 'Core Of Existence' is all about, battling all odds, being with each other through thick and thin and finally emerging out a winner.
Keep it up Anku, really proud of you :)

P.S : Sincere apologies for going being so laid back on comments.Many things kept me occupied.And tell me tune mujhe maaf kiya, otherwise cloak ka sahara lete rehna padega!😆

*Puts on the cloak back*

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Eeks, I haven't edited my comment! Oops! I'll do it tomorrow or something, after my exam! Sholly! =(