Destiny's play-Last Part, Epilogue-Pg 74,81 (2/4) - Page 57

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

Loved Destiny's Play! I'm going to miss reading it; the ff was soo sweet. And the kids are soo cute! Thanks for writing such amazing updates!

Thanks. Thats a very sweet compliment.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Opti

What a beautiful ending👏....... loved the rest of the updates! Its so sad that this FF has ended😔 . Really enjoyed reading this FF..... looked forward to ur updates everyday! U r a brilliant writer! ⭐️. Hope u start another FF..... if u do please include me in pm list! Thanks 4 da wonderful story..... will wait for another FF from u! 😛

Thanks kwaishfan. Thanks for those kind words. I had as much pleasure bringing this is to you all.

Originally posted by: anuandavi

It was a beautiful FF Opti. Thanks for giving us a beautiful story. Are you planning anyother FF in the near future? Do not forget to PM me.

thanks anuandavi. No I'm not planning to start anything afresh as I am busy at work and also devoid of ideas.

Originally posted by: ajenn

u flattered...am pleased... 🤗
ooh we gona miss ur writing.
Well.. plz do include me if u planning to pen down ur creativity at any point of time 😉

Thanks once again. Will PM you if I do write something.

Originally posted by: san1989

It was a wonderful story, thanks for giving us this amazing story to read.

thanks san. The pleasure was mine.

Originally posted by: nan_10

Thank u for giving such a wonderful FF

Completely enjoyed it

plzzzz start a new one n

Dont forget to send PM for that

Love u

thanks for that colourful compliment. Will keep in mind to let you know if I write again.

Originally posted by: Newdime

Oooh my gosh...I finally finished the long due updates....Opti that was fast the way you completed the story....

I shall say...it was awesomest, story.

I loved each and every characters, my most favorite one was Sameera...she was close to my heart...

I'll surely miss this story...and will wait for your new venture.

That reminds ,me..now the turn for poor lost Manneet Scenes?

Congratulations on another successful story.

Thanks Newdime. I think it appeared fast because I was posting more than an update a date. Otherwise this really is a long fic. I know many would love Sameera as they can relate better to her. She wasn't as perfect as Geet but was as lovable. I should restart Maaneet scenes but dont know when I'll do it as I'm hopelessly out of practice. Will do it when I get the inspiration to write.

Originally posted by: maangeetams

I have gone through the updates of the last two weeks in the last 2 days.I just missed commenting on all those lovely updates. I so enjoyed reading your amazing story with all those lovely characters. Just feel a pang of sorrow that the story has come to its logical conclusion! But truly it was such an enjoyable read! 👏 You are a wonderful writer opti! Hope you will provide us more such gems!

Thanks. I had as much writing and presenting this to you.

WOW Opti!!!! What a beautiful end to a fabulous story!!!! I loved the way you closed all the loops and brought everything a full circle and that too realistically...

Arjun's repentance was a surprise...I never thought he would mend his ways even after being incarcerated...but looks like his nine month long stint in the prison gave him plenty of time to think about all the wrongs that he had committed...I also liked the fact that he was not re-accepted into the family circle and was made to live a life of loneliness...That was a much more karmic form of justice for him...

Dev and Sameera's love track and her reunion with her father and her subsequent marriage to Dev was also well etched out...I think I saw a glimpse of your personal life in the first night preparations that you wrote for Sameera...Correct me if I am wrong...😆...All said and done I liked the way Sameera's life carved out in the end...

Adhi's inclusion into the Harana Group of Hotels was a well-deserved break for him and he was worthy of it too...Loved the way Pinky's daughter the oldest of the kids' brigade took care of her younger cousins and friends...Just like her mom...

Yash and Anwesha's love story too finally culminated in marriage...thanks to the perseverance of Yash and his strong belief in his love...Finally Anwesha had to concede...Good for her...coz she deserves all the happiness in the world after having suffered torture at the hand of Arjun and also having lost her son...I know Yash will give her all the happiness in the world and a child too that both of them will cherish throughout their lives...

Rano and Baba finally content with their children's happiness are enjoying their days with their grandchildren...

And the kids...OMG, Ishaan, Meghana and Sahana (Loved the pics u posted😊)...What a lively trio...Just like their parents...I'm sure they will have a colorful life and will give lots of grey hair to Maan and Geet well before their time with their antics and mischiefs...😆😆...Also Loved Maan's nicknames for them...he sure is a naughty guy...teasing Geet everytime he calls them by those names...😆😆

I love how you have taken each and every character and given them a relevant role in the story of the main protagonists Geet and Maan...None of them feel out of place and are in sync with the flow of the tale...And none of them lose their individuality either and have their own story to tell too...making it a pleasure to read the whole story

I must reiterate that you indeed are a master of words and also human emotions coz you have blended both in the right amounts and come up with a fantabulous tale of love and passion...All I can do is merely applaud your talent and say Bravo...And hope that you will come up with more of such interesting and mesmerizing tales...👏

Wow!! Beautiful FF!! Loved it !!
Thank you sooo much for this marvellous story .. Enjoyed every bit of it . 😊