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Posted: 14 years ago
amazingg part! loved it! cont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M



Thanks so much Ayesha for liking the part🤗 and you're analysis made me realize the kind of depth this update had.
To clear a little uneasiness for you. Riddhima already understands that Armaan and his intentions are just for their better. AND Armaan already knows the kind of state she is in. He isnt angry with her. He is just behaving cold to provoke her. But yes the next part and their conversation clears up everything . And you'll see a transformed Riddhima =)

Thanks so much love for appreciating , means a lot.
The next part will clear, all the mess



U r most welcome dear...thanks for taking time out & writing for us, means a lot, really appreciate your efforts😃

Yep i know yaar ridz already knows that armaan is doing for them only,he understands her fears & is not angry with,he is doing just to provoke her & make her confident by getting over her insecurities😊...i understood that during the part as well...but still u know na that feeling to have everything cleared & talked out,gives different level of satisfaction (which i know u doing in next part & im excited for it)😉
i understand ridz did a mistake, but she realized it & will further realize as well. AR understand each other so well it is amazing,like ridz knew arman is pretending to be angry...armaan is a darling,luved his cute moments, especially da breakfast part,armaan sleeping next to ridz & she feeling his presence,all so sweet..& now i just want AR to both say their feelings & understanding out to each other verbally😛

Im waiting eagerly for the next update & for everything to clear up😛


Edited by Ayesha87 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ankita.
I just loved this part.
I'm happy that finally Ridz has made up her mind to go for the treatment.
I hope AR may resolve their fight soon.
Muski is a sweetheart.
Why is Armaan talking about selling his flat and all?
U r a great writer dear.
Plz update the next part soon.
luv ya
Asma
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing part ...finally she'll agree for the treatment !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
So I finally finished reading both parts :) Ankuuu you're such a good writer man! i loveee both updates..now you gotta update again soon <3

Hmm I don't know man after reading part 15 i don't know what to say lol riddhima needs to stop being so insecure and scared...but i guess it was justified after reading part 16! but it was soo depressing seeing both of them in such state! I wish Riddhima would stop being so sad and become the fun and happy Riddhima like we got in DMG 1. I miss that riddhima man :( and I miss AR nokh jokhs...
The little AR interactions are beyond cute and I think you've described it so beautifully that I always run out of words to describe how awesome your update was and how good you're writing skills are!

Now on top part 16 :) yes i've finally read it ROFL sorry man for commenting sooo late! I was actually really excited to read this part after reading part 15..and i'm sort of glad that I read this update late and got to read 2 parts at once so and didn't have to wait an update 🤣
The interaction that both Armaan and Riddhima had on part 16 was just indescribable..and I was really eager to read it ok I'll stop saying that over and over again ROFL
I have always loved the interaction between Armaan and Muskaan both during DMG and in your update! and i love the relationship they share with each other.. So Armaan's silent treatment and Riddhima finally accepting doing treatment! Dude it was awesomeee

Ok maybe i should have waited after you updated another part to comment..now i'm curious again and I CANNOT wait any longer to see what happens next..so you better update soon ankuuu
Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update anku...I never thought on that aspect that Riddhima said all those words just so that Armaan would change his decision...and same goes to whatever Armaan said...wow! it's just amazing how much we, especially you as the writer has understood AR's love and characterized their characters...I am just amazed how you did this!

Armaan showed cold behavior to Riddhima just to make her make the right decision..what can I say? Ar's love is better than a fairytale..I loved each and every small small moment you included like the pasta, the medicine one, etc. I am eagerly waiting for the next update...I can already sense it's gonna be sad, heart-wrenching yet full of love.
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOL! That was i was wondering while reading the part, why all of a sudden ridhima is talking about going back to india LOL. Oh i forgot to mention bout the bond muski and armaan share :) i always wanted see them like that in the show, but they never showed :( so you are excited about writing the next part?! so i hope the next part is sooner and even its a long weekend :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Ankita!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
AR Love is something very very different... I loved dem ...
Ridzi insecurities... feelings ... Armaan cold behaviour towards her just to realise her is real!!!
The way u described each and every thing in this part is out of the WORLD... Hatts of to U :)

and the kitchen scene was CUTE...
Waiting for HIS and HER outburst in next part!!!!
can't wait... Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ankita 🤗

First of all, really sorry for not commenting since last two updates.. but you have been really understanding about it all .. thanks for that!

As for the updates, they have been going exceptionally well. The track is moving steadily yet so convincingly. Everything, every bit falls into place. Never for once i thought, this FF is loosing the charm. Its unique charm!

You describe emotions and feelings so beautifully. All so genuine. Like it would be the only thing that would surely happen. How you keep things and emotions balanced is outstanding! Commendable.

AR, here, have such a relationship, so high so strong that every trouble, every pain can be washed by the strength of it. Beyond Level!
Love them. Much and much more. Epitome of love, they're.

I cant believe this is your first ever FF. You seem to be a pro at it! Beautiful writing.

Cant wait for the happiness times to knock their doors =D

Love
Vini
P.S: Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha87



U r most welcome dear...thanks for taking time out & writing for us, means a lot, really appreciate your efforts😃

Yep i know yaar ridz already knows that armaan is doing for them only,he understands her fears & is not angry with,he is doing just to provoke her & make her confident by getting over her insecurities😊...i understood that during the part as well...but still u know na that feeling to have everything cleared & talked out,gives different level of satisfaction (which i know u doing in next part & im excited for it)😉
i understand ridz did a mistake, but she realized it & will further realize as well. AR understand each other so well it is amazing,like ridz knew arman is pretending to be angry...armaan is a darling,luved his cute moments, especially da breakfast part,armaan sleeping next to ridz & she feeling his presence,all so sweet..& now i just want AR to both say their feelings & understanding out to each other verbally😛

Im waiting eagerly for the next update & for everything to clear up😛



Aww writing is something I love doing, even though I didn't know I could carry of writing a continuous story until I started writing this one.
But I am really glad you guys like it, and are so encouraging about it.

I understand what you mean. I don't like to keep them fighting either.

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