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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

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heyyy jo 🤗

firstly, y didn't u post dis on IPKKND forum!?!? i think u should continue ur ss hub dere so many ppl can read it...

ok back to da os... omg arnav babu's super mean urghhh 😈 hw can anybody be sooo damn mean man?!?!? only u can pull dat off ASR!!!!!! my poor jalebi girl, she's strangled in a web full of ASR misery & pain anddd love which is not quite visible from our laad governor's end 🤣 🤣

@la

at ur face u dumb chick 🤣 🤣 mind ur own business and get back to work 🤣

u'v gotta continue dis jo!! im eagerly waitin to read da next part!!!!!

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ClaraOswald

@ClaraOswald

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Brilliant,Brilliant,Brilliant!

I loved Arnav's inner thought s, epsecially 'my signature evil smile' I could not stop laughing at the part.🤣

Wow , enjoyed reading this ,your such a great writer. Can't wait for the next part .

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@SK1991

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

superb...dear...keep it up...👏

want more...

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Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

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YAYYY! you continued the story 🥳this was exactly how I thought it would go on the show but i was disappointed to see that ASR did absolutely NOTHING to stop Khushi, not even his '1 Lakh chant' and i am completely in love with your story because it does complete justice to the storyline and especially ASR's complexity. The Arnav in your ss is wayy more in character than the one on the show, and that's particularly what I loved about him in your second update too. The insensitive ASR was there (even if it was all just to challenge her to stay) The naughty Arnav was there, he wanted to annoy her enough to bring the 'KKG' effect out of her, and the caring, sensitive Arnav Malik was there as well, who didn't want to cause her any more trouble than he'd already done. The Arnav inside him doesn't want her to leave because he has grown accustomed to her bubbliness, her charm, her wit, her 'darti hai par karti hai' attitude, her work .. to aakhir Khushi ka jadoo chal hi gaya 😳 And Khushi, while she was giving her resignation, it was her determination of pleasing her jiji and her anger towards her boss which pulled her through but as soon as she left from there, her half-heartedness came out, and I felt her mind speak 'Jo bhi tha, apna tha' in regards to the office in general .. she has not been there for all that long, but the office atmosphere has grown on her, facing the everyday taunts of the office bimbos has grown on her, accepting and completing challenges give by her arrogant boss has grown on her and all she seems to think about now is office, office and office! I loved that! All in all, loved your writing style, dialogue, situations, humour, and ASR! he was in full form yet again 😆 Thanks for the VERY quick and LONG update! and for the awesome awesome read! That was BRILLIANT, and I seriously cannot tell you how eager I am to know what happens next 😃

PS: Just noticed you've posted an Armaan-Riddhima OS on page one, personally I LOVE Ammy-Ridz and can't wait to read that!! Will make sure i leave a comment by tomorrow on that OS, as i'm falling short of time tonight.

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

wow! dat was awsum,...!!

luved the way u descirbed them n their emotion...!!!

luved it..!! no words 2 express...!

thnx for d pm dear...!!!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hey Jyotika!!

I loved the update. The description of Arnav and Khushi's feelings is written beautifully. Its amazing how they both feel restless and at ease, with and without each other (if that made any sense whatsoever...😕)

Thanks for the PM hun...looking forward to the next part!

Zeba

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Hey Jyotika! I loved part 2 it was really good :) Would love to read more <3 Sorry for the short and rather uninteresting comment but I'm reading from my phone so :D ermm once you finish this SS write something on AR na! Only if you want to :) ciao bella <3 x