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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

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Just Read the Previous 6 Chapters! Sorry for taking Forever! lol. Anyways...Anku...I love the way you Write! Your Writing Style is Unique. You describe everything in depth, which makes the FF all the more intresting to Read. WOW...So much has happened in these 6 Chapters. I LOOOVE Armaan! The amount of Love he showers on Riddhima is BEAUTIFUL..It melts my heart. His concern for Riddhima touches my heart. He loves her So Much! I'm So Happy Riddhima has finally started believing in Herself, i'm glad she's giving herslef a chance to grab Happiness, I'm THRILLED that she's sticking up for herself and Armaan! Shanky makes my head boil in anger! -_____- How Heartless can he get! Feel like throwing a Flower pot at him. LOL. But seriously he's becoming so damn annoying! My heart goes out to AR. I love the little cute fights they have. The Whole day-nursery thing reminded me of my work experience a couple of weeks back, the kids were cute as hell BUT they were so naughty! LOL. It was fun though i enjoyed it, some of the children at the end of day gave me a bunch of flowers (which they proudly pulled out from the Garden 🤣). AR MARRIAGE? Next part seems really Intresting! You need to Update sooon! I shall be waiting! <3 U.x.

Edited by ParaDiseMb - 14 years ago

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Aquarius18

@Aquarius18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

OMG awesome FF!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
You've kinda shown what we wanted to see in DMG after the shootout. But what I really love that you did is the emotions you depicted by Armaan of his childhood. DMG got that track TOTALLY wrong and we all wanted to see the serious side of it. Unfortunately they went the 'comedy' way which did not work.
I also love how you got Riddhima to finally stand up to Shashank and which only happened ONCE in season 2 after the body heat fiasco. But that still did no good and actually made things turn for the worse. I love the independence you show of Riddhima and how she takes a stand for herself and Armaan.
And OMG their upcoming marriage was not expected!! It kinda reminds me of Vivaah.😳 Me being me would love to see a suhaag raat hehe. But I doubt that can can happen because of her condition. Still it would be nice to see them in a fully committed relationship with an actual name to it.

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Aakriti Sood

@Hazel-eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Ahhh... This was d Best part till date Anku...👏
M in Love with ur ff all over again❤️...n dis was truely a Core to their existence..Our beloved AR Existence... It was so ARishhh
M touched...
I am speechless d way u have presented AR heart to heart talk😊... d way Armaan Opened up his past in front of Ridhima, It actually brought tears in my eyes!😭 Can't tell u how happy i am reading this part of yours... i hope ki yeh thoda aur lamba hota!!!😆
M In LOVE...M In LOVE❤️

ANKU..Keep it up!!!⭐️

I hate Shanky... saala kabab mei haadi... He is not worth to be called a FATHER... Kamina -____-. I just get angry whenever he talks rubbish about my Armaan... He is alwayz attacked by Shanky n his rude words!!! Leave My Armaan Riddhima alone for Godsake...

GO TO HELL Shashank Gupta!!!😡

Waiting for my Armaan Riddhima marriage🥳...The Most Awaited Moment!!!😍 I Loved d last part...where Armaan and Ridhima are showing Confidence,strength n Power in their LOVE this time... This part was Beyond Imagination and even my expectations!🤗

Good Going Anku <3👍🏼

Muahhh <3

LOVE
Aakriti😃

Edited by akufull2mad - 14 years ago

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Aakriti Sood

@Hazel-eye

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Hey Anku...This part was awesome!!!
I loved it yaar!!! Keep it up dude...your ff is awesome!
I didn't knew u have so good writing skills...😆
It was so realistic...

NOTE: This comment was of Page 5 were i reserved d post...n when i edited...woh yaha aa gayi...as u already know mera I-F account thoda theek nahi chal rha hai!!!

Edited by akufull2mad - 14 years ago

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Aakriti Sood

@Hazel-eye

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

srry!!!
Galti se ek post aa gya...😲

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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

RES

I'll edit all my spots by Thursday :) I promise 😳

Edited:
waah I fulfilled one promise for editing at least 😆
instead of Thursday, I did it on Monday night 😃

okay i think this has to be my favorite part!!!!
the part with Armaan opening up to Riddhima was really sweet, and i loved how all Ridz did was give him a tight hug and tell him that what will she do leaving him :) that simplicity is what i love about AR :)

the Skype call was amazing!!! Ridz answering back to that Shanky -____- ughhh i hate him!!! even after Ridz said all that I was expecting some shocks from his side. I was expecting him to be nice and to be like i feel horrible for behaving in such and such manner with Armaan :( but instead he still has the guts to say such disgusting things 😡
tehe but our basket is not less what mast jawab she gave :D

OMG MARRIAGE :D I CAN'T WAIT FOR THIS 🥳😍

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

nice part!
i m hating shanky right now
can't wait for AR 2 get married
cont soon

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purpleekajenian

@purpleekajenian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#348

Aaah!!! i finished reading 4 partsss😃 Since Ankita jii ne mujhe PM karna bool gayii koi baath nehyyy jii, i read it n im sure u r nt gonna 4get me next time 😉

ok well well , this was so goood n i luvved reading it!! Armaan sharing his childhood with Ridzi was so touching ... im luving hw Ridzi getting confidence n hw their relation is improving by sharing cuute moments together ...

N mst importantly i luvved the last part.. i was waiting for them to take the decision to get into an official relationship, so that Kamina Shankyy stop his bakwaaass...N Ridzi finanlly did it,, i luvved hw u wrote that part, where Ridzi full confidence ke saaath shanky se peheli baar baath ki aur wo bhi shaadi ke baare mein😊... I'm sure the following updates would be more interesting n full of luvvv😍

ahchchaa AR ke shaaadi mein mujhe bulaanaa , teekey😆

Well written girl!!! Update sooon😉

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

Part 7
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1652398&TPN=45

I reserved 2 spots to write my comment for part 6 and 7 and I think I accidently wrote my comment for part 6 on my part 7 reserve..and wrote my part 7 comment on part 6 reserve..sorry lol i messed up :(
I was wondering where my part 7 update went i got soo worried not finding it anywhere lol

Part 8
I lovee this part <3 It was AWESOME!! WOW :)
One of the most WOW and beautiful part and I don't even know what to say I don't have words...it was AMAZINGGG!!!

The part where Riddhima talks to shanky was awesomee i don't like him hmph...it was needed and you did brilliant! I don't get what his problem is jeez..but I'm glad that Riddhima told him off!
The part where Armaan tells Riddhima about his childhood..omgosh anku honestly it was beautifully written and it was so touching to read it :)
Now they need to get married ASAP Anku I can't wait any longer lol
Entire update was beautifully and update soonnn

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sanju

@Sanju_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#350

ankuuu, I am so sorry that I have not commented since a long time but was really busy...still I read the updates though...can't resist you see...hehe

but as usual absolutely amazing update...loved how Armaan and Riddhima are finding their happiness with those kinds...loving the belief Armaan has in him regarding Riddhima's health and loved how he instilled that belief in her too...now Riddhima is also looking at the hopeful and bright side...honestly, the way you have portrayed their inner conflicts, especially Riddhima's about how Armaan is not getting his happiness was so real and the way you have made Riddhima accept that for Armaan he and his life is nothing w/o her is beautiful too...in short, a very endearing update and I completely loved it. Please update asap.