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CookieMonster

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

Very nice part love it
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CookieMonster

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

Waiting for the next update

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Huner

@Be.edgy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

Superb part!! Finally Maan is back and thank god He's aware of the fact that Geet knew about their marriage.. Cant wait to read what happens next..
Continue soon . .

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PRATHYUSHA

@prathyusmiling

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

waiting waiting waiting waiting.............hw much time wil u tak 2 update?...................atleast update long 1 ven u update it

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m-g19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

me also waitng.................

plzzzzzzzzzz hurry.....😍😍

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fairyland_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

Chapter 20

Maan woke up and came downstairs,
Raj jaya and Vicky were sitting in hall, they all got surprised seeing Maan coming to them
maan smiled and touched Raj and Jaya feet then hugged Vicky.
Jaya—Maan tum kab aaye?
Maan—(hides truth that he came last night)aap sab ke aane se kuch time pehle.
Raj—"Wow" son, what a great surprise. Geet se miley?
Vicky's expressions changed from happy to worry for his Gudiya.
Maan-Nahi aabhi nahi.
Geet comes from kitchen with a tray of breakfast, wearing simple white suit, with small earrings and hidden mangalsutra. Hairs tied in one long plat. Maan was mesmerized by her Simplicity ….
She came out and was shocked to see maan sitting on dining table and looking at her with a smile. She stood rooted on her place with tray..
maan got up and went to her, eye lock…..He took tray from her hand touching and caressing her hands, without anyone's notice. She felt electrified with his touch. Which brought her back to reality? She broke eye lock and went to dining table, angrily.
Maan—(smiled) uff bahut hot hai.

He brought tray to table..and sat beside Geet..
Raj was about to take puri when Geet glared him….
Raj—sorry main boiled veg kha lunga.
Geet –that's better Papa, aabhi cholesterol kam nahi hua .aur aap jogging bhi nahi gaye?
Raj –are yaar main aabhi to aaya hu,kal se jaunga.
Maan –Maan was amused by his little wifey's domination.
Jaya –vicky tum jab tak office nahi join karte tuhare pocket money bandh
Geet comes and twist Vicky's ear..and said….
Vicky paise udane se pehle kamana sikho..
And looked at jaya with fake smile..
Jaya rolled her eyes knowing her drama. Very well, and went to kitchen to get tea..
Geet quickly release his ear, tumhare pocket money maine tumhare a/c main transfer kar deye hai. Enjoy…..
Vicky –thanks sweet heart,tum nahi hote to mera kya hota.?
Maan murmurs Aur mera ky hota?
geet heard him but ignored completely
Maan held her hand under table..
she didn't look at him but started breathing heavily.
Maan enjoying his effect on her….
Vicky –Geet kya hua?
Geet—kuch nahi…
Vicky—aacha,tera boy friend kaisa hai?
Maan --Boy friend? Hearing this he quickly freed her hand…..
Geet –Rohan bahut naughty hogaya hai,aata hi hoga…
maan—shocked-naughty?
Rohan comes with a bat (Rohan 10yrs old boy,younger brother of prachi)
seeing Rohan Maan took a relief breathe.
Rohan—Hi everyone and turned to Geet… Hi sweety.
maan glared Rohan "Sweety"?
Maan –Rohan U never use to come our house before?
Rohan—U never had something Interesting before.
Maan—'Interesting'? Don't U think U should find someone of your age as girlfriend?
Rohan—Don't U think mentally she matches my age?
maan was shocked by his answer but to some extend he agree to Rohan, as She is still childish and innocent then any other girl of her age.
jaya came from kitchen—Are haan Woh hamare sath shimla se mere ek friend aaye hai...
Geet ke leye marriage proposal lekar..?Jaya wants to know maan reaction on this…
while Maan looking at Geet desperately for her reaction.
Vicky Rohan and Geet smiled
Geet –Maa, kya woh log out house main hai,who kya hai naa, mujhe unka aache se dhyaan rakhna hoga na?

Maan was hurt by her answer.
Jaya –Haa beta zara aacha dhyan rakhna,pata nahi kya hojata hai..?jo bhi tumhare leye proposal lekar aata hai, subah humse mile bina hi bhag jate hai..
Vicky chocked his drink
Geet –pata nahi maa shayad unhe main pasand nahi..?
Rohan –what an excuse…. koi aandha hi tumhe pasand nahi karega..
Geet glared him to shut his mouth.
maan senses there is something fishy, I need to find out .
Raj and jaya left from there..
Geet didn't looked at.,Maan for once,Maan left table, and quickly hides behind pillar to hear their plan.
Geet look's at Vicky with baby face.

Vicky –No,No ways,that's enough Geet. hum yeh sab kab tak karenge?aur kyun?
Geet-- plz naa Vicky. She hug him from back, and kiss his cheek, He gave up.o.k. ok
Maan—Yeh aacha hai, pyar mujhse aur kiss Vicky ko? not fair. iski to saza milege. Then he remembered their romantic moments and smiled.

Vicky--aaj raat 12 baje tayar rehna aur rohan tum bhi?
Maan –huumm,12 baje main bhi to dekhu kya chal raha hai..?

Night

After dinner everyone left for their rooms. Maan eagerly waited for 12.
12: Clock, He went to balcony and noticed one male in Skelton dress—it must be Vicky.
then a small boy with horror make up- huumm Rohan, and then a girl in while saree white wig, horror make up and a candle in her hand.-Geet ,interesting.. He silently followed them.

Vicky gave small audio tape to Rohan and ordered him to play some horror music. Little later.Rohan nodded.

Maan watching them hiding behind window.
Geet and Vicky entered room.
Creating horror atmosphere, windows and doors automatically opening and closing (of-course not automatic but with the help of servants) its time for Rohan to play horror music
there were 2 cassettes Rohan got confused, he played one. It was some bhangra music..
Geet quickly started doing bhangra…
Maan broke into laugh seeing her innocence..
Guests with scared and confused expressions --Bhoot bhanga bhi karte hai?
Vicky pulled her to corner—Geet tu kya kar rahe hai..?
Tu Inhe dara rahe hai, ya entertain kar rahe hai.?.Ek toh itne make up ke baad bhi tu itne cute lag rahe hai upar se bhangra ?
Geet with baby face—mai kya karu woh rohan galat cassette plays kar raha hai
Vicky chup kar aur chal…

Rohan play's right music this time..
Vicky and Geet were successful in their mission, guests ran from there, for their life..
Rohan—vicky bhai mujhe dar lag raha hai,aap mujhe mere ghar chod aaoo.
Vicky-- aare wah bhoot ko bhi dar lagta hai.
They all laugh…
Vicky left with Rohan..
Geet was dancing and moving on her way to home. When she bumped on maan's chest.
She was about to fall when maan pulled her up towards him, twisting her hand back to her
Geet was shocked to see him and said..
chodeye mujhe Main Geet nahi Bhoot hu….
Maan--Aacha ,maine kab kaha tum geet ho?waise bhi mujhe bhoot aache lagte hai….
He caresses her cheek by his left hand lovingly, still holding her with right hand. She jerk his hand making him anger
he picked her up in his arms
Geet –chodiye mujhe nahi toh main chilaunge..
Maan—haan haan chilaaoo,Maa,papa ko bhi toh pata chale unki guest aakhir bhagte kyun hai.
Geet-makes a baby face.

He took her to his bathroom, and made her stand under shower.
Her horror make up washes off, reveling her completely; her white saree is totally transparent now showing her white skin, perfect figure and every curve.
His eyes shamelessly travelled throughout her body and his expressions changed from anger to desire.....

He took step towards her, and she took backward till she hit wall of bathtub.
She was about to run when he blocked her exit with his hands on her either sides.
They had eye lock….
His eyes again and again slipping to her lips
her wet lips were tempting him, he came closer…
Geet looked back of him towards door and said…Maa aap?

Maan quickly released her and turned around but found no one…
Geet took advantage and run to her room laughing…….
He was lost in her laughter…

(precap----Geet's annual function –Maan chief Guest)

Hi friends,here is part 20,long one.hope U like it, please comment..and sorry for mistakes.😊

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#827

Geet doing Bhangra in white sari to scare guests....👏🤣

Brilliant girl too good!! This part was nice and long so I'm content with this update...can't wait till the next big chap 21 Thank you :-)

Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#828

Awesome and loved the bhooth part. That was hilarious. Interesting precap, continue soon

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Huner

@Be.edgy

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#829

🤣 Geet Bhangra!! To scare the guests!!?! 🤣🤣
Superb part..
Continue soon..

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heermeher

@heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#830

that was toooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood

Haunted outhouse so maan babu its not gg to be easy so please let possesive maan come out please one more update please sweetheart

MSK in annual func i wanna see guys drooling over geet and girls i know will drool over Maan but all he wants to see his mishti