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Posted: 14 years ago
'Beautiful' is one word that would describe that wedding Ankita.. Everything was so perfect in its own way coz Armaan is so perfect.. Why doesn't God manufacture such creatures? We have to make do with our imaginary copies.. ROFL!
But really.. Its such a wonderful feeling that has settled in me after reading this story so far.. The way Riddhima proposed and the way Armaan made everything perfect for his princess.. So glad that their friends were there for them even in the absence of the most hated character on TV (read Shanky.. LOL... i.e., if you dont count Riddhima in season2 :P)..
Its awesome that Armaan and Riddhima have taken this step even without his permission coz here he is being unreasonable and quite and ass..
Oh.. and i have to mention.. its so cute to see Armaan's interaction with kids.. I cant help but go aww.. Lol!!
I hope Riddhima keeps up with her will to get well soon and i hope she does too.. Armaan wont surely let her give up.. Its a new beginning to their life.. and i know its going to be a beautiful journey.. as beautiful as this part was..👏 👍🏼
Love ya!! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!! That was amazing!! Loved reading the update to the core!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww thois was such an amazing upd8 loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ankuuu <3
This Was Just Beautifully Written <3
Loved It Sooo Muccchhh <3
The Way You Describe Armaan <3
Is Outstanding <3
I Seriously Have No Wordss Ankuu <3
You Are A Pro <33
Hats Offf <333
Continue Soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowiee...
lovelyy yrr...
great !
thnks alot for d pm😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
anku,
as usual it was an amazing update...awww I loved it that AR's friends were together with them for their most special day ever...seriously, their friendship is so amazing..you described every emotion so beautifully...loved how Armaan didn't listen to anyone but went to Riddhima to calm her down coz just one look of her was enough to let him know what she has been/is going through..it reminds me of a dialogue from an AR scene where she asks him "tum meri khamooshi padh sakte ho na?"...
in short, lovely update anku and I am waiting for the next update already...hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!!
thanx 4 pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow...

it waz awsome...

bt still i wiish atleast anjie waz there with riddhima...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Preview


"Armaan you've made this day so special for me , I cant tell you how happy I am , how much I look forward to our life ahead. " Armaan smiled warmly at her and pulled the blanket around them closer, pecking her lips lightly. " Riddhima thats all that matters to me, your happiness,".Riddhima smiled " No Armaan we're in this together, and your happiness matters to me as much as mine does to you."
Armaan looked at her and raising her eyebrows at her asked " Really Riddhima ? ", Riddhima looked at Armaan a little shocked at the tone he had used. "Armaan? Tumhe shak hai... " Armaan nodded in a no and said " Nahi Riddhima, (he paused and sighed ) Riddhima tum jaanti ho ki meri khushi tumse hai, if you really want me to be happy , then please Riddhima, take your treatment seriously, ab jo bhi karna pade, lets be together in this and we'll get through, you'll be ok, trust me." Armaan looked at her expectantly and Riddhima looked at Armaan hesitantly, Armaan kissed her forehead and looked down at her, while she looked in his eyes to see the confidence and nodded in a yes, just to see his dimples setting in and eyes twinkling with happiness.

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"Riddhima, ..Riddhima , meri baat toh suno .. Riddhima.. " Riddhima just didnt hear him out and rolled her chair out of the hall room into the room, and banged the door shut. Armaan sighed and entered the room nervously , not knowing how to convince her.He opened the door softly and saw her sitting on the bed crying her eyes out. He rushed to her trying to hug her " Riddhima baby isme rone ki kya baat hai, try and understand Basket, mai jaanta hun its not the easiest thing to do but we have to do this "

Riddhima just wiped her tears and moving his arms away which he had around hers said " We have to do what Armaan, tum mujhe keh rahe ho ki mujhe tumse do mahine door rehna padega and you want me to be ok with this ? " Armaan saw fresh bouts of tears streaming from her eyes and sighed in frustration, he couldnt believe Riddhima was the one who was practical between the both of them, wasnt he always the emotional fool ?
" Look Basket we have to be practical about this, aur sirf do mahino ki toh baat hai. "

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"You know what Armaan I didnt expect this from you , mujhe laga tha ki mera Armaan mujhse bahut pyar karta hai, irrespective of however our life is now, and however I feel about myself , I could see a new life through your eyes, a confidence that made me stand up for myself and my happiness, our happiness , but I was wrong." She paushed and looked at him grimly and said, " Why would you want to be with me haina ? tumhe mujhse door rehne mai kyun koi problem hogi, I have to accept that am not the same now, maybe not even for you. "
Armaan looked at her astounded by her , he wanted to say so much but he couldnt utter a single word, he couldnt believe what she had just said. Tears blurred his vision, not wanting to break down in front of her he walked off from the room, shattered and hurt deeply by all her accusations.

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Here is a preview guys , the update comes soon too, not today though, am yet to write a lot. I know its a sad preview but the story has to move.There are rough times ahead, but lots of AR and from now on even the others 😃.

Guys there is a request, whoever just joined to read or who isnt getting pms , I need you to send me a friend request so I can pm you the updates.
Edited by Ankita.M - 14 years ago

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