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Posted: 14 years ago

#721

wow amazinngg part! loved it ! cont son pleasee

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cuteshilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#722

hey love the part

it was awesome

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firoza malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#723

hey.. gr8t..part

loved it..

continue super soon..

thnnx 4 da PM!!

tc.

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Zarqaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#724

comment edited on page 103 :)

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neelima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#725

it's awesome. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#726

I AM SUPER SUPER SUPER SORRY FOR EDITING SO LATE :$ but i think you should start blackmailing me so i edit soon 😆

coming to the part:
I am so sad they aren't going to Paris :'( but i knew it wouldn't happen :| it's so obvious that something has to come up hmph

and ahh muski and armaan my fav <3 seriously u wrote their part so nicely! I loved how she was explaining him and then gave him a hug and everything! their friendships the best :D

OMG I knew ridz would find out from somewhere else! like at first I thought she overheard muski and armaan later...but then i was like no, its prbly the docs! and it was :(
but omg she got so angry at armaan :O and those last words :( ahh that like just broke his heart but he's so understanding, only if ridz could open her eyes wide enough and see how crazy he is about her 0.o

I just adore the way Armaan calmly explains her and doesn't even u know take it to heart as much as someone would have after Ridz's last few words :( he's so loving and caring <3 but i can't wait to read how he gets her to the hospital to get her treated :D

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#727

simply amazing part...

loved it yaar..

u have written the emotions n wat they r going through...sooo beautifully..

both r hurt...dont wanna get separate..

but its for their betterment...

waiitng to see...hw armi will convince her to go for the treatment...

thnx for the pm...

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Rumz_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#728

amazing. oh god why should rdz hurt armaan yaar. he luvs her right.plz cont soon

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RITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#729

nyc part ... feeling so bad 4 armaan ... bt i dnt think i can blame riddhima 4 watever she said ... dose ar her insecurities and her fear of loosing armaan dat r speakin up ... plzzz continue soon ...

thanx 4 d pm ...

ritika

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Maitree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#730

EDITED.

I had to Edit this,because I could not help but read it All over again. What do I say,Anku? What have you left me with to stay? I feel like ..I don't know. I was staring at some parts and wiping my eyes during some others. Your writing does that to me.It was as usual Awesome,the way you wrote it left me Speechless.

I Loved how you showed Muski-Armaan bonding. She understands him so well,and they all know how much it'll hurt HIM to stay away from His Basket. I was on the verge of tears when I read that part "I can't do it Muski"...the words said it all. Literally had to control my tears because it set my heart pounding. How can he just love her So much? Then the way he hugs her and goes to sleep,praying all the time for her to get better,it made me smile through the tears. You do know very well how to awe your readers,don't you,Anku? Seriously..for Core of My Existence,every word I say is Less. Truly less.

The next part of it was heartbreaking and heart-wrenching. I couldn't stop crying. He was trying so hard to make her realise that He loved her and could not stay away from her,but they had to do it..Because thats what they were there...For Riddhima's treatment. The way you write is So Stunning,I tell you Anku...You should plan on giving me tips. Seriously. Every word,Every letter,every sentence,weaves such a impact on my heart you can't even imagine. I Love You Anku 🤗

She took everything to heart.In both their opinions,Riddhima and Armaan both are right,since they love each other,they've lost each other so many times...and if they do it one more time,maybe they'll not be able to live through that. The fears,the tears..Insecurities,Arguments..Is all because THEY are the CORE of their EXISTENCES. Beautifully written,Anku ❤️ Sometimes you don't leave me much words to say. I Love You So much 🤗
Love,
Maitree❤️

Edited by ..Maitree.. - 14 years ago