Mera Maan sirf mera hain! FF p156 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx yaar loved every part love you thanx once again
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippe there getting married i'm sure geet i'll win him back jaldi karo yaar next update love it wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Part 9

Maaneet were married as per tradition. Maan was looking very hot in his all black sherwani. Geet was dressed in a deep red lengha and very antique looking jewellery. She wore a maang tika, dangling nose ring, earrings, necklace, anklets and bangles. She was looking out of this world. As Maan saw her for the first time his jaw dropped seeing her looking so pretty..Mahhiii moment😳. Annie had to tell him to stop staring as he was making it so obvious.😆

Annie took her to her bedroom "Geet aaj se tumari nai shuroowaat iss kamre se...Maan ki Geet ka kamra". Geet looked up and saw her bedroom was so grand and decorated so romantically. Her sej was covered with red and white roses. There was 100's of candles. She smiled at her good fortune.
"Acha Geet ab ghooghat neeche karo bhai kisi bhi waqt ate hoge..aur thore nakhre karna Zalim Singh Khurana ke saamne" she teased Geet. Geet sighed full aware nothing like that was going to happen. Annie left her. She could hear her talking to Maan "Bhai meri bhabi ko ziyada tang mat karna" she teased him and giggled down the corridor.

Geet's heart was racing and her palm went sweaty and her breathing quickened. Maan came and looked towards the bed, the silouette of Geet was pulling him towards her. He reached the sej and was about to lift her ghooghat that he realised what he was about to do! He pulled away.
"Geet sab chale ge hain acting bund karo"
Geet lifted her ghooghat and Maan saw her...Mahhhiiii moment. He looked away.
"Geet hume akta sona hoga warna sab ghalat samje ge, tume koi aitraaz toh nahi?"
"Nahin muje aap par poora barosa hain, aap uss taraf so jai aur main iss taraf"

Geet got up to take her jewellery..she was struggling so Maan being the samaritan he is went to help her..he took her maang tika she hyperventilated..he took her earring she gasped..he took her necklace she inhaled, he pulled her nose ring she flinched and caught her breath, he took her bangles and by now they were eyelocked Mahhiiii moment.☺️ after few moments Maan realises what they are doing and pulls away. He changed his clothes and she changes hers.

Both lay in bed either side and a teddy bear parting them saying "2 become 1". Geet looks on sad and has tears in her eyes *Allah ji ye kiya fake shaadi?"
Maan lays thinking *Ye larki muje pagal karde gi, itni close hain kaise control kar pao ga?*

Suddenly Geet turns around and see's Maan sleeping, she smiles *iss pal keliye aur unn ke paas rehne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon, toh fake marriage toh kuch bhi nahi* She closes her eyes content and sleeps.

Maan wakes up at 4am..he see's Geet face lighting up his bedroom *kitna khubsoorat banaya hain banane wale ne* he stares and pulls her stranded hair back. He looks at her lips and started getting x-rated thoughts. He quickly turns around and sleeps.

Around about 6am Maan stretches his arm and Geet places her head. Whilst sleeping she smells his aura and pulls closer and then closer into a semi hug☺️ Geet wakes up for prayer and realises how near she is to Maan she jerks and pulls away. She goes to pray. Maan wakes up and see's her in her muslim attire praying. He smiles impressed.

Dadima comes in to check on the newly couple. She is disaapointed that there are no tell-tales signs of consummation. She leaves upset. Geet dresses in a maroon sari and goes down. Maan follows her and stares at her.😳

"Beta aapka pehla din hain toh kuch meeta banana hoga kiya bana sakti hain aap"? asked dadima.
"Jo aap kahe dadima"
"Maan ko kheer pasand hain aur muje halwa..par aap aik banana kyonki aap ke liye ziyada ho jai ga"

Geet went into the kitchen and made halwa. She gave it to all and all praised her cooking skills. Maan did not like halwa so he refused. Everyone left and Maaneet were alone.
"Maan ye aap keliye"
"Kiya hain?"
"Kheer..aapko pasand hain na?"
Maan was touched by her gesture they eyelocked Mahhiiiii moment.
"Beta muje pata hain Geet bahut hi khubsurat hain lekin kheer toh khaa lo" teased dadima.
Maan cleared his throat and ate the kheer. Geet looked for his reaction, he looked at her and smiled saying its made nice.

Precap Kiya ye dooriyan kiya mit pai gi?

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Posted: 14 years ago
I looooooooooved it! :) I'll be even more greedy and ask you for another oneeee😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
naddiya pls more wow dadi knows they didnt consumment there marriage
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
going to college might get late for my class cause couldn't help to read this part thanx love u ummahhhh🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey
Just read all parts
Love this FF!!!
Add me in pm list plz!
Upd8 soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. please update soon....yeh dil hai ki manta nahi....want to see what happens between them
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely udpate dear
yaar yeh doori jaldi mta do
they both can't control themselves then what is the point of being separated and maan acting like he doesn't love her
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my rapid, speed queen updater............. loved both chapt 8-9 maneet married.............. their first night......aww....... maan having a hard time............. and she made kheer (my fav) for him.............. mhhh wonder how long this marriage of convenience is gonna last for MSK! I bet any he will break first..........

Update Jaldi.... xoxo
thanx for the PM

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