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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

res
awesome ending
loved your ff
simply fantastic ending

Thanks wahija. Glad you liked the ending.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Thanks a lot, Opti, for giving us a wonderful story to read and keeping us entertained for so long. It had a very solid storyline and wonderful characters. Maan is a character everybody can just dream of...and you depicted him and all his relationships so well.


I am so sad that this FF has ended...this was one story which I looked forward to reading every day and you had kept me enthralled throughout all its chapters without fail...I really admire all your works but "the strangers" and this one are my favorite...

I hope our appreciation gives you as much happiness as we have received reading your story...i wish this gives you enough inspiration to keep writing and making our days happy😳👏

You are a super⭐️



Thanks I made my Maan a dream man. Would like to think he is out there somewhere for some lucky girl! Yes, all your appreciation means a lot to me as it makes the writing worth the while.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved Destiny's Play! I'm going to miss reading it; the ff was soo sweet. And the kids are soo cute! Thanks for writing such amazing updates!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

That was superb ending

Jus loved it to the core
Their love Masti care for each other is fab
Hop ur strting new ff soon


Thanks Afsha. Glad you like the package I brought to you. No plans to start anything afresh at least in the near future.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Opti

What a beautiful ending👏....... loved the rest of the updates! Its so sad that this FF has ended😔 . Really enjoyed reading this FF..... looked forward to ur updates everyday! U r a brilliant writer! ⭐️. Hope u start another FF..... if u do please include me in pm list! Thanks 4 da wonderful story..... will wait for another FF from u! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

Congratulations Opti, for the successful completion of destiny's play. I enjoyed reading maaneetified destiny's children. Now I am keeping my fingers crossed for Maaneet scenes or are you going to surprise us with Great expectations?

Thanks Viji. No I dont think I'll maaaneetify Great Expectaions. I dont think many will like to imagine an older more mature Maaneet but I may restart my Maaneet scenes when I have the time and also the imagination.
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a beautiful FF Opti. Thanks for giving us a beautiful story. Are you planning anyother FF in the near future? Do not forget to PM me.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


Thank you Opti for the lovely journey of this FF. i will certainly miss this interaction with you on a day to day basis, checking for your update, commenting on it, waiting for your reply and POV, truly an enjoyable jouney.

We'll still be interacting in the Geet forum.


Caught the last three updates together today morning and it has been amazing.
Thanks Usha.

Still did not have sympathy for anwesha though i wish her happiness with Yash

Glad you wish her happiness even though you dont like her.


I am truly happy for Geet and Maan and Maan and geet really deserve all the happiness that comes to them.

And I am happy that their children are somehow instrumental in giving them the happiness that they deserve.

Children should be a proof of your love and not be the reason for you to be together. It never works because then the process of bringing them up is also full of hurdles and when they are grown up, they have also witnessed your dissatisfied journey which leaves an everlasting psychological effect on them which nobody can erase and the parents are again back to square one.

Beautifully said. Children should not be considered a burden but a blessing and a couple should keep in mind the effect their relationship with each other has on their children. Children are more secure when they know their parents love each other as much as they love them.


When i read through your update, my mind and heart kept feeling that it was geet actually who had more reasons for taking revenge on Arjun because he did things to her without her in any way asking for it and she became a pawn in his ambition and for that he kept harming her and Maan.

But Anwesha went into it with her eyes open. she did know from the beginning what kind of person Arjun was and still for a mistake that she committed equally, she wanted to have her cake and eat it too. It was a question of not wanting to take equal reaponsibility for her actions. I think I am being hard hearted, na but I am not able to be sympathetic to anwesha, other than bringing maan and geet together by her own actions.

You are perfectly right when you said that Geet was more wronged than Anwesha and had greater justification for taking out her anger on him. but then we have to keep in mind her character. She was always portrayed as the more adjustable, forgiving and patient one.


The only time she behaved out of character was when she confronted Dev but then one has to give allowance for the fact that she was pregnant at the time and one's emotions are generally heightened during this time. Also she had not grieved for her father properly as she had withdrawn into a shell right after his death. So a lot of innate grief and disappointment was there and she held Dev responsible for it. When someone you trust a lot lets you down, the hurt and anger is more. Geet never trusted her bro, knowing his character. So she did not feel as agrieved.


Moreover, if you recall, Geet agreed to marry Maan despite knowing she will have a hard life in the chawl only because she wanted Anwesha's happiness. So all along Anwesha's happiness meant a lot to her as she was quite close to the girl even before she became her sister in law. After she became her sister-in-law, Anwesha's happiness became even more paramount because she knew how much Maan himself loved his sister. She should have stopped Annie-Yash's plan or at least informed Maan about it but then she thought Anwesha had a right to seek her own brand of justice for what she has gone through.

Why did she herself not seek revenge against her bro? Because come to think of it, her bro actually did her good even though he did not set out to do so. How else would she have found a gem of a man like Maan? So though Arjun's intent was bad, the end result was good so she was willing to look beyond it all and accept the turns in her life as destiny, a destiny which worked in her favour.


Coming to Anwesha, she has been the spoilt,immature sister of Maan who had the misfortune of falling in love with the wrong man and not trusting her own brother to confide in him before taking that relationship to the next level. She made a horrible mistake and ended up making her brother and sister-in-law pay the price for it. If it had not been for her, Maan would have married Sameera. But would they have have all been happy? That is a big question mark. She was a catalyst in shaping the lives of four individuals - Maan, Geet, Dev and Sam - although she never intended to do this. Having made the mistake of sleeping with a guy before formal marriage she ended up getting pregnant. For fear of public humiliation she wanted to marry the guy in the hope that he will mend his ways once he realises the responsibilities of impending fatherhood. Alas, Arjun never changed. Anwesha paid a huge price for her error of judgment and her folly by losing her baby which itself is a severe blow to her. She was also weighed down by the guilt of what her acts had done to her father. Has she not suffered enough for it? All said and done she did not commit a crime, only made a serious mistake which boomeranged on her and her family.


Unlike Geet who is more forgiving, Anwesha wanted revenge to appease her own grief and disappointment. Moreover, Geet had found her happiness so did not think of revenge. Anwesha was still searching for happiness and in the absence of it revenge took over her. Yash offered to help her and she grabbed at it. I'm not justifying her actions but people are built differently and react to the same situation differently. That does not mean they are bad or vicious.



All is well that ends well. Loved all the characters, maan, geet, rano, sameera, dev, adi, pinky, venkat, manju, everybody and sad to let them go.

Looking for ward to the next journey.

I admire your patience and i congratulate you for the effort that you have put in in replying to personally every person who makes a comment here. That is truly amazing. A lot of time and effort on your part. 👏

Thanks Usha. The pleasure is all mine as it gives an outlet for my creative juices.


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I would modify the bold part to 'in my experience it doesn't work' , never is too strong word. But i did not want to change what i wrote originally. So left it like that.



Edited to add:


Lets not forget that Anwesha never had the privilege of being raised by a loving woman like Rano unlike Geet. Maan did a good job in raising her up but he cannot be a true substitute for a mother. This too would make a difference on how one reacts to situations, would it not?
Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

love it love it beautiful ending i hope yu come up with another amazing FF soonnnnnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

thanks Simi. Sorry, no plans in the near future to start anything anew.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Opti,

Thanks for the patient reply. I totally agree and if you had not pointed it out in the last updates, it would not have struck me to think about all the wrongs done to geet. She seemed more wronged and still overcame everything by her essential goodness but destiny rewarded her as well. Maan and geet were two good people and destiny brought them together.

Geet had the more difficult life and still came out of it shining without being dependent on other people or other people's sympathy etc. She charted her own path and used her capabilities and depended only on herself. So maan's and her self-respect complemented each other. that is what is admirable.

Edited by serialwatcher16 - 14 years ago

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