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Posted: 14 years ago
wow................fantastic update⭐️⭐️⭐️...............im loving it❤️❤️❤️
omg..................geet is such a sweethert n innocent bacchi 😳 n maan is such a caring hubby😍😍😍

i was rofling in the middle of the night😆 specially the lines below 🤣
Geet was first scared, then she took few stones and started hitting Vicky.
Vicky shouted 'bhai Bachaoo bhai',help.
😲😲😆🤣🤣🤣🤣

Vicky-Bhai have u ever heard innocence is 'Injurious to health'.
I am facing it. All the best for your future bhai.
🤣🤣

i think maan gonna hav tough time handling his lil' wifey😉 pic abhi baki hai mere dost😆
lovely updates👏............lovely maaneet😍..........lovely ff👏
plis update few more parts if possible😳
waiting..................for looooooooong updates today😛
Edited by siroilily - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yyyyyyyyiiiiiiipppppppppeeeeeeeeeee,,,,bt plzzz mk it sooooooonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow laughed my head out yaar ...really really awomse
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Posted: 14 years ago
mk it fast yaar,,cant wait longer
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awhh soo cute
Awesome update
loved it
Very nicely written
pls cont soon
and add me
Thank you

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi friends here is part 5 a long one,with maneet moments on demand.
I hope u guys enjoy it.and sorry for mistakes,waiting for your comments.please reply.
Chapter 5

Geet came back with Vicky and hugged jaya from back, saying "Maa", "mujhe bhook lagi hai."Jaya and Raj got tears of happiness in their eyes. Seeing their 'Naanhi pari' accepting them slowly and lovingly. they cherished the moment and ate lunch.
Evening maan returned with his cousins, all were very tired so, they left for their rooms.
.Maan came to living room where Geet and Vicky were watching cartoons on TV, curdled together on one sofa. Now maan is feeling jealous, of Vicky who needs no reason to be this close to 'his jaan'.


Maan coughed to get their attention, they turned and raised eyebrows.
maan 'Geet I want to prepare you for New school admission.
I will be taking your test, to check how much u r ready for interview and Vicky no cheating ,u cannot help her.
Vicky ' ok bhai
Maan -Geet get ready.
Geet 'ok bhai
Maan fumed with anger and roared "Geeeeet"
what did u said?
"Ok"
No after that
Ok bhai
"How dare u" He turned his fingers into feast
'Don't you ever dare to call me that' He said clenching his jaws tightly.
Then what I suppose to call u
'what ever'
But u seems to be very young to be called as uncle,
Vicky sank in sofa covering his face and laughter.
'Call me by my name'
But u seems to be little big to be called by name.
'Call what ever but not all this rubbish
He turned to leave, when Geet called him "aye sunoo"
Maan turned and gave her a glare.
Gulping her saliva she quickly corrected it by saying "Suniyee" with her sweet voice
which instantly melted his anger. He smiled at her as approval and left.
Geet ''look' Vicky your brother doesn't like me that's why he don't want me to call him bhai.
Vicky to himself, idiot he loves u that's why he don't want u, to call him 'bhai'.
'Dusht danav kitna gussa karta hai'
with that she left for room and found maan sleeping, on sofa
'dusht bina kahani bole sogaya'.
She went to bed trying to sleep
when she heard thunder sound.
She runs to maan and fell on him, hugging him tightly on sofa
maan woke up and his breathe quickened seeing his jaan, soo close to him.
maan 'kya hua bacha,
I am scared of thunder
he patted her back lovingly, assuring her ,he will always be their for her.
On other hand, he was fighting and killing the desires, increasing every minute by innocent acts of this little angel.
He felt disgusting, 'how could I feel like this, Stop it maan. "She is just a bacha."
He closed his eyes in pain, controlled himself, and saw her sleeping on him peacefully, feeling safe and secure.
Soon he too fell asleep
Morning, jaya asked Ashlesha to give milk to maan and geet in their room
as they didn't come down .Ashlesha was very happy as she was missing maan.
She went in, without knocking and was shocked to see them sleeping peacefully on one sofa, and maan hands wrapped around geet protectively.
She slipped the milk tray from her hand on floor, both jerked up with the breaking sound.Geet was innocently rubbing her eyes, while maan smirked at Ashlesha very well knowing the reason behind her act.
Fuming with anger she turned to leave when,Geet called Ashlesha di, plz maa ko bejo naa I need her for taking bath. Especially today, my whole body is aching very badly.
.Maan looked at her puzzled .But decided to handle Ashlesha first.,
He turned to Ashlesh and said clean this mess, then get us fresh milk, as u spoiled it. And next time knock before entering "my room."
geet corrected it 'our room'.
maan smiled at his little wifey's dominance.
Once Ashlesha left, Maan asked Geet, "Why is your body aching"
"See" I have a habbit of sleeping on soft bed.
Not on rock type body. You know, How hard u are?
maan felt embarrassed, 'yes' he was hardening by her touch.
He avoided topic and left for rest room to get ready.

Raj and jaya left to their friends house for 1 day, and will be returning tomarrow,they handed all responsibility to maan and left.Rahul and Dev were busy in exploring farmhouse, while Vicky playing videogames in his room.
Maan took geet to living room and handed her test paper,
asking her to solve it, and left for getting coffee for himself.
Ashlesha planned to take revenge, by creating problems between maan and geet,
finding geet alone she went to her side and said "what a bad luck Geet"
instead of loving you and enjoying with you, maan is making you study that to on your honeymoon..
"Honeymoon" what is honeymoon di?

After coming to our house this is your first trip with us and specially with maan
so it is known as honeymoon.
"I think maan don't love you"
you are right di, 'yesterday also 'he was not good with me on bed', very rude
and murmurs to herself 'bed time story jo nahi kaha'.
Ashlesha mistook it. And left from there, heartbroken.

Maan returned sipping his coffee,and found Geet standing with hands folded to her chest
looking at him accusingly .
Maan- "ab kya hua bacha"
Geet 'why r u spoiling my honeymoon
maan spilt his coffee


What 'Honeymoon'
and by the way who's gyan is this. As far as I know you it can't be you.
What do you mean by that, you want to say I am not intelligent enough to know all this,
'I knew you very well' You want to take advantage of me ,thinking I am innocent.
This grew maan's anger, How could she ever think, he could take advantage of her.
Geet just shut up and get out of my sight.
Geet's eyes filled with tears, "You don't love me", with that she left back side of house.
With her bunny in her hand, she sat near pool dipping her legs in water. 'Dusht danav kitna gussa karta hai'.


It was getting dark,Ashlesha spotted geet alone by pool.
Knowing geet cant swim ,She came up with another plan, and slowly went behind her making sure no one notice her, even geet..she pushed geet in pool and ran from there.
Geet shouted and cried for help.


Maan felt bad for shouting at her, and decided to apologies
he went backyard and found Geet's bunny near pool, without second thought he jumped in, and took her out unconscious.

He made her lay near pool and pressed her stomach to get water out,
she spilled water but was still unconscious.

Seeing her badly drenched, he decided to change her dress first.
He took her to his room and laid her on bed, closed door and switch off lights
and very hesitatingly changed her into his white kurta.
He opened lights and found Geet getting out of breathe,His heart sank seeing ,her in this condition, he opened her mouth and took it into his,giving her,his breathe.He was dying every passing second in fear of loosing her.


Her breathe got normal, He relived and let go of her, for few minutes. then bent and again took her soft Patel lips in his, and sucked it one after another, expressing his anger, fear concern, and of course love in one kiss. Her lips were so delicate, got scratched by his rough lips, which are kissing her not passionately but lovingly.


precap-Geet woke up and her reaction.








Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG that ashelsha b**** tried to kill Geet ... wat the hell ....

i hope Maan finds out and kill her 😡 ...

their first kiss ... awwww.....

he is so much in love with her .. i hope she also falls for him soon

loved the update .. continue soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

That was shweet update

Loved Maaneet moments
Was so dieing to read their moments
Hate Ashlesha a lot
Geet is shweetheart
Update soon n sum more Maaneet moments plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read your ff.. it's great
Continue soon and do pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweet update
loved geet innocence
she s bringing them closer 😆😆😆

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