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Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

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heyyy jo 🤗

firstly, y didn't u post dis on IPKKND forum!?!? i think u should continue ur ss hub dere so many ppl can read it... I posted there.. LOLOL! Kisine comment nahi kiya 😆 Yahi pe theek hai :P Jise padna hai wo pade :P :D Hehe

ok back to da os... omg arnav babu's super mean urghhh 😈 hw can anybody be sooo damn mean man?!?!? only u can pull dat off ASR!!!!!! my poor jalebi girl, she's strangled in a web full of ASR misery & pain anddd love which is not quite visible from our laad governor's end 🤣 🤣 @Red: :O That is such a big compliment! Thank you 🤗 Glad to know you liked this part so much :D Well, he is ASR na.. toh mean to hona hi hai 😉 And our Jalebi girl is no less is she?

@la

at ur face u dumb chick 🤣 🤣 mind ur own business and get back to work 🤣 Hehe! Ya, I just hate her because I know she will be a kabaab mein haddi for ASR and KKG.. :| So ya, I just love getting her thrown around by ASR in my OS :P :P 😆

u'v gotta continue dis jo!! im eagerly waitin to read da next part!!!!! Yeshums, I am continuing :D And the next update will be up soon! 😊

Thank you for the nice comment! :) 🤗

Originally posted by: priya_2491

Brilliant,Brilliant,Brilliant!

I loved Arnav's inner thought s, epsecially 'my signature evil smile' I could not stop laughing at the part.🤣

Wow , enjoyed reading this ,your such a great writer. Can't wait for the next part .

Originally posted by: SK1991

superb...dear...keep it up...👏

want more...

Originally posted by: Miya_Malik

Reserved!

Replying to your comments is my favourite part because you write such detailed comments! :D I love you for that! Thank you 😳 🤗

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YAYYY! you continued the story 🥳this was exactly how I thought it would go on the show but i was disappointed to see that ASR did absolutely NOTHING to stop Khushi, not even his '1 Lakh chant' and i am completely in love with your story because it does complete justice to the storyline and especially ASR's complexity. The Arnav in your ss is wayy more in character than the one on the show, and that's particularly what I loved about him in your second update too. Glad to know you like the ASR in my story! 😊 Sachchi mein, it is such a great thing to know ki ppl like the character in your story more than the character in the serial! :D The insensitive ASR was there (even if it was all just to challenge her to stay) The naughty Arnav was there, he wanted to annoy her enough to bring the 'KKG' effect out of her, and the caring, sensitive Arnav Malik was there as well, who didn't want to cause her any more trouble than he'd already done. The Arnav inside him doesn't want her to leave because he has grown accustomed to her bubbliness, her charm, her wit, her 'darti hai par karti hai' attitude, her work .. to aakhir Khushi ka jadoo chal hi gaya 😳 😆 Khushi ka jaado to chalna hi tha :D And ya, I just wanted to show that side of ASR, the one who cares. Like.. I don't like the insensitive Arnav :P Not so much.. I mean, I think the show if empty without that Arnav but then, we love the sensitive Arnav who cares for his di.. so ya, :D Just had to put all those aspects in :) And Khushi, while she was giving her resignation, it was her determination of pleasing her jiji and her anger towards her boss which pulled her through but as soon as she left from there, her half-heartedness came out, and I felt her mind speak 'Jo bhi tha, apna tha' in regards to the office in general .. she has not been there for all that long, but the office atmosphere has grown on her, facing the everyday taunts of the office bimbos has grown on her, accepting and completing challenges give by her arrogant boss has grown on her and all she seems to think about now is office, office and office! I loved that! Ya, she has grown too accostumed to the office environment :) She misses it all, and will miss it even more later I guess. All in all, loved your writing style, dialogue, situations, humour, and ASR! he was in full form yet again 😆 Really really happy to know ki you liked all these things in my SS :D yay! :P :D

Thanks for the VERY quick and LONG update! and for the awesome awesome read! That was BRILLIANT, and I seriously cannot tell you how eager I am to know what happens next 😃 This was long? 😲 I thought this is super short 😛 😆 Oh well, chalo, so part ke lengths are fine :P :D

PS: Just noticed you've posted an Armaan-Riddhima OS on page one, personally I LOVE Ammy-Ridz and can't wait to read that!! Will make sure i leave a comment by tomorrow on that OS, as i'm falling short of time tonight. Jaldi se comment. Hehe, jokes. Take your time! :)

Thank you for this super long and super detailed and super lovely comment. I read it in the morning and I swear my day couldn't have started any better :) 🤗

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

wow! dat was awsum,...!!

luved the way u descirbed them n their emotion...!!!

luved it..!! no words 2 express...!

thnx for d pm dear...!!!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Jyotika!!

I loved the update. The description of Arnav and Khushi's feelings is written beautifully. Its amazing how they both feel restless and at ease, with and without each other (if that made any sense whatsoever...😕)

Thanks for the PM hun...looking forward to the next part!

Zeba

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