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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
chapter - 4
After 4 hrs drive from city, they reached farmhouse at 1 pm.It was a very huge gated area consisting every natural element within it. A place surrounded by many trees, there was a dairy farm where female servants were busy in making milk buttermilk, butter etc.
Also a huge ground for horses, and a huge swimming pool on backside of house.It seems to be a little village, Geet felt at home.
They all entered house; it was not much big like their mansion,
but very simply yet beautifully arranged. They took bath, got ready and left for sight seeing. Raj and jaya stayed back to take rest. All first went on hoarse ground, where
maan restricted Geet and Vicky to take ride saying "u both are small".

Feeling bored Vicky and geet went ahead, Geet spotted a green mango on top of a mango tree.
Geet- Vicky I want that mango.
Vicky took few stones and tried hitting it. But it missed every time.
Geet-Vicky what r u doing?
Vicky-geet I am trying to get that mango down for you.
Geet –No I don't think it's a good process, just climb the tree and get that mango, hurry up .vicky nodded and climbed the tree, he picked that mango and kept in his pocket and was about to plug another when he lost balance and was hanging on tree.
Geet was first scared, then she took few stones and started hitting Vicky.
Vicky shouted 'bhai Bachaoo bhai',help.

Hearing his brother's voice maan rushed to them and saw Vicky hanging on tree, and Geet hitting him with stones.
First maan helped Vicky to get down and asked geet what she is doing.
Geet-See Vicky hit mango with stones to get it down .So I was trying to get Vicky down by hitting him with stones.' See' I was just helping.
Both maan and Vicky exchange looks with open mouth.
Vicky-Bhai have u ever heard innocence is 'Injurious to health'.
I am facing it. All the best for your future bhai.

Maan gave Vicky an angry glare and left.
geet- Vicky u only brought one mango what about me?
Vicky-Don't worry geet let's share.
Suddenly geet felt sad
'what happened geet'
I am missing my parents Vicky, my papa use to get me mangoes'
don't worry geet not only this mango; I will share my whole family with u.
From Now on my dada dadi is yours also my mom and dad are yours ok
First geet felt very happy, then she realized something and said, Why r u not sharing your brother with me?katti, katti ,katti.
Vicky—"O" u like my bhai,u can have him, He is all yours.
Geet felt very excited and happy, 'wow' from now onwards your dada dadi is my dada dadi,your mom and dad is my mom and dad and your bhai is my bhai.

Vicky was shocked. Then smiled thinking 'no one in this world can handle this girl'. Except my bhai.


precap ---Geet on her honeymoon at farmhouse.

Here is part 4 ,I hope u guys enjoy it.plz leave your comments.
I will be waiting,and sorry for mistakes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

luved it😆😆😆😆😆😆

now waiting 4 d nxt update soon
awesum concept n Geet is just so innocent
Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
nice update

Geet is such a cutie pie... poor vicky 😆 ...

itna chota update .. bohat nainsafi hai re .. "drama queen style" 😆

continue soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
bhai...............nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
"Your dada dadi is my dada dadi,your mom and dad is my mom and dad and your bhai is my bhai." 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣



VirIka4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Amazing update ... Can't wait to read what is going to happen next ... Please update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
not fair ur giving us short update wow geet so innocent love the bond they share vicky & geet lovely update interesting precap pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
geet s to innocent
waiitng 4 ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
awesome FF
love the innocence in geet and control in maan
plz more maaneet scenes:)
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awsome update.
geet is so sweet.
love it.
thx.

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