First of all CONGRATULATIONS dear 👏 for your new thread 🤗
Next, I hope you are aware that there is an opportunity to publish any one of your FF in a magazine , here is the link, check it out
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1649188/opptunity-to-publish-ur-ff-in-magazine.
It's all up to you whether you want to get your work published or not but I wanted that you should know about this.😊
Now coming to the updates I loved the update BUT I' m not happy about the Precap :(
Maan is a mature person though egoist (contradictory traits but not impossibe), I just can't think of him taking such a big step like shooting himself... I mean, yes he has not tried to make the relationship work but at the same time he has not forced himself on Geet. Even Geet admitted that he ended up making love to her :) so as readers we know he's a soft at heart person but I don't feel that he should think of shooting himself. PLEASE let it be a dream. He's not physically abusing her or anything and he should realise that he loves her a lot then only they'll be able to begin afresh.