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Posted: 14 years ago
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ANKUUUUUUUUUUUU <33 ahhh this part was saddd! aww Armaan was cryinggg :( and OMG UGHH Shashank pissed me off :| how can he say that to Armaan? and bechara Armaan didnt say anythingg! and i am proud of Riddhima! YUPP SHE STUCK UP FOR HER MAN! thats how it should be psshttt! LOL
oh and I love how you writeeee tehee <3

Edited by NomaLuvsKSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys I am finding it a little tough to keep track of whome to PM so all those who do want it pleasee like this notee ! Thanks a ton Love you guys !!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update and fic anku

wow!!!!!!!!!!is the word that strikes me reading your fic...you know i wish you were writer of dmg and we could have had real emotional and touching scenes with AR bonding getting stronger...and well armaan really has matured alot in your fic..and uff what can i say about shanky he is the same age old villian here accusing armaan like anything😡😡...i mean yaar instead of motivating his daughter he is demoralising her...and armaan is actually the person who is her biggest motivator...the way you showed riddhima doesnt want to depend upon him totally but she ends up hurting herselfwas soo emotional to read...this is one fic which is soo different from what i have read all these times...and the latest update you did of part 4 was amazing.....i loved how armaan explained her importance of her in his life,...his lines are always soo damn touching and riddhima is no less just to make armaan have a normal life she was distancing herself....but dude they ARE MEANT TO BE😳😳you know the way she clinged to him and cried in the end not leaving him was AWWWWWWWWWW SHOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE and armaan smiling 😃...i love the end lines where riddhima says
Riddhima looked up at him and nodded ," Haan Armaan ,I will fight ,for you ,for the both of us .And we'll make it .I promise you Armaan ,iss bar mai tumhare yakeen ko haarne nahi dungi," She smiled wide through her tears and Armaans smiled back content ,his heart bursting with happiness at the confidence in her eyes.

looks like its the beginning of things getting back to normal with riddhima getting fine soon😳
Edited by nikki0809 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
RESSSEEEEERRRVEDDDDDD <3

ANKITA MEHRAAAAAAA :|
Ankurrriiii you;re fabulous! :| ILOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE LO V E D The PART! So Amazing! Super sad! :| So much stuff happened which I always wanted to see! Riddhima going against her Kharooos dad EVERYTHINGG! :D
ARMAAAN MALLIK :| this guy defines PERFECTION man! EVERYTHING he does for Riddhima is just so AMAZING! ILOVE how he takes care for her.. its not even care but SO MUCH CARE! <3 AWW MAN <3333 ILOVE HIM INFINITY! <3

RIDDHIMAAAAA <333 I can SO feeel her.. all the pains all her thoughts :( She's going through so much :( Reading her thoughts was super sad :(:(:( And again Armaan going to her to the window at that "kisi aur ke baare mein soch rahi ho" waali LINE.. AHH ILOVE SO ARMAAAN! <333 All that he DOES for her.. AWW ILOVE HIM! <3 Their convo with Anjie was so sweeeeet <3 AWLE <3

Oh then comes Mr. Kharooosss :| Kameeena :| ARMAAN ILOVEYOUUU <3 This MAN is super AMAZING MAN! <3 he didnot say ANYTHING! If i were there i'd have started a HUGE Argument LOL but he is Armaaaaaan naa <3 -PERFECT! :D And i Love how he stops her with placing his hand- AWWWWWW <3

Okiee the Pasta bit SO CUUUUTE <3 Him after tasting it AWWIIEEEE! <3 So adorable!
And I REALLY Love how Riddhima wants him to be himself and vent and how Armaan is all he CANT because HIS Riddhima will be more weaker :'( AWW MAN
THIS is what I wanted in DMG.. Them not thinking about themselves but for him/her! AHHHH<3

And the living room bit :|||||||||| THAT WAS SUPER SAD MAN :'( him wanting SOMEONE to vent his feelings to :'( :'( and how he takes the cushion :| :'( THAT WAS LIKE SUPER SAD :((( ILOVEHIMSOSOSOSOMUCH <333

Okie now the BEST part! YEAAAAAH BABY YEAAAAH Riddhima gives Kharooos Her piece of Mind! -WOOOHOOO <3 ILOVE it when she does THAT all for HER Armaaaan <33

ILOVE EACH AND EVERYTHING SHE SAID TO THAT KHAROOOS! All so APT- Kharooos deserves to GET this from her Daughter Kameeena :|||
Everything she said SO RIGHT! it made me SMILE so much! <3 She was voicing for Armaan AHH something i ALWAYS love to see/read! <3


ANKUUUU this part was so FABULOUS! <3 ILOOOVEED IT! <3 everything in here was PERFECT! You write SUPER DUPER AMAZINGLLY WELL! <3

AND i cant wait to reaaaad the next part and you say its gunna be a step to HAPPINESSS!
Update SOOOONERRRR! <3 MUAAAAAAH

ILOVEYOU LOTS AND LOTS! <3


Edited by Sani-KarAni-KSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anku!!! finally read it!!! IT WAS AMAZING!!!

the best was when Riddhima stood up for Armaan and called that Shanky at night. The way she expressed everything was really nice! finally something will go in that Shanky's head.
This scene reminded me of that scene in the basketball court when Ridz found out about Armaan...I loved the way she had confronted her dad then!
This reminded me of that alot! that Ridz was the one I loved alot!!!!

poor Armaan! he always takes it all and smiles through it! I wish he spoke up for himself! but that man is so selfless :|

I love the way you write Anku :)
Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This part was amazingggggg ankuu!! I lovee how you portrayed how Armaan and Riddhima are feeling, the way you explained it was so beautiful.
Armaan is the most sweetest guy everrr :) I love how he takes care of Riddhima, and understands her.
I'm glad Riddhima talked to Shashank, this was really needed. He was making me soo mad I'm glad Riddhima told him how she feels. I'm proud that she stood up for herself and Armaan and told Shashank what she should have said a long time ago.
It's so sad how Shashank treats Armaan, he doesn't deserve to be treated this way at all, he's soo sweet and considerate!!
Update soon pleaseee I lovee reading your FF and I get very eager to read what happens next lol
Seriously you make me go speechless with your beautiful writing style, and your concept and overall your general FF!!
Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago
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ankuuuuuuuuuuu, I am speechless and you left me to tears😭
I have read many FFs by now and all are beautiful, like a fairytale, but this one is the most heart-touching and surreal FF I have ever read!!!

How did you do it? I mean really how could you explain every single emotion Armaan and Riddhima are going through so perfectly? honestly, now I am realizing how much attached to DMG and AR we are! Had it not been our understanding of Armaan and Ridhdima's characters and their love, you wouldn't have been able to pin down their love and emotions more than perfectly and we, readers wouldn't have been felt the emotions you are describing and I am actually really really proud of it!!

what shall I say about the update? I am speechless...my heart went out to both Armaan and Riddhima...none of them are wrong at all...they are just thinking about the other's happiness even though it meant hurting oneself and the other indirectly...Riddhima is not wrong at all in hoping Armaan to move on despite the fact that she is aware about his unconditional love towards her because it must hurt her a lot to see Armaan doing so much for her and she not being able to reciprocate it and poor Armaan...he has always kept "her" before himself and I am glad at the fact that Riddhima acknowledges it but shashank😡..I felt like crying at what he said to Armaan and wanted to teach a lesson to shashank...all in all you don't know how happy you made me by making Riddhima stand up for Armaan even though it was meant to go against her dad...he is her dad but she had to do it because sashank has been wrong, in fact too wrong in understanding Armaan, his love, and his motives....loved it yaar...felt so bad for Armaan that he doesn't even have a friend there to share his pain and agony😔...can you please make me, Sanju enter in the story and be Armaan's friend...hehe kidding😆

seriously, you make me feel the world'd emotions every time you update...I am happy that AR are gonna have a happy time now...plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited on page 3 and 7 😳

yes FINALLY :|

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ankuuuuuu! I'm finally here to edit my spot, sorry I'm late! :( Anywho, I am SO glad you started to write because trust me, you are an AMAZING writer! I love the way you write hun! <3

The first part was an amazing introduction to your story and I loved the way you unravelled the characters without rushing into things. How you showed such a caring side to Armaan is commendable, I can actually relate him to the same Armaan in DMG and this is a good thing 'cause as you said, this is a continuation from Sept 21st. Without a doubt I love the way you have portrayed him so far! His confusion and dilemma is completely justified because of Ridhima's state. As for Ridhima, my heart goes out to her, she's going through a lot, I can totally feel her pain because of your writing and the way you show things in such great detail!

I love how you showed us AR's past and the things that had taken place after 21st Sept, it was heart-wrenching yet interesting to read, I enjoyed reading it a lot! They fact that Ridhima holds so many fears, in a way is definitely reasonable, she doesn't want Armaan to be stuck with her forever, especially 'cause she's paralysed and will need a lot of support throughout her life or at least until she's better. I honestly hate Shashank! He is always the bad guy and they way you've shown him in this FF, he just looks monstrous to me. But I'm sure he'll play an important role in getting AR together perfectly well. Despite whatever Shashank said, I am SO glad that Ridhima stood up for Armaan! It's something I've always wanted to see in DMG..a real confrontation between Ridhima and Shashank! You did an amazing job by showing that. :D I am glad that AR have sorted out their misunderstandings and I'm sure this will be the beginning of a beautiful journey ahead!

Muahhhhh! Continue soon <3
Edited by TheMelody. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awesome part.....it was very well written......I just love the way you describe their emotions....I feel really bad for both of them....they both just want to see each other happy....seriously I just hate Shanky....he never has anything nice to say about Armaan.....but I really liked how Riddhima stood up for themselves....that was really good
Thanks for the pm
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