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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
I'm back 😆 and that too in a balanced state😉

First of all CONGRATULATIONS dear 👏 for your new thread 🤗

Next, I hope you are aware that there is an opportunity to publish any one of your FF in a magazine , here is the link, check it out
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1649188/opptunity-to-publish-ur-ff-in-magazine.

It's all up to you whether you want to get your work published or not but I wanted that you should know about this.
😊

Now coming to the updates I loved the update BUT I' m not happy about the Precap :(
Maan is a mature person though egoist (contradictory traits but not impossibe), I just can't think of him taking such a big step like shooting himself... I mean, yes he has not tried to make the relationship work but at the same time he has not forced himself on Geet. Even Geet admitted that he ended up making love to her :) so as readers we know he's a soft at heart person but I don't feel that he should think of shooting himself. PLEASE let it be a dre
am. He's not physically abusing her or anything and he should realise that he loves her a lot then only they'll be able to begin afresh.





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Posted: 14 years ago
#72


👏 WOW ! That was very noble of you & your friends .....

Coming to the part ; What can I say ? Everything just fits so smoothly in this story be it the underlying love of Geet & Maan even in their tiffs , their emotional turmoil or their realizations ; Fantastic succession of events , gradual yet progressive 👏 👏 👏

Excellent writing ... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


Precap ...... 😲 please ......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
thum sach me 12 yrs me eisa kiya?hum tho kuch bhi nehi kar paaye hai...
un logon ke baare me soch kar proud feel karthi hu aur politicians ko gaaliya dethi hu ki vo kuch nehi karthe.....kabhi bhi kuch karne ki nehi soche.....muje apne aap pur tharas aa rehi hai ye soch kar.......
well done yaar......ab me thumari fan hai ye soch kar proud feel kar rehi hai......love u.
precap is realy scary yaar...ye geet ki sapna hi honge.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
OMGG!! The Precap!! 🤢 Oh fish!! OK! I'm damn curious abt whats gonna happen next..
So plzz continue soon..
Superb part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
loved the update...it was not maan fault ,he didnt know the truth..........
precap is scaring...........
update soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Really lyked geet's self-control....but wht was tht precap...kahin kidnapping precap ki tharah kuch plan tho nehien to prank us...🤣....i Luv ACP...if nething happens to him...dehklana paulomi...😆😆...continue soon..!!!

Geet walked up to him and snatched the paper'ACP can you for once become decent? Why can't you wear a vest at least?..😆😉..Geet just what's your problem? This is my flat tumhe kya problem hai?....ACP I am getting distracted someday I'll bite your biceps tab samajh aayega kya problem hai'.😆😆😳.Maan's eyes popped out how could she express her desire so bluntly😉...really luved this part...😆

rohini




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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: nazsij

thum sach me 12 yrs me eisa kiya?hum tho kuch bhi nehi kar paaye hai...

un logon ke baare me soch kar proud feel karthi hu aur politicians ko gaaliya dethi hu ki vo kuch nehi karthe.....kabhi bhi kuch karne ki nehi soche.....muje apne aap pur tharas aa rehi hai ye soch kar.......
well done yaar......ab me thumari fan hai ye soch kar proud feel kar rehi hai......love u.
precap is realy scary yaar...ye geet ki sapna hi honge.....



i was not a 12 year old when the Kargil war happened I was in class 12 ... i was 17 years old dear.....I just know one thing nobody is going to improve anything for you if you want to change be part of the change😊
zoha25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

wht a precap..... cant wait....
-Zahra15- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
nice part......am eagerly waiting 4 the nxt 1
smj1977.shruti thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
sorry dear
after India won
I went off line celebrating😉
now I have come and seen your pm first I will congratulate you before moving further
for me😆
for you 😉

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