Ripped Apart ~3~ (Maaneet) part 25 updated - 13apr

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

That was terrific .. Maan's reaction was quintessential Maan.. and Geet standing strong in front of him..loved it..

Could actually feel their individual emotional turmoil , the pain, heartache ,the restlessness... all of it..

wow.. wonder when Annie will get to know bout Geet and whether she'll let Vicky in on her past...

great update and thanks for the pm... eagerly awaiting the next one..

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

OMG!!! This was so good and so worth the wait!!! Just loved it!!

I wish there was a bigger confrontation, but I guess that will come later! I mus say I love the pace you're going at b/c it's getting to climatic and thrilling!!

Oh no! It was a bit sad, but that phone conversation was cute! I wish Maan questions her and soon!

Amazing job, but please do update sooner!!! I hate the wait and love the read....so love it!!!

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

lovely update sonia.....
angry maan is back.........feel bad for geet......why is she not explaining her past to maan?

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#384

you yet again managed

to peirce my heart

what a dreadful day with confusions MUs

so typical of MSK not Maan

Maan would wiiligly hear her part want to know why she did that

but the arrogant MSK he is never gonna ask

and in all this times MSK has taken over Maan

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Miss-Riz

@Miss-Riz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

Hey update was really good the story has got really exiting plz update soon :)

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

i was holding on for dear life....that was an amazing update...the part about how she found her parents was so moving...very well narrated...again i missed out on the dialogues but i love the idea of him thinking that she had hidden reasons for what they shared...it makes for a great story...it was good to see geet being able to do the presentation...it felt like she got some strength back...i cannot wait to see what you come up with next...good thing i was sitting on my bed while ready this...i fell back a few times...😆

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vj2102

@vj2102

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

omg... stupd stupid maan.. listen to her will u...amazin updt...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#388

He is messing up big time yaar.... Nd wat if smbdy standing behind d door nd listened der whole coversation....

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#389

WOW...LOVED THE UPDATE...I DONT KNOW WHY BUT YOUR FIC IS SO REALISTIC THAT IT MAKES ME REALLY SAD...U REALLY ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER😊

GEET IS HURTING AND SO IS MAAN...ITS CRUEL HOW FATE HURTS TWO PEOPLE WHO LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH..

REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATES TO KNOW HOW MU'S WILL BE CLEARED...PLEASE UPDATE SOON...WOULD YOU BE ABLE TO PM ME FROM NOW ON?

THANKS😃

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

yipppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

me firstttttttttttttttt

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kaminiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😭😭😭😭😭

one short comment will come ur way tom.....😭😭😭

for rule breaking!!😡

even tho me loved the update...😃😃😃

my angry young maan is back😳😳😳😳😳😳