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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaay you finally updated <3 I was waiting for this part :)

I love how this is such a long part..it makes me feel soo happy..
the AR part are soo cute..I lovee the bonding that both of them share, its such a cute thing to read.
Muskaannn she's an amazingg character and I like her alot in this part as well..I love how he jokes around and makes everyone smile.

Awesome update and I can't wait to read the next!!!
Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMAZING ONE.LUVD IT.SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENTS.COLLEGE AND STUFF,CONT IT.THE PREVIEW WAS SCARY THOUGH.LUVD THE STORY.CONT ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
god dat was sch a fab part ... i mean i loved d way u showed d love and d relationship btween all of dem n esp armaan n riddhima ... loved d part so mch ...

thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...

ritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear thanks so much for the update👏

It was such a beautiful part...honestly it showed the true love between AR & it was so pure & sweet...these 2 lovers will win anything that come their way...love it😳

Thanks once again...take care😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! awesome part anku...haha loved how Mushki was almost taking Armaan's life away lol but his comment about eating from he same plate left me into splits🤣
you showed the amazing bond between the gang we saw in DMG...I am speechless👏
loved all the talks and moments between Armaan and Riddhima...OMG! Finally they are Mr. and Mrs. Mallik..our dream😍...awww loved how both of them gave such a pleasant surprise to each other...I guess that is what makes them so special...always think about the other one! Also I loved how Armaan tried to make Riddhima understand that whatever Dr Shashank is doing is for her happiness only even though he is so so wrong!

It was a lovely, sweet, calm and peaceful update..I completely loved it!

waiting for the next part but I guess that's gonna be kinda sad but it's okay coz perhaps that phase is also needed in the story!
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Posted: 14 years ago
EDITED.
Part 12 : "Lo bas issi ki kami thi , ab toh Juliet bhi Romeo ki bhasha mai bolne lagi," This line made me smile like crazzy! Aaah,the gang brings back so many memories,and your FF is truly the DMG-style,I so so Love how you write,Anku!Aww I love how u added that part about Rahul and Muskaan! RM were my fave couple after AR! And when Rahul left,I was sho sad :( I understand Muskaan's feelings though,how its a conflict between her heart and mind..and even though Rahul wants to (maybe) bring back things again,he can't..I wish u bring them together in this FF yaar! I miss RM,okay..AR more :(
I loved the AR understanding and the bond you showed.The love flourishing among those teasing and cake cutting,gifts and hugs,among friends..the way they kissed and she held out her arms for him..Everything was so beautiful.Then the way Armaan got all excited with his gift,and Riddhima told him that she too knew about what he wanted!Aww! Eeps I forgot about the lil tent part,I love how Armaan gives surprises to his princess,as I always did in DMG! And the way she said,'Yahi raho na' made me smile like I was watching them together onscreen,I mean KaJen! Thank You Anku,for writing this soo beautifully,AR are so pure and touched in your FF,their love is something that comes out clear here..Inexplicably Undefinable.
The last part when she tells him everything,about her father and family,and then he consoles her,that bit made me think that the bond between them had grown stronger.I loved how Armaan was there was for her and would be :) I missed you Anku,and I'm so glad I'm back to comment here.I Love You Soo Much <33
Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

comment edited on page 82 :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Surpried much? 😆 😃

I AM HERE COMMENTING FINALLYYY <3 :D
i just read everything i had to catch up with and Kumari Ankita Mehra Ji ILYYY <3
All the parts i missed reading since part 9 i guess :/
They were all fantasticaly fabulous! :D <3
I wont be able to comment on detail but I Have HAVE HAVE TO comment in detail ont he proposal and The Perfect Wedding indeed 😳[ 8->]
SO THE PROPOSAL
I CANT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVED ITTT 😍 Riddhima Proposing Armaan is always a treat! :D <3
ILOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED IT SO much! made me all senti 😃 ❤️
All their rib-crsahing hugs that followed <3 😍 P E R F E C T.
And riddhima's words <3 THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! and everything that followed the proposal! OMG Anku you write so beautifully! <3 😍 ILOVEYOUUU <3
That made me super super duper duper super duper HAPPYYY for Armaan! this guy DESERVES all the happniess and love <3 ILOVEHIMSOMUCH <33
And Armaan fulfilling everything Riddhima dreamt for her "Perfect Wedding with Her Perfect Guy" I LOVEEE <3 Everything he did for her <3 ILOVE LOVE LLOVE HIM and HER <3
and Riddhima being super admant on taking care of his health <3 LOVED IT! :D
So after the proposal part got over i so wanted the gang to be there on the wedding!
AND YOU DID BRING THEM :DDD
You dont know man Muski and Nikki's meet with Riddhima! OMG i miss DMG so much :( <3 and this was perrrfect! <3
It made me all teary <3 I MISS THEM :( <3
And then the TACOS sceneee! weee :D ILOVE THAT SO MUCH!
ILOVE LOVE LOVE THEMMM <3 i miss them :( and this was PERFECT! 😍 again i was all teary :( <3 I dislike you for that Ankii /fine. but it makes me happy :D ILYYY <3
"Champ" i miss this so much :( <3
Champ-Bhai ki jodi ILOVE <3
And Abhii << he annoyed me as well but it was fun hehe.
Okieee and then when Armaan wants to see Riddhima her Perfect Bridee AWWW <3 ILOVED THAT PART SO MUCH <33
Everything i wanted to see for their wedding ..i was reading it and it was so much phun! :D
AND :O Abhi calling Riddhima hot. :| kutta he is. AND ARMAAAN ILOVEE <3 that scene was so cuuteee <33 ROFL 🤣 and atul calling him Dr. Moody! TRUE THAT IS 🤣
and then
T H E P E R F E C T W E D D I N G <3
SUPER LOVEEE!
Armaan in black 😍 super hottt! <3 and and i could so imagine his zillion-dollar dimple wali smile fixed on his face! AWWW 😍
And riddhima in a perfect white gown! everything whitee! 😍 SUPER LOVEEE <3
and that AR conversation before getting into the church. AWWW 😍 iloved it so so so much <3
AND THEN THE CEREMONYYY :|
ANkuuu ILY SO MUCH MUCH FOR WRITING IT EVER SO BEAUTFIULLY <333
It was indeeed
P E R F E C T 😍
and all their feelings theri eye locks before saying "I Do"
OMG :| SO PERFECCCTTT <3
ILOVED IT SO MUCH <3 you rock ankita ji <3
and then "You may kiss the bride" scene and Gang;s teasing 😆 SO MUCH FUN <3
and then their kiss ☺️ 😍 perrrfect! do you realise? i used the word perfect so muhc in this post! hehe <3
and then the preview! 😳 super sad :| :( 2 motnhs :| is huge man :( </3
and the 12th part 😃 😃 😃
My face was this 😃 al senti :( <3 AWWW MAN ANKU ILY!
everything was so perfect! their gestures towards each other <3 AWWW 😍
and LOLOLOL Muski and Armaan's bickering! SUPER LOVE ❤️ 😆
i miss them!
and then i loved how you described every couple's status!
RM's was sad :( Rahul is wrong man :( </3
AND OMG Atul-Anjali's was the best <3 IT MADE ME SO HAPPY! :D Anji finally confessed <3 hehe <3
I MISS DMG :( <3
Okie then when they enter. Mr. Armaan Mallik wanting Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Maliik to open the dooor. P E R F E C T 😍
and the decorations and the cakeee.. AWWW ❤️ 😍
and then the gift ceremony <3 LOVEEE <3 😍
everything was so pretty and perfect!
the dinerrr LOL. Armaan is such a s smartyyy <3 😳 ❤️ ILOVE HIM 😍
And then their scene the balcony scene everything was super PERFECT Ankuu!
Your writing skills are PERRRFECCCTTT ❤️
ILOVEYAAA <3
and i cant wait for the next update!
update sooner <3
and the latest part was super cutee! and oh i forgot the AR conversation regarding their families! ILOVE AR <3 they are PERFECT!
ILOVE LOVE THEM <3 😍
and i love youu so much Ankuu! everything in here is PERFECT! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Ankita that was an awesome update loved it waiting for the next update do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ankita, that was an awesome update!! Totally loved reading it and really looking forward to the next update!!

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